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Un fanfic muy bueno debo decir, el mejor de Shinmai que he visto hasta ahora. Por favor continúalo, necesito saber como continua esta historia
is it NTr cause i dont want basara to touch any of issei's girl and i dont want issei to touch any of vasara's girl . .. my review is not legit i just did that to ask my question.. .i will read it after your answer
Author, I want to know one thing to start reading it, is Sapphire Toujou also in the harem?--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Finally!!!! I was waiting a long time for a good combination of DxD and Shinmai Maou. Please don't stop making this story since you really know how to make a good Novel.
A great fanfic, it is to be expected of the hikaru right, summarizing so far chapter 80, where he joined perfectly dxd with shinmai. Only criticism is that it makes more than a month without launching,(I think it stopped for other works) but itself if it continues so the work can become one of the main fanfic of dxd, which is a universe that I love very much, but is not very well used. Just hope mc doesn't get quick op to have good fights and that he has lots of chaps. Mt obg! (I used google translator)
Muy buena la historia pero no me gusta que toca que esperar un mes para un capítulo no me gusta por eso 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒muy demorado un capítulo para subir
The fanfic, overall is great and I have no problem over it, what I think I dislike or not fit my cup of water is how the fanfic MC is being in the world, but the original MC is deleted (like in this fanfic) or discarded (like aki*an fanfic) fyi what I personally like is fanfic MC is there but not delete/discarded original MC in any way, but what I like is the mc just "shifted" like fanfic with Kosuke uruhara as the MC in DxD verse. I hope who read this understand what I'm wrote here 🤣 and for author I like this fanfic and I don't have problem with it. it's just like when you reading a NTR doujin, others maybe don't like NTR like all kind of NTR, some maybe like netorare, but my taste is netorase
This is a good story and my problems with it come down to personal taste, that said anyone reading this review should read this fanfic for themselves and see if they like it. The thing I have an issue with is the amount of internal monolog/exposition. One character would say to another "Good morning how are you?" and we spend the rest of the chapter in someone's head reading about their life story before they go off on a tangent about how some races are both similar and different. Some people are fine with this because it gives them a better understanding of how the characters think. I however feel most of it is unnecessary and prefer the show don't tell approach. It also slows the pacing of the story way to much. I've been reading it in batches of 10-15 chapters in order to get the feeling that the plot is moving whenever I do sit down and read it. Now with all that being said I'm still reading this story because it's good and I like it, the near constant internal monolog just slows the story down to much for me to give anything more than 3 stars.
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Debo decir que Hikaru Genji es de los mejores escritores en mi opinión, me encanta SHK y ahora está es otra de mis obras favoritas. Espero que sigas con el gran trabajo y gracias por esta increíble obra.
Muy buena la historia sigue así no hay historia shimao no testamen solo dos en web novel y las de más historia de este anime hay que pagar en Patreon y eso es molesto si van publicar la historia y solo que a mitad de camino toca que leer el capítulo en Patreon con dinero entonces publicar la historia desde el principio con dinero es molesto sigue con tu historia es muy buena no eres como los demás que hay pagar un capítulo para ver en la mitad de la historia shimao no testamen
It's not really a bad story, but I really don't like how Basara is portayed here. Also the updates... 4 months and 40 chaps, and they are not even large chapters. the story so far bearly covers Asia rescue....
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I really like your idea of joining these two novels... in fact it was a wonderful idea and I support you to continue it until its end. Tenía que llenar los demás caracteres así que bueno.
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it was one of the best FF I've ever read, I liked each volume, but it's a shame that there won't be more chapters, I'm sad that I won't see the end of this story because it was really good, I don't even know if you'll see this review, but if so , I would like you to Please give this ff a chance again, it was one of the best I've ever read!
Un fanfic muy bueno debo decir, el mejor de Shinmai que he visto hasta ahora. Por favor continúalo, necesito saber como continua esta historia
is it NTr cause i dont want basara to touch any of issei's girl and i dont want issei to touch any of vasara's girl . .. my review is not legit i just did that to ask my question.. .i will read it after your answer
Author, I want to know one thing to start reading it, is Sapphire Toujou also in the harem?--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Finally!!!! I was waiting a long time for a good combination of DxD and Shinmai Maou. Please don't stop making this story since you really know how to make a good Novel.
A great fanfic, it is to be expected of the hikaru right, summarizing so far chapter 80, where he joined perfectly dxd with shinmai. Only criticism is that it makes more than a month without launching,(I think it stopped for other works) but itself if it continues so the work can become one of the main fanfic of dxd, which is a universe that I love very much, but is not very well used. Just hope mc doesn't get quick op to have good fights and that he has lots of chaps. Mt obg! (I used google translator)
Muy buena la historia pero no me gusta que toca que esperar un mes para un capítulo no me gusta por eso 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒muy demorado un capítulo para subir
The fanfic, overall is great and I have no problem over it, what I think I dislike or not fit my cup of water is how the fanfic MC is being in the world, but the original MC is deleted (like in this fanfic) or discarded (like aki*an fanfic) fyi what I personally like is fanfic MC is there but not delete/discarded original MC in any way, but what I like is the mc just "shifted" like fanfic with Kosuke uruhara as the MC in DxD verse. I hope who read this understand what I'm wrote here 🤣 and for author I like this fanfic and I don't have problem with it. it's just like when you reading a NTR doujin, others maybe don't like NTR like all kind of NTR, some maybe like netorare, but my taste is netorase
This is a good story and my problems with it come down to personal taste, that said anyone reading this review should read this fanfic for themselves and see if they like it. The thing I have an issue with is the amount of internal monolog/exposition. One character would say to another "Good morning how are you?" and we spend the rest of the chapter in someone's head reading about their life story before they go off on a tangent about how some races are both similar and different. Some people are fine with this because it gives them a better understanding of how the characters think. I however feel most of it is unnecessary and prefer the show don't tell approach. It also slows the pacing of the story way to much. I've been reading it in batches of 10-15 chapters in order to get the feeling that the plot is moving whenever I do sit down and read it. Now with all that being said I'm still reading this story because it's good and I like it, the near constant internal monolog just slows the story down to much for me to give anything more than 3 stars.
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Great story ❤️ it . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Debo decir que Hikaru Genji es de los mejores escritores en mi opinión, me encanta SHK y ahora está es otra de mis obras favoritas. Espero que sigas con el gran trabajo y gracias por esta increíble obra.
Muy buena la historia sigue así no hay historia shimao no testamen solo dos en web novel y las de más historia de este anime hay que pagar en Patreon y eso es molesto si van publicar la historia y solo que a mitad de camino toca que leer el capítulo en Patreon con dinero entonces publicar la historia desde el principio con dinero es molesto sigue con tu historia es muy buena no eres como los demás que hay pagar un capítulo para ver en la mitad de la historia shimao no testamen
It's not really a bad story, but I really don't like how Basara is portayed here. Also the updates... 4 months and 40 chaps, and they are not even large chapters. the story so far bearly covers Asia rescue....
Great And need more chapter .................................................................................................................
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I really like your idea of joining these two novels... in fact it was a wonderful idea and I support you to continue it until its end. Tenía que llenar los demás caracteres así que bueno.
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it was one of the best FF I've ever read, I liked each volume, but it's a shame that there won't be more chapters, I'm sad that I won't see the end of this story because it was really good, I don't even know if you'll see this review, but if so , I would like you to Please give this ff a chance again, it was one of the best I've ever read!