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It's interesting, well in my case it is, needs a lil' bit improvement on some areas like there are parts when one would get confused and the grammar construction needs a little more improvement (or maybe it's just me cause I'm a bit critical on grammatical composition) but it's a nice novel and I think since it's just starting it'll only get better. Looking forward to next chapters ☺️
It's interesting, well in my case it is, needs a lil' bit improvement on some areas like there are parts when one would get confused and the grammar construction needs a little more improvement (or maybe it's just me cause I'm a bit critical on grammatical composition) but it's a nice novel and I think since it's just starting it'll only get better. Looking forward to next chapters ☺️