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Great fanfic. Totally dope . The character design and plot development is also top notch . Hopefully waiting for more. Thank you.
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Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I was kind of hoping for something different so when it got to where Hestia was introduced and he wants to join her familia, I thought well here we go again so I quit. So manyfanfics always go that route and next was probably getting Hestia and Ain Wallenstein in his harem. Nothing against that I mean that's the normal formula for DanMachi fanfic, I just hoped this wouldn't be the norm. GL my dude.
Well, I liked the way the writing was, how smooth the events were, and the way the girls were gathered without making the situation look like forcing it, so you have my support.
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Hello author! I want to take permission to translate into Russian, and put your work on another site. Your work is the best! Top! I love and look forward to the release of chapters more often. ꉂ (ˊᗜˋ *) ♡. P. S. GrandAdmiralKizaru. P. S.S. The frequency of chapters would be released every day.)) Your work would break everyone. I didn't like the fact that the first time I managed to earn 1,000,000 valis. But I admit, some people are too lucky. So I closed my eyes to that. What can I say. Your work is the best for me. The main character is handsome, not like the hero from ENDLESS PATH: INFINITY COSMOS. There the main character, the freak and the chicks stick to him. Have you seen the cover of the novel? Here he is. BUEEEE. P. S. S. S. GOOD LUCK THE AUTHOR IN WRITING THE CONTINUED. MUSES! LIVES!
Keep up the good work, I love it so far! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
so far so good i'm enjoying it a lot and hope to see more so please don't drop!.......................................................................................................................................
I think it's nice. Better than the Haikyuu fanfic imo, mostly because sports don't tend to keep a wondering mind like a fantasy combat setting would. The author is really good, he or she doesnt rely on filler chapters to keep the illusion that the author hasn't hit an authors block. Filler chapters also aren't used as an intermission or to give a period before new information is dumped. Speaking of info dumps even tho currently there's only 12 chapters I don't think I've seen a crazy info dump that disguises itself as a chapter, instead of seen sprinkles of the information needed to actually understand the world in manageable amounts that don't clutter the story flow or immersion resulting in dissatisfaction that nothing happened and that you learned nothing important that you will remember.
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I only read until chapter 5 but I already know that it is very good it continues brother. v
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Its been amazing so far. No unnecessary fillers like training for 5 whole chapters. I have high expectations for this since its on par with the author's other work. Keep up the good work!!
Fucking amazing so far on par with your haiyukki book. This part is here because when you add a review it has to be more than fucking 140 words
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꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!
Great fanfic. Totally dope . The character design and plot development is also top notch . Hopefully waiting for more. Thank you.
Jamon ........................ ...... ...... .................. ..................... ................ .................................. ................... .......................... .................
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
I was kind of hoping for something different so when it got to where Hestia was introduced and he wants to join her familia, I thought well here we go again so I quit. So manyfanfics always go that route and next was probably getting Hestia and Ain Wallenstein in his harem. Nothing against that I mean that's the normal formula for DanMachi fanfic, I just hoped this wouldn't be the norm. GL my dude.
Well, I liked the way the writing was, how smooth the events were, and the way the girls were gathered without making the situation look like forcing it, so you have my support.
Good fanfic ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Hello author! I want to take permission to translate into Russian, and put your work on another site. Your work is the best! Top! I love and look forward to the release of chapters more often. ꉂ (ˊᗜˋ *) ♡. P. S. GrandAdmiralKizaru. P. S.S. The frequency of chapters would be released every day.)) Your work would break everyone. I didn't like the fact that the first time I managed to earn 1,000,000 valis. But I admit, some people are too lucky. So I closed my eyes to that. What can I say. Your work is the best for me. The main character is handsome, not like the hero from ENDLESS PATH: INFINITY COSMOS. There the main character, the freak and the chicks stick to him. Have you seen the cover of the novel? Here he is. BUEEEE. P. S. S. S. GOOD LUCK THE AUTHOR IN WRITING THE CONTINUED. MUSES! LIVES!
Keep up the good work, I love it so far! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
so far so good i'm enjoying it a lot and hope to see more so please don't drop!.......................................................................................................................................
I think it's nice. Better than the Haikyuu fanfic imo, mostly because sports don't tend to keep a wondering mind like a fantasy combat setting would. The author is really good, he or she doesnt rely on filler chapters to keep the illusion that the author hasn't hit an authors block. Filler chapters also aren't used as an intermission or to give a period before new information is dumped. Speaking of info dumps even tho currently there's only 12 chapters I don't think I've seen a crazy info dump that disguises itself as a chapter, instead of seen sprinkles of the information needed to actually understand the world in manageable amounts that don't clutter the story flow or immersion resulting in dissatisfaction that nothing happened and that you learned nothing important that you will remember.
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NICE......................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic Good fanfic .. very good fanfic
I only read until chapter 5 but I already know that it is very good it continues brother. v
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Its been amazing so far. No unnecessary fillers like training for 5 whole chapters. I have high expectations for this since its on par with the author's other work. Keep up the good work!!
Fucking amazing so far on par with your haiyukki book. This part is here because when you add a review it has to be more than fucking 140 words
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꠸ ꪖꪑ ꪻꫝꫀ ꫀ᥊ρ ꪮᠻ ꪑꪗ ᠻ꠸ꪀᧁꫀ᥅. ᭙ꫀ᥇ꪀꪮꪜꫀꪶ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪮᦔꪗ, ꪖꪀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ꠸ᦓ ꪑꪗ ᥇ꪶꪮꪮᦔ. ꠸ ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀᦔ ꪮꪜꫀ᥅ ꪖ ꪻꫝꪮꪊᦓꪖꪀᦔ ꪊᦓꫀꪶꫀᦓᦓ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꫝꪖꪜꫀ ᭙꠸ꪻꫝᦓꪻꪮꪮᦔ ρꪖ꠸ꪀ ꪻꪮ ᥴ᥅ꫀꪖꪻꫀ ꪑꪖꪀꪗ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ. ꪗꫀꪻ, ꪻꫝꪮᦓꫀ ᥅ꫀꪜ꠸ꫀ᭙ᦓ ᭙꠸ꪶꪶ ꪀꫀꪜꫀ᥅ ꫝꪮꪶᦔ ꪖꪀꪗꪻꫝ꠸ꪀᧁ. ᦓꪮ, ꪖᦓ ꠸ ρ᥅ꪖꪗ...... ꪊꪀꪶ꠸ꪑ꠸ꪻꫀᦔ ꫀ᥊ρ ᭙ꪮ᥅ᛕᦓ!!!