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Truly an excellent story with great grammar, perfect clarity, superb development and boundless word choice. The narration works simply fantastic, it floats like a butterfly and delivers like a bee. That coupled with the amazingly designed cover picture made by God RISE10 is just, muah! I feel like this fanfic should be even more popular and that the author should always stay popular! I wish the author all the luck and power i can wish.
Dios este fanfic es verdaderamente excelente 😉👌🏻🙌🏻 la gramática la traducción y la narración son espectaculares demasiado fluido 🤙🏻 el desarrollo de la historia es fantástica y se siente natural, el desarrollo del carácter de los personajes es natural en especial el de Naruto que en este caso es más realista y satisfactorio propio de un verdadero MC; Personalmente me hubiera gustado que siguiera la historia ya que tiene potencial para más, aún así muchas gracias por esta obra maestra 🙏🏻 recomendado 100%
when will a Naruto fanfiction have anyone else besides Hinata as his wife? it made no sense in the original and yet people still force it in their fanfiction only cause "canon" and it also feels forced and just bad in fanfics😂
it's alright i guess. Though i stopped reading it between his fight with gaara as i was getting annoyed
Awesome, I couldn't believe it. Naruto became a God, except that he was kicked around in the original timeline.
One of the best fanfic. The character develpment was good and I am happy that writer brought tsunadexjiriya . Overall everything was good....................
This is a good one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story didn’t have any plot holes and was as smooth as possible. The Novel showed Naruto in a new and a very good way. It was a very nice read. Multiverse travel was a bit extra I think. It was not necessary. Good luck to the Author.
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One of the first naruto ffs I read. Very good book, I can only recommend!:) book has also good grammar. **** 140 words condition for review.
TIDAK BURUK DAN TIDAK TERLALU BAIK. CERITA MIRIP KANON ASLI KECUALI KARAKTER MC YANG BERBEDA. PENGEMBANGAN CERITA KURANG MENARIK. YANG BAGUS KEKUATAN MC YANG OP TANPA BERBELIT BELIT
in start it was good but character development is worst. you said naruto is kind of genius and has iq greater than adults but he always acts like a brat . i mean ok if he hates hizuzen but man minato sealed kyuubi inside him for village sake and naruto is disgusted for that . then llets say he wanted parental love and he was treated like shit so he hated him for that ok let me tell you one thing tail beasts are regarded as weapons since ancient times for fucking human thinking and it was passed on from generation to generation that tail beast are dangerous . and now kurama attacks village and he starts iits iill spree and u blame minato from stopping him from that by sealing him that was only option for him he was not hashirama and kurama trusted naruto just like that man what the **** he has fucking hatred stored for fucking thousand years and he became friend just like that wtf in origionals it took several years for kurama to trust naruto a human because of his easy going idiotic mature behaviour for all living beings and he became friend of 4-5 year naruto just like that wow and naruto is genius and intelligent than adults then why he always find a way to blame others if want to make anti hero killer fanfic iits k just accept reality of shinobi world that its ok to kill to get personal gain but dont make a super smart boy a idiot brat
I am not gonna write a long review so all I will say is that this is a really good ff, and is easily in my top 5 fav naruto fics that I have read so far.
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Wow I've read the entire book great fanfic I like that Naruto wasn't so immature and annoying would've prefered if he only had hinata tho also the righting quality was very good a few mistakes but no ones perfect :) I loved the teamwork would've preferred more training tho and especially the training of his sage mode anyway thx for the book author I enjoyed it I'll read your other one too😊
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This novel deserve better support from the reader. Personally, i really like this novel for the solid story. Author, you are AWESOME. Hope u will publish another story.
Side chapter boisss!!!!!! Really glad that your not done with this tho. ......…🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Thank you so much for completing this, you're of the rare one that stuck with his work right until the end! Cheers 🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠
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Why not just called him Menma? loves that version of Naruto! I have yet to read the story, hope it'll be a good one considering all these positive reviews.
Hey these story is the best naruto fanfic that i read so far and i love it , please keep making a fanfic cause you have a talent to so ❤️👏keep it up 😊 Godbless you
I was Planning on Reading a Unique Naruto Fanfic, After Seeing the Rating. I Had a Huge Expectation for this. Unfortunately. I Was Extremely Dissapointed with Many Things Such as Naruto is Still Hated Whatever he did. Almost all Females FanGirling Sasuke, He is Talented. But Somehow. Not Talented?
Good, I have to thank author for writing such a good fanfic. If you like naruto and don't really like his personality and you know the 3rd hokage, danzo, etc. ;) ;) this fanfic is yours to read
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The famous author shameless 5 star review here! I'll tell you the basics: Naruto starts off with 1 year old and he already has the capability of thinking, not clearly but could walk, talk and think properly. The entire Village hated him and basically tortured him over three entire years - Not giving him food, hitting him, cutting him and cursing him. The main reason he survived through these years was due to his Uzumaki vitality and Kurama not letting his host die. He was adopted that Kakashi and as two hurt souls, they quickly found themselves attached to each other, one trying to cure the other from their past. Kakashi let his past go and accept his present, Naruto still hates any human that is hostile to him, when he's facing someone that is hostile to him, he is devoid of any emotion, he fights with the pure intent to kill. I think that if I say anything more, it'll count as a spoiler and I wont do that, personally, I like this story a lot because it's what I would like to read, I hope that through this review, you can enjoy it. From Yours Truly, Nyatsui. NYAHAHAHAHA.
Truly an excellent story with great grammar, perfect clarity, superb development and boundless word choice. The narration works simply fantastic, it floats like a butterfly and delivers like a bee. That coupled with the amazingly designed cover picture made by God RISE10 is just, muah! I feel like this fanfic should be even more popular and that the author should always stay popular! I wish the author all the luck and power i can wish.
Dios este fanfic es verdaderamente excelente 😉👌🏻🙌🏻 la gramática la traducción y la narración son espectaculares demasiado fluido 🤙🏻 el desarrollo de la historia es fantástica y se siente natural, el desarrollo del carácter de los personajes es natural en especial el de Naruto que en este caso es más realista y satisfactorio propio de un verdadero MC; Personalmente me hubiera gustado que siguiera la historia ya que tiene potencial para más, aún así muchas gracias por esta obra maestra 🙏🏻 recomendado 100%
when will a Naruto fanfiction have anyone else besides Hinata as his wife? it made no sense in the original and yet people still force it in their fanfiction only cause "canon" and it also feels forced and just bad in fanfics😂
it's alright i guess. Though i stopped reading it between his fight with gaara as i was getting annoyed
Awesome, I couldn't believe it. Naruto became a God, except that he was kicked around in the original timeline.
One of the best fanfic. The character develpment was good and I am happy that writer brought tsunadexjiriya . Overall everything was good....................
This is a good one[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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The story didn’t have any plot holes and was as smooth as possible. The Novel showed Naruto in a new and a very good way. It was a very nice read. Multiverse travel was a bit extra I think. It was not necessary. Good luck to the Author.
Tiết lộ Spoiler One of the first naruto ffs I read. Very good book, I can only recommend!:) book has also good grammar. **** 140 words condition for review.
TIDAK BURUK DAN TIDAK TERLALU BAIK. CERITA MIRIP KANON ASLI KECUALI KARAKTER MC YANG BERBEDA. PENGEMBANGAN CERITA KURANG MENARIK. YANG BAGUS KEKUATAN MC YANG OP TANPA BERBELIT BELIT
in start it was good but character development is worst. you said naruto is kind of genius and has iq greater than adults but he always acts like a brat . i mean ok if he hates hizuzen but man minato sealed kyuubi inside him for village sake and naruto is disgusted for that . then llets say he wanted parental love and he was treated like shit so he hated him for that ok let me tell you one thing tail beasts are regarded as weapons since ancient times for fucking human thinking and it was passed on from generation to generation that tail beast are dangerous . and now kurama attacks village and he starts iits iill spree and u blame minato from stopping him from that by sealing him that was only option for him he was not hashirama and kurama trusted naruto just like that man what the **** he has fucking hatred stored for fucking thousand years and he became friend just like that wtf in origionals it took several years for kurama to trust naruto a human because of his easy going idiotic mature behaviour for all living beings and he became friend of 4-5 year naruto just like that wow and naruto is genius and intelligent than adults then why he always find a way to blame others if want to make anti hero killer fanfic iits k just accept reality of shinobi world that its ok to kill to get personal gain but dont make a super smart boy a idiot brat
I am not gonna write a long review so all I will say is that this is a really good ff, and is easily in my top 5 fav naruto fics that I have read so far.
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Wow I've read the entire book great fanfic I like that Naruto wasn't so immature and annoying would've prefered if he only had hinata tho also the righting quality was very good a few mistakes but no ones perfect :) I loved the teamwork would've preferred more training tho and especially the training of his sage mode anyway thx for the book author I enjoyed it I'll read your other one too😊
Tiết lộ Spoiler This novel deserve better support from the reader. Personally, i really like this novel for the solid story. Author, you are AWESOME. Hope u will publish another story.
Side chapter boisss!!!!!! Really glad that your not done with this tho. ......…🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Thank you so much for completing this, you're of the rare one that stuck with his work right until the end! Cheers 🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠
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Why not just called him Menma? loves that version of Naruto! I have yet to read the story, hope it'll be a good one considering all these positive reviews.
Hey these story is the best naruto fanfic that i read so far and i love it , please keep making a fanfic cause you have a talent to so ❤️👏keep it up 😊 Godbless you
I was Planning on Reading a Unique Naruto Fanfic, After Seeing the Rating. I Had a Huge Expectation for this. Unfortunately. I Was Extremely Dissapointed with Many Things Such as Naruto is Still Hated Whatever he did. Almost all Females FanGirling Sasuke, He is Talented. But Somehow. Not Talented?
Good, I have to thank author for writing such a good fanfic. If you like naruto and don't really like his personality and you know the 3rd hokage, danzo, etc. ;) ;) this fanfic is yours to read
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Experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience
The famous author shameless 5 star review here! I'll tell you the basics: Naruto starts off with 1 year old and he already has the capability of thinking, not clearly but could walk, talk and think properly. The entire Village hated him and basically tortured him over three entire years - Not giving him food, hitting him, cutting him and cursing him. The main reason he survived through these years was due to his Uzumaki vitality and Kurama not letting his host die. He was adopted that Kakashi and as two hurt souls, they quickly found themselves attached to each other, one trying to cure the other from their past. Kakashi let his past go and accept his present, Naruto still hates any human that is hostile to him, when he's facing someone that is hostile to him, he is devoid of any emotion, he fights with the pure intent to kill. I think that if I say anything more, it'll count as a spoiler and I wont do that, personally, I like this story a lot because it's what I would like to read, I hope that through this review, you can enjoy it. From Yours Truly, Nyatsui. NYAHAHAHAHA.