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this has got to be one of the most interesting spins on a twilight fanfic I have ever seen, and from what I've read, it isn't that bad. I highly recommend this if this is your first fanfic.
love it please keep writing don't stop please!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hello, from 2023 here. Love the story very much and want to see it continue but it looks like the Author has forgotten his password. I hope he/she is alright tho. If you ever come back, please continue this story cuz there are many who enjoy it. it is really sad, that a good story like this just stops abruptly. I wish you are well Author.
So far it’s an amzing book with a really thought out mc. The word building is pretty good but the way the mc progresses throughout the story makes it braw you in and think of what’s gonna happen next. I can’t wait for more chapters to be uploaded. If your looking for a good story to read with a original character that’s not to op and not some pushover then I highly recommend this book for you.
was going great at first, not so frequent updates but it was still happening so that's ok. But then everything just stopped, it's been 8 months since the last chapter and I doubt there will be any more which is sad. Other than that definitely a good short read
the idea of being accidentally thrown into the past when reincarnating has become a cliché... why not just start a new story? other than that, it's a pretty average story. it deserves a 3.5 but the update is totally inconsistent so 2.8 stars is the most it gets
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This story is really quite interesting, it is a twilight fan-fic but since it is set in 10000 BC its really its own self-contained story with mythological beings and such. really well done with long chapters and quite humorous dialogues from the MC's and side characters perspectives. If you have read the synopsis and didn't really like the twilight theme just forget about that as this is a story about the MC with a kind heart and maybe a 'bit' bloodthirsty that became a werebear living in 10000 BC until the actual story of twilight starts So join me and many others for the ride!!
after five months ur finally back PLEASE DONT DROP THIS AND DONT RUSH THIS this is godly in a way its godly lol im just going for the word count but know this novel is an extremely sweet dessert
I think it has a lot of potential and i enjoyed reading every chapter of it. could just wish it had more chapters. Hopefully it doesn’t get dropped.
don't drop.............................................. ..................................................................................
This is really good....I just hope it isn't dropped. This fanfic has length, good story and good descriptions. Perfect to read tbh. Anyone who just likes fanfics could easily get addicted to this.
Continue plz.................................................🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
The story idea is great. It has a lot of potential ahead. From what I've seen so far, I want to believe he's a dominated MC, and I like that too much. The descriptions and narrative are very good, the overall quality of the writing is amazing. It allows me to imagine everything logically without being too excessive with unnecessary detail. I sincerely hope you don't give up and that the MC is a true MC, an alpha predator! (I also look forward to some romance and kingdom building.) Peace and good luck, you are a good writer!
Sinceramente me está encantando la historia sobre todo la parte en la ej se convierte en el oso de cara corta ya que también es uno de mis animales favoritos incluyendo el entelodonte y el ienodonte, así que si planeas seguir con esta historia tendrás todo el apoyo de mi parte. Sigue así eres muy bueno
Just read the chapter it's good I Can't explain my happiness after finding a novel with a freaking good author i loved it you alternated between the mc and the caveman leader , also the discription of the fight between the mc and the two sabercats (hhhhh)was on point .... Keep it up have a nice day
Overall very nice and story with a novel fanfic writing but homeboy hasn't updated for years. I still return to check every month....Please come back🙏
this has got to be one of the most interesting spins on a twilight fanfic I have ever seen, and from what I've read, it isn't that bad. I highly recommend this if this is your first fanfic.
love it please keep writing don't stop please!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
hello, from 2023 here. Love the story very much and want to see it continue but it looks like the Author has forgotten his password. I hope he/she is alright tho. If you ever come back, please continue this story cuz there are many who enjoy it. it is really sad, that a good story like this just stops abruptly. I wish you are well Author.
So far it’s an amzing book with a really thought out mc. The word building is pretty good but the way the mc progresses throughout the story makes it braw you in and think of what’s gonna happen next. I can’t wait for more chapters to be uploaded. If your looking for a good story to read with a original character that’s not to op and not some pushover then I highly recommend this book for you.
was going great at first, not so frequent updates but it was still happening so that's ok. But then everything just stopped, it's been 8 months since the last chapter and I doubt there will be any more which is sad. Other than that definitely a good short read
the idea of being accidentally thrown into the past when reincarnating has become a cliché... why not just start a new story? other than that, it's a pretty average story. it deserves a 3.5 but the update is totally inconsistent so 2.8 stars is the most it gets
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This story is really quite interesting, it is a twilight fan-fic but since it is set in 10000 BC its really its own self-contained story with mythological beings and such. really well done with long chapters and quite humorous dialogues from the MC's and side characters perspectives. If you have read the synopsis and didn't really like the twilight theme just forget about that as this is a story about the MC with a kind heart and maybe a 'bit' bloodthirsty that became a werebear living in 10000 BC until the actual story of twilight starts So join me and many others for the ride!!
after five months ur finally back PLEASE DONT DROP THIS AND DONT RUSH THIS this is godly in a way its godly lol im just going for the word count but know this novel is an extremely sweet dessert
I think it has a lot of potential and i enjoyed reading every chapter of it. could just wish it had more chapters. Hopefully it doesn’t get dropped.
don't drop.............................................. ..................................................................................
This is really good....I just hope it isn't dropped. This fanfic has length, good story and good descriptions. Perfect to read tbh. Anyone who just likes fanfics could easily get addicted to this.
Continue plz.................................................🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
The story idea is great. It has a lot of potential ahead. From what I've seen so far, I want to believe he's a dominated MC, and I like that too much. The descriptions and narrative are very good, the overall quality of the writing is amazing. It allows me to imagine everything logically without being too excessive with unnecessary detail. I sincerely hope you don't give up and that the MC is a true MC, an alpha predator! (I also look forward to some romance and kingdom building.) Peace and good luck, you are a good writer!
Sinceramente me está encantando la historia sobre todo la parte en la ej se convierte en el oso de cara corta ya que también es uno de mis animales favoritos incluyendo el entelodonte y el ienodonte, así que si planeas seguir con esta historia tendrás todo el apoyo de mi parte. Sigue así eres muy bueno
Just read the chapter it's good I Can't explain my happiness after finding a novel with a freaking good author i loved it you alternated between the mc and the caveman leader , also the discription of the fight between the mc and the two sabercats (hhhhh)was on point .... Keep it up have a nice day
Overall very nice and story with a novel fanfic writing but homeboy hasn't updated for years. I still return to check every month....Please come back🙏