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Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods [Completed]

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4.48 (128 số lượng người đọc)

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Xiao Yan, high-school boy from Earth, got killed by a truck.
Due to him firmly believing that being accidentally killed by a truck would send someone reincarnating in an other World, the God of Trucks decided to grant him his wish and sent him in his favorite World, Tales of Demons and Gods.

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I would like to write my own story.
But I don’t have the skills for it, so I’m starting with this fan-fiction to train a little.
Please, leave some reviews and comments on what you like, what you don’t like or what to do to improve myself, thanks.

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I won’t make an empty promise about a fixed number of chapters but it's the first time I write something, so don’t expect too much xD

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Wise_Snail

That story is so awesome! The author must be a genius! If I was a girl I would fall in love with him! (It's definitely not the author speaking) I'll just say that I won't drop this fanfic as I'm one of the die-hard fans of TDG. I know that it's really annoying having dozens of fanfics about our favorite WN and nearly all of them dropped while still in the Tiny World. There's three who managed to step in the Draconic Ruins Realm. Two of them "ended" but in my point of view they were no longer fanfics of TDG by that time. Anyway, I'll repeat myself, I won't drop this fanfic!

4yr
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Henki
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I read nearly all of the TDG fanfics and in my point of view, this one is at the very least in the top 3. Pros: - There is no copy-pasting Finally an Author who when writing some events of the original (like Nie Li’s bet or the talk with Xiao Ning’er in the Training Grounds) didn’t simply copy-paste. Here he either made a summary or used his own words. - There are Butterfly effects The actions of the new MC do have some effects on his new world. I got tired of the fanfics who simply followed the original timeline as if they were clearing the stages of a game, not caring about how the past events should impact the new ones. - Character development Be it the MC or those close to him, they grow from the events and their personalities aren’t fixed. - Original and fun Be it the “face” of the God, the way the MC/his girlfriends deal with Shen Yue, or some of Xiao Yan’s shameless inner thoughts, I find all of it really refreshing. - The MC’s mother, Chen Yin You’ll understand when you read it :) Cons: - At the beginning, the MC gives cultivation techniques to some people (His parents, one uncle, Xiao Ning’er, her father, Ye Ziyun, 5 people from her family, 2 Elders of the Alchemist Association, Yang Xin and Gu Yan) He gave some more later, but at that time he can already defend himself against Legend Ranks so I won’t talk about it. I started reading this fanfic a few days after the start, and I can tell you that this was the most controversial choice of the author. Some readers found that it was stupid of the MC, wanting to enslave the people before trusting them. Personally, I don’t think that it’s a problem and I think that those who read “Library of Heaven’s Path” would think the same. That artifact allows the MC to see through anyone, if they weren’t trustworthy and were going to betray him, he would know it. And it’s not like some of those people were from the Dark Guild or the Sacred Family. Anyway, that was the thing that most complaints were about. - The relationships are rushed. The author said that it was a choice since he was writing for the first time, wanting to train his writing skills and didn’t want to put too much fillers. There might be more negative points for other people, but hey, it’s just a fanfic and the quality is even better than some premium novels. That’s enough for me to be a bit biased xD

4yr
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Adrianix1234

To be honest it had a great start, the story was good, characters and everything feels real, wishes are good, but then suddenly everything changed at chapter 61-62 so basically mc “killed” Nie li, but the truth is that he only deleted his memories, but as you know people with amnesia are still alive, so what does he do? He made him a “clone” giving him all his memories, i wouldn’t be so mad about it but suddenly Nie li (clone) wants to flirt with Yang Xin... you know were this is going right? Mc alredy has Ye Ziyun and Xiao Ninger as fiances and mc for some stupid reason made the promise that he won’t add more people to his harem... (i wouldnt be mad if it was true that like he said was for love but is obviously not for his idea) but obviously as a reader we thought that it would be the tpical were the love interest would try to convince the fiance to join mc harem, but he suddenly mc gome with the great idea to make clones of himself (that basically are are others people body and souls with his memories) to take the waifus for him, because he can’t break the promise... This left me with a feeling of NTR so strong i don’t want to keep reading. he probably won’t change it because he has advanced chapters in patreon and chapter 69 (nice) is supposed to be lemon between Nie Li x Yang Xin, bro if mc wants waifus be a man and not make “clones”... the worst part is that the story was extremely good and now i have to drop it

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4yr
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EmbarrassedEdge

I don't Review alot since i reached lvl 6 and came to conclusion that review system is utter sh#t. Ignore the stars I rated. Theys are meaningless for fanfics anyways. Now the rant is over. Now to the problems I felt after reading. The MC has library of heavens path, and to make money he copies Nie li's idea. He could have done anything but no he literally tried to copy him. He keeps speaking sh#t about Nie li and how he doesn't need him, and literally the next chapter he's planning to get his knowledge. I got no problem with whatever girls he's trying to get. Like it's a fanfiction, most of them is about wish fulfilment. I guess good luck with the book and I'll come back and give it a try again after 20-30 more chapters have been uploaded.

4yr
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Ryofu
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This fanfic was good until the chapter 61. From there the MC start to duplicate his memory in new bodies, that don't look like the MC, to create clone of himself, it destroyed the story completely. Then the clone of the MC then start to go after other women since the MC himself swore to stay with only Ye Ziyun and Xiao Ning'er. The MC is breaking his vow and cheating on them by playing innocent since "its not him" despite being his own mind and himself that choose the women they go after.

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4yr
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Dragonia_101

its good story. Author even structured a good plot yet there's one major mistake. Main character is like u help me here take this cultivation technique to help u reach legend. I just known u and u helped me, here take this and u will reach legend. MC character design is too messed up and messes up the plot author created otherwise its a good story.

4yr
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DataMonarch

Transmigrated in Tales of Demons and Gods? No. More like, “Philanthropy in Tales of Demons and Gods”! Cause all the MC does is give things away every chapter like he some kind of Mr.Beast of Glory City. Wasted wishes on things he could’ve gotten for free. Then theres the whole Clone thing, where he’s letting his clone date other women... The writing quality is good and theres plenty of chapters to binge, but I dont believe its worth it to invest any time or effort into reading as it is a very frustrating and lackluster story. Would benefit from a complete overhaul and rework.

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4yr
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aonir
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Mr. Author, please keep on writing and don't listen to the haters. If I don't like a story, I simply stop reading it. I won't spend my time checking the said story to see if the review I made was still here or not. Like seriously, how do you know your review was deleted if you dropped the story? Don't you have anything better to do in your life? They're just hopeless people seeking attention, don't mind them...

4yr
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Xumit
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This was a good TDG fanfic that I enjoyed reading until the disaster in chapter 63. Those messy clones and stuff gives me a really creepy NTR feeling. It takes a lot of effort to write something good but only a single mistake can be quite disastrous. This fanfic is the best example of it. I can only suggest the author to think about romance and harem development quite thoroughly before introducing anything like this in his future novels. Don't ever step into the NTR trap, even if it is a little bit suggesting. Anyway, thanks for the work until chapter 63, I really enjoyed it till then.

4yr
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Nihil_Heart

I like this. It's a good read and it doesn't make me grumble like the other TDG fics I've read. It isn't perfect but really, where can you find a novel that fits to everyone's taste? Well, I appreciate this very much at least, so thanks to the Author for making this.

4yr
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teachhhh

This story is amazing, i don't way poeple are pissed about giving away a few techniques that are not a threat to the mc when there is a beast horde on the way

4yr
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MightyDick

it was a good start i read up to chap 69. and then i drop because of the clone. he made ni lie to be his clone and have relation with other girls because he is "LOYAL" to ninger and ziyun. overall i think the story is good if you are okay with clone something. enjoy your ride guys peace!!! pls author dont delete this so other that hate clones can prevent wasting and to be disappoint later and drop.

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4yr
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Syahrul_Azhar

Nice story! Hmmm...🤔 Wise_Snail.... Are you appearently the brother of Mad_Snail? Or your enlightned by Mad_Snail? I dont really care because i love your story, but. Dont You Ever Following The Path of Mad_Snail! I mean come on! 1month/chapter! I love the original novel, its even my first chinese novel! But its driven me crazy when Mad_Snail release new chapter once a month And i hope you not did that Mr. Author

4yr
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KingRapha

Honestly i like this TDG but after the clone think i goes downhill directly and stopped reading it but did not delete it in my library hoping the clone saga will end soon but after checking after 62 i think most of the chapters are his clones ( i mean he has others clones cause of the title i didnt read it thou) im still not deleting this i think im gonna check it again after he finish it. The promise of this is so big im just disappointed. Sigh

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4yr
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Januune

Ok its a good Fanfic if i have to say its one of the best of TDG fanfics i won't think its lie but its has only one problem The author made it haste The story development is very poor but anything else is very good

4yr
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Bala_Prakash

The author is awesome!! the story's progression and its narrations are great , i like it very much😊😍🤗 author don't drop the novel okay????

4yr
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Sculp
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are there any romance in the novel?........................................................................................................................................................................................

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4yr
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PRiMoRiDiaL

I WAS ENJOYING IT SO MUCH EVEN THOUGH SOME WERE NOT SO DETAILED UNTIL THE AUTHOR JUST DROO THE BOMB ABOUT HIM MAKING CLONES TO COURT THE GIRLS THAT HE COULDN'T GET CAUSE HE PROMISED TO ONLY GET TWO. ITS PRETTY STUPID FOR IT AND IT RUINED EVERYTHING NOW IM DROPPING IT BYE

1yr
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Sizzin

I decided to drop this story at chapter 70. I just can't find the pleasure to keep reading it anymore. I liked the fact that the MC gave his family and friends resources so they could get stronger. I really dislike when only the MC keeps on getting stronger even when he clearly can help those he love/trust. But... it really was a little too much. Reading this fanfic reminded me of when I play Tale of Immortal with Cheat Engine. I create a super overpowered sect by giving everyone cultivation items I duplicated. It's funny actually, when you're the one doing. Not so much when you're reading about someone else doing. I don't mind the clone part, though I believe they were badly used. It really looked like they were only created for the sake of being with a girl the MC wanted to be with but wouldn't because he swore he wouldn't have more than two wives. ... However, with only the two points above, I could still try to finish the story and give about a 3.5~4 rating. Now onto the real reason why I gave so low a rating. I am a sucker for character interaction. 2.5D~3D characters, living people, interacting with the world. And unfortunately, all I found in this fanfic were NPCs that could only listen to what the MC wanted. Seriously. There's hardly any dialogue, there're only orders from the MC towards someone else. Almost every interaction was like: MC - "Hey, take this, do that." Named NPC - "Ok" MC goes to another NPC. Repeat. The whole universe revolved around the MC. It felt like he was playing with dolls. "Today I'm going to dress up this doll, and I'm going to throw that other one in the trash." I can't say it was bad for a first story, though. Being a aspiring author myself, I understand the challenge of writing something good. One of the main reasons I never posted any story I wrote. This is just not my style of narrative. It started really good, but it got caught up in a bad loop. Nevertheless, thank you for the ride. It was good while it lasted, honestly.

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2yr
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Shadowwolfblade

Awesome story i love it. Everyone should read it atleast once. Wont say anything that would be spoiling. All i cam say is i hope he could save nie li's teacher..

4yr
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Chapter 144: 144 – Author's thoughts 3 years ago

Âm lượng 1 : Tiny World

  1. 1
    001 - Reincarnate 1/3 4 years ago
  2. 2
    002 - Reincarnate 2/3 4 years ago
  3. 3
    003 - Reincarnate 3/3 4 years ago
  4. 4
    004 - Xiao Ning'er 4 years ago
  5. 5
    005 - Daoyin Technique 4 years ago
  6. 6
    006 - Parents 4 years ago
  7. 7
    007 - Goddess's breakfast 4 years ago
  8. 8
    008 - First kiss 4 years ago
  9. 9
    009 - First victory 4 years ago
  10. 10
    010 - Breakthrough 4 years ago
  11. 11
    011 - Ye Ziyun 4 years ago
  12. 12
    012 - First gift 4 years ago
  13. 13
    013 - Alchemist Association 4 years ago
  14. 14
    014 - Two projects 4 years ago
  15. 15
    015 - Inscriptionist Association 4 years ago
  16. 16
    016 - Inscription Scrolls 4 years ago
  17. 17
    017 - Kong Ming's fake tomb 4 years ago
  18. 18
    018 - Void-form 4 years ago
  19. 19
    019 - Thriller 4 years ago
  20. 20
    020 - Yang Xin's visit 4 years ago
  21. 21
    021 - Completely cured 4 years ago
  22. 22
    022 - Legend Rank blood 4 years ago
  23. 23
    023 - Heavenly Fate Plateau 4 years ago
  24. 24
    024 - Abyss Prison Realm 4 years ago
  25. 25
    025 - Lonely 4 years ago
  26. 26
    026 - Renewed friendship 4 years ago
  27. 27
    027 - Black Gold Portal 4 years ago
  28. 28
    028 - Caltrop Pills 4 years ago
  29. 29
    029 - First time 4 years ago
  30. 30
    030 - Delivery 4 years ago
  31. 31
    031 - Third ring 4 years ago
  32. 32
    032 - Fraudster Family 4 years ago
  33. 33
    033 - Divine Family 4 years ago
  34. 34
    034 - Black Pearl 4 years ago
  35. 35
    035 - Daughters-in-law 4 years ago
  36. 36
    036 - Talk between girls 4 years ago
  37. 37
    037 - Beating 4 years ago
  38. 38
    038 - Shattered soul of another life 4 years ago
  39. 39
    039 – Date with Ye Ziyun 4 years ago
  40. 40
    040 – Dealing with Ye Han 4 years ago
  41. 41
    041 – Engagement 4 years ago
  42. 42
    042 – Act 4 years ago
  43. 43
    043 – Date with Xiao Ning'er 4 years ago
  44. 44
    044 – Temporal Demon Spirit Book 4 years ago
  45. 45
    045 – Introduction 4 years ago
  46. 46
    046 – Contribution 4 years ago
  47. 47
    047 – Ye Sheng 4 years ago
  48. 48
    048 – Xiao Xue 4 years ago
  49. 49
    049 – Doubts 4 years ago
  50. 50
    050 – Debt 4 years ago
  51. 51
    051 – Nether Realm 4 years ago
  52. 52
    052 – Right-hand man 4 years ago
  53. 53
    053 – Silver Winged Family 4 years ago
  54. 54
    054 – Red Jade Family 4 years ago
  55. 55
    055 – Divine Flames Family 4 years ago
  56. 56
    056 – Stealing 4 years ago
  57. 57
    057 – Cunning 4 years ago
  58. 58
    058 – Close 4 years ago
  59. 59
    059 – Ye Yan 4 years ago
  60. 60
    060 – Spiritual God 4 years ago
  61. 61
    061 – Life Spiritual God 4 years ago
  62. 62
    062 – Exchange 4 years ago
  63. 63
    063 – Meeting the City Lord 4 years ago
  64. 64
    064 – Light Spiritual God 4 years ago
  65. 65
    065 – Arrangements 4 years ago
  66. 66
    066 – Lin Feng 4 years ago
  67. 67
    067 – Exodus 4 years ago
  68. 68
    068 – Yu Yang 4 years ago
  69. 69
    069 – A clone's life - 01 - Nie Li - 01 4 years ago
  70. 70
    070 – A clone's life - 02 - Nie Li - 02 4 years ago
  71. 71
    071 – A clone's life - 03 - Nie Li - 03 4 years ago
  72. 72
    072 – A clone's life - 04 - Nie Li - 04 4 years ago
  73. 73
    073 – A clone's life - 05 - Yu Yang - 01 4 years ago
  74. 74
    074 – Yun Yang, Xiao Yang and Xiao Yin 4 years ago
  75. 75
    075 – Swords 4 years ago
  76. 76
    076 – Training 4 years ago
  77. 77
    077 – Man talk 4 years ago
  78. 78
    078 – A clone's life - 06 - Nie Li - 05 4 years ago
  79. 79
    079 – A clone's life - 07 - Nie Li - 06 4 years ago
  80. 80
    080 – A clone's life - 08 - Yu Yang - 02 4 years ago
  81. 81
    081 – A clone's life - 09 - Yun Yang - 01 4 years ago
  82. 82
    082 – A clone's life - 10 - Yun Yang - 02 4 years ago
  83. 83
    083 – A clone's life - 11 - Yun Yang - 03 4 years ago
  84. 84
    084 – A clone's life - 12 - Huyan Yang - 01 4 years ago
  85. 85
    085 – A clone's life - 13 - Huyan Yang - 02 4 years ago
  86. 86
    086 – A clone's life - 14 - Huyan Yang - 03 4 years ago
  87. 87
    087 – Too late 4 years ago
  88. 88
    088 – Original 4 years ago
  89. 89
    089 – Cool 4 years ago
  90. 90
    090 – Demon Lord 4 years ago
  91. 91
    091 – Xiao Tian 4 years ago
  92. 92
    092 – A clone's life - 15 - Nie Li - 07 4 years ago
  93. 93
    093 – A clone's life - 16 - Nie Li - 08 4 years ago
  94. 94
    094 – A clone's life - 17 - Yu Yang - 03 4 years ago
  95. 95
    095 – Dragon Knight 4 years ago
  96. 96
    096 – Celestial Qilin 4 years ago
  97. 97
    097 – Xiao Yu 4 years ago
  98. 98
    098 – A clone's life - 18 - Yun Yang - 04 4 years ago
  99. 99
    099 – A clone's life - 19 - Huyan Yang - 04 4 years ago
  100. 100
    100 – A clone's life - 20 - Xue Yang - 01 4 years ago
  101. 101
    101 – A clone's life - 21 - Xiao Tian - 01 4 years ago
  102. 102
    102 – Demon City 4 years ago
  103. 103
    103 – White City 4 years ago
  104. 104
    104 – A clone's life - 22 - Hua Yan - 01 4 years ago
  105. 105
    105 – A clone's life - 23 - Hua Yan - 02 4 years ago
  106. 106
    106 – Last clones 4 years ago
  107. 107
    107 – Departure 4 years ago

Âm lượng 2 : Draconic Ruins Realm

  1. 108
    108 – Skysoul Institute 4 years ago
  2. 109
    109 – How to deal with perverts 4 years ago
  3. 110
    110 – Dual Cultivation? 4 years ago
  4. 111
    111 – Venerable Redsoul 4 years ago
  5. 112
    112 – Saint Soul Grounds 4 years ago
  6. 113
    113 – Ghastly Ruins 4 years ago
  7. 114
    114 – Business 4 years ago
  8. 115
    115 – Battle 4 years ago
  9. 116
    116 – Soul seal 4 years ago
  10. 117
    117 – A clone's life - 24 - Long Yan - 01 4 years ago
  11. 118
    118 – Heavenly Note Dew 4 years ago
  12. 119
    119 – A clone's life - 25 - Gu Yan - 01 4 years ago
  13. 120
    120 – A clone's life - 26 - Gu Yan - 02 4 years ago
  14. 121
    121 – Oldest Deity Root 4 years ago
  15. 122
    122 – Hierarch Ming Fei 4 years ago
  16. 123
    123 – A clone's life - 27 - Long Yan - 02 4 years ago
  17. 124
    124 – A clone's life - 28 - Long Yan - 03 4 years ago
  18. 125
    125 – A clone's life - 29 - Long Yan - 04 4 years ago
  19. 126
    126 – Void Illusionary Divine Palace 4 years ago
  20. 127
    127 – Six Months later 4 years ago
  21. 128
    128 – A clone's life - 30 - Wang Yan - 01 4 years ago
  22. 129
    129 – A clone's life - 31 - Gu Yan - 03 4 years ago
  23. 130
    130 – A clone's life - 32 - Gu Yan - 04 4 years ago
  24. 131
    131 – A clone's life - 33 - Huang Yan - 01 4 years ago
  25. 132
    132 – A clone's life - 34 - Long Yan - 05 4 years ago
  26. 133
    133 – Supreme Puppet Master’s Stone 4 years ago
  27. 134
    134 – Sky Origin Divine Clan 4 years ago
  28. 135
    135 – Gu Bei's time 4 years ago
  29. 136
    136 – First-in-line successors 4 years ago
  30. 137
    137 – A clone's life - 35 - Xiao Yin - 01 4 years ago
  31. 138
    138 – A clone's life - 36 - Huang Yan - 02 4 years ago
  32. 139
    139 – Emperor Tian Yuan 4 years ago
  33. 140
    140 – Gu Heng's end 4 years ago
  34. 141
    141 – A clone's life - 37 - Gu Yan - 05 3 years ago
  35. 142
    142 – Three Demon Sects 3 years ago
  36. 143
    143 – Sage Emperor 3 years ago
  37. 144
    144 – Author's thoughts 3 years ago

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