Cherry blossoms were carried by the wind on the bright sunny day. Tranquillity flowed around the peaceful Immortal World. Loud laughter and buzzing streets filled the capital. The brilliant plaza in front of the palace was a crowded place for vendors and people to mingle with each other.
Above each stall and on each roof golden letters hung to symbolise today's event. Masses of people clad in beautiful attires from all over the Immortal World and ghosts mingled under them stormed to the capital to celebrate today's big day.
People ran to the plaza while soldiers made sure that everything was kept in order and secure. On one roof in the first layer, a beautiful woman with short black hair watched over everything.
Her flushed cheeks and the warm glint in her eyes could only describe her as a spring person. The people who walked to the first layer saw her. Some children exclaimed happily and pointed at her, "Look! It's commander Eri! She's so cool"
Hello guys,
yes, this is the end of the mainstory but there will be several side stories that will continue the mainstory (of course our main couple hehe) and where the past of some characters will be revealed! Also, many things that might have not been explained yet in the main story, will be covered in these side stories.
I hope you'll look forward to it!
Honestly, I have been debating for a long time if I should just end the story here because I felt like it was the perfect place, however, I also felt like it would be unfair to withhold their future from you, so in the end the side stories have been given birth haha
You all have been on this painful journey with us for so long, it's only right for you to see the true end of it. I hope you enjoyed this story and the end that hopefully has done justice to the suffering of all the characters and you.
Thank you so so so much for reading and staying with me on this journey until now. I hope you will continue for the last final bit.
This is my first, proper fully-finished novel I've ever written, so there are a lot of things that can be improved and changed and done so much better. There were a lot of time where I didn't like the direction we were going and where I thought, damn do I really have to pull this ass move again and make everyone die?
Isn't this story just full of suffering and torture for our protagonist? I also know that many people have dropped this novel due to the beginning bit and throughout the story where Lia has wavered in her revenge and comes over as reckless and emotional, but honestly this is her flaw she had to overcome and any character should have a flaw they later grow out of. Still, I gained a lot of new knowledge about writing novels, so I'm very grateful you chose to give this story a chance and show it a lot of love, and stayed until here.
Once again, thank you so much for this wonderful time, and let's meet again in the next chapter!