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Alice, Angel Of Mercy

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Meet John an everyday teen that went from having a normal life to being paralyzed and an orphan.
Now, without much hope left, he decides to risk it all to test the first deep dive system ever created. Accepting all the risks of plugging your brain into a computer just to walk and be normal again he gave his ok.
Now Locked into a world he can't escape from (in a girl character he made) John now called Alice, is left to figure out what is going on and why this world and its people are so real if it is simply a computer game.
In a world where everything is not as it seems will he be able to survive, love or even find a pair of pants?

The picture is from a Pin by Blanca Bernace and is not mine I just really like her work.
I work a ton of hours so updates will be sporadic. I am not doing this for cash so no donations will be requested or needed.
If you have suggestions or issues just post them and I will take a look :)

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Rebecca_Adams_6771

Really creative story line! I enjoy the humanity that comes out in the main character when he...well..i guess she...is speaking and telling the story from her point of view. I even giggled at a few spots, which to me, speaks mountains about how relatable the character and their emotions are. I also enjoy the cliffhangers or sneak peaks of, what I assume are upcoming characters or events, that are found near the end of some of the chapters. Very intrigued to find out where this goes!

4yr
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0_shinigami_0

Repost:: I am still reading but I think this book is wonderfully wrote. And the author put a great amount of time and detail into this and it shows! .

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4yr
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toasteroven1277

Great book! A must read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4yr
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homeofthelostqueen

PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP

3yr
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Willis8rock_S

This is one of the best books I have read on this App. The author actually takes time and makes a good and compelling story. The story of reincarnation people use on this app is Inept and unsatisfying. The way you write fixed that problem for me. I also like how there is very little grammer mistakes. Probably less than if I, a native english speaker, had wrote it. Overall I would say that at the time I wrote this, it is one of if not my favorite book on here.

4yr
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Kisara_Tokisaki

I'm starting to addicted to reread over and over I say author outdone them self [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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Ghost1645

Loving it so far mate, think its the first time ive seen a genderbent character act like they've changed genders and aint just a guy in a fukin skin suit

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4yr
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Prrrgadilly

It's a story about a transmigrated male becoming a female angel. It's realistic, believable, and refreshingly lacking of chauvinism. I find it funny and interesting and engaging. My biggest gripe is just inconsistency of updates, but the author was, and is, very upright and forthcoming about it, so I can deal with that.

3yr
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Tirell_Agarson

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I really enjoyed this story, and I must say that you are a very good writer. I was on the edge of my seat most of the time and I can't say that about most of the stories on this platform.

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Ashley_E_Beverly16

If you're reading this review and haven't read the book yet, read the book. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

3yr
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DaoistxtgDdT

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3yr
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Ken_Reader

A good book, balanced with the MC and good progress .

3yr
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DaoistxtgDdT

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3yr
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Firetrail

This story is underrated. I’ve power read this novel over the course of the last three days and I can safely say this is one of the better stories on this site. The world building at the start is really good, but that tappers off some once the MC settles into school but its started back up some in recent chapters. The only weak spot I’ve seen in this story so far is characterization, the MC obviously gets the most screentime but so far they don’t seem to have too many flaws. At one point they got arrogant and was caught braking the rules but we never really saw any characteristics that pointed to that behavior before or since, maybe I just missed them though. The side character have almost no development or screen time outside of brief mentions and a few scenes where they help the MC on occasion. Dispite these flaws thought I still find myself enjoying this story, the world has got a decent foundation and their’s plenty of political mystery left in the plot. I would highly recommend this book.

3yr
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Nana1960

Just found the book. like the story , read until 41. The lead is likable, isn't getting crazy about a guy or girl stupidly. Emotional maturity seems ok of this lead. The main issue is the updates! I did not realize the author only publish one chapter a month before I started!!!

3yr
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0_shinigami_0

Must make it 5.0 star rating

4yr
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bryang

I find this book to be well written with a good mix of humor and action. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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Evergreen_Autumn

Just finished chapter 2, and I have to say that the storytelling is really good. I did feel some issues with immersing myself into the story as there is a lack of punctuation, but it looks very promising!

4yr
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Chadrick

AN interesting story but you should add to the world a little. It's a little bland at the moment but it is only chapter 6 so you have time

4yr
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Chapter 86: Into the Great Divide 3 years ago

Âm lượng 1

  1. 1
    Prologue 4 years ago
  2. 2
    Making ALice 4 years ago
  3. 3
    Starting with a Bang 4 years ago
  4. 4
    Like a Ninja 4 years ago
  5. 5
    No Good Deed 4 years ago
  6. 6
    All Wrapped up 4 years ago
  7. 7
    A Day in a Life (skippable) 4 years ago
  8. 8
    Pressure 4 years ago
  9. 9
    Who's that Rapping 4 years ago
  10. 10
    A Prince, A Frog, A Damsel - part 1 4 years ago
  11. 11
    A Prince, A Frog, A Damsel part 2 4 years ago
  12. 12
    Handicapped 4 years ago
  13. 13
    Blender 4 years ago
  14. 14
    Found Wanting 4 years ago
  15. 15
    He Huffed and Puffed 4 years ago
  16. 16
    Place Your Bets 4 years ago
  17. 17
    Shrubs 4 years ago
  18. 18
    Flower Thieves Beware 4 years ago
  19. 19
    I Got Class 4 years ago
  20. 20
    Looking for Love (1of 2) 4 years ago
  21. 21
    In All the Wrong Places (2 of 2) 4 years ago
  22. 22
    Break a Leg 4 years ago
  23. 23
    Does This Count as an Evil Monolog? 4 years ago
  24. 24
    On the Job (skippable) 4 years ago
  25. 25
    Charmed I'm Sure 4 years ago
  26. 26
    As the Leaves Fall 4 years ago
  27. 27
    You Fought a What? 4 years ago
  28. 28
    Open Buffet 4 years ago
  29. 29
    Class is in Session 4 years ago
  30. 30
    Playing Doctor 4 years ago
  31. 31
    Picnic 4 years ago
  32. 32
    Aftermath 4 years ago
  33. 33
    Setting the Board 4 years ago
  34. 34
    Opening Moves 4 years ago
  35. 35
    Heartless 4 years ago
  36. 36
    No rest for ... 4 years ago
  37. 37
    Friends and Enemies 4 years ago
  38. 38
    School Life 4 years ago
  39. 39
    I Want My Lawyer 4 years ago
  40. 40
    It Begins 3 years ago
  41. 41
    The Rise of Zitler (part 1) 3 years ago
  42. 42
    The Rise of Zitler (part 2) 3 years ago
  43. 43
    The Rise of Zitler (part 3) 3 years ago
  44. 44
    The Rise of Zitler (part 4) 3 years ago
  45. 45
    Winning is such a Headache 3 years ago
  46. 46
    Super Duper Undies 3 years ago
  47. 47
    updated character sheet 3 years ago
  48. 48
    Marriage Talks 3 years ago
  49. 49
    Leg Day 3 years ago
  50. 50
    Lost and Found 3 years ago
  51. 51
    Things that go Bump in the Night 3 years ago
  52. 52
    When it Rains.... 3 years ago
  53. 53
    Cries in the Night 3 years ago
  54. 54
    I could feel his fingers wiggling inside me 3 years ago
  55. 55
    Indestructible? 3 years ago
  56. 56
    Branching Out 3 years ago
  57. 57
    Its Complicated 3 years ago
  58. 58
    Vibrations 3 years ago
  59. 59
    Trip 3 years ago
  60. 60
    Hero 3 years ago
  61. 61
    Making Plans 3 years ago
  62. 62
    Uncharted Territory *NSFW* 3 years ago
  63. 63
    20 Seedlings 3 years ago
  64. 64
    Guild 3 years ago
  65. 65
    Joining the Ranks 3 years ago
  66. 66
    Getting Lucky 3 years ago
  67. 67
    Field Test 3 years ago
  68. 68
    Tequila 3 years ago
  69. 69
    Sacrifices 3 years ago
  70. 70
    What are Friends for? 3 years ago
  71. 71
    Do I Know You? 3 years ago
  72. 72
    What Lies Beneath part 1 3 years ago
  73. 73
    What Lies Beneath part 2 & 3 3 years ago
  74. 74
    Fallen 3 years ago
  75. 75
    Next Book 3 years ago
  76. 76
    Book 2 - Prolog 3 years ago
  77. 77
    Book 2 - A Sleepless Night 3 years ago
  78. 78
    Book 2 - Heat 3 years ago
  79. 79
    Book 2 - Dreams 3 years ago
  80. 80
    Book 2 - Uninvited Guests 3 years ago
  81. 81
    Book 2 - Fade to Black 3 years ago
  82. 82
    Book 2 - Waking up 3 years ago
  83. 83
    Book 2 - Aftermath 3 years ago

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