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Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!, I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's, I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!
You quit the novel???? Sad about that. I actually liked it. Gassed me up for an adventure, but just laid out the foundation and left. You only get 4 stars cuz you haven't released in two weeks.
Great novel. The point of views are always on point. Always indicating when POVs change. The explanations dont lack anything. All in all, these are the reasons why I ranked it so high.
It's not really bad, buuut, there's a lot of but. First, the writing is decent, not good but decent. Sadly the sentences are often written childishly making me wonder if the writer is a young ****. I don't know about the stability of updates but neither do I care, so I'll give 5 stars to this one to up the rating a little bit. I'll bring together the last three to finally say, the characters, their interaction, and pretty much everything else is strange and unnatural. All of it seems fake, especially when the Mc pull the plot armor out of his ass to make the story advance faster. In the end, some of you will like the story and I can understand why, it just wasn't made for me. So I'll give the rating I think it's worth. If you're reading my review and wondering if you should read the fanfic, the yes I think you should, just give it a try, it's not atrocious.
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Well, if nothing else, that was one of the better thought up backstories for the founding of the Revolutionary Army, Luffy’s mother and effort to link the MC to characters of Canon Cast
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nice fanfiction keep up the good work. You even post regularly like, nice work author san .
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Such A Drag, I Stand above all human clans, Bankai!!!!, I Will Take A Bite Of This Potato Chip An Eat It, I Will Be King Of The Pirate's, I Will Be The Hokage Believe it. Some Of My Favorite Anime Lines!!!
You quit the novel???? Sad about that. I actually liked it. Gassed me up for an adventure, but just laid out the foundation and left. You only get 4 stars cuz you haven't released in two weeks.
Great novel. The point of views are always on point. Always indicating when POVs change. The explanations dont lack anything. All in all, these are the reasons why I ranked it so high.
It's not really bad, buuut, there's a lot of but. First, the writing is decent, not good but decent. Sadly the sentences are often written childishly making me wonder if the writer is a young ****. I don't know about the stability of updates but neither do I care, so I'll give 5 stars to this one to up the rating a little bit. I'll bring together the last three to finally say, the characters, their interaction, and pretty much everything else is strange and unnatural. All of it seems fake, especially when the Mc pull the plot armor out of his ass to make the story advance faster. In the end, some of you will like the story and I can understand why, it just wasn't made for me. So I'll give the rating I think it's worth. If you're reading my review and wondering if you should read the fanfic, the yes I think you should, just give it a try, it's not atrocious.
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Well, if nothing else, that was one of the better thought up backstories for the founding of the Revolutionary Army, Luffy’s mother and effort to link the MC to characters of Canon Cast
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nice fanfiction keep up the good work. You even post regularly like, nice work author san .
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