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The Adventures of Alex
Tác giả: ShadowKiller25
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This My First Time Writing a Novel. So Please help me out some time in comment section. And English Is Not My Primary Language so please go Easy on Me....
I don't no how to write a synopsis so you have to read chapter
See Yaa.......
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Yeah i know i m shameless giving 5stars to my own work is very shameless but ya know I don't give a damn what ya all think about me ok. Its just me.
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Chapter 8: Character Panel Sheet 1 years ago 
All I’m going to say is Satama powers really wait to ruin a story from the start systems tend to ruins story’s also A cheat like the sharingan in the very least takes time for it to mature and evolve the mc has to actually train I hate when a mc dousent have to struggle to become op unless it’s a almost complete slice of life fanfic but there are alrey to many of those fanfics 0 originality. You won’t grow if you continue this novel I beleve you can be a good author if you make the mc train build his foundation and build his strength up The fun of the journey disappears if there is no struggle I’ll give you a suggestion try and make a new novel and grow your mc try yu yu hokisho or dxd You could try making a soul eater fanfic So many options peaple chose to sacrifice originality Just to go with the crowd Please take my helpful criticism While I do sometimes read op mc novels that’s because there is nothing else I almost always am a little sad