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The1AboveAll

One word amazing. Its really hard to find stories like this while the mc being non human. There are a few mistakes like a misspelled word but if your like me and have autocorrect in your mind it wouldn't make too much of a difference but the plot is also amazing and continues to thicken and is not repetitive. The mc growth is fast paced but not to where you blink and miss it. Every 20 chapters or so, different upgrades for him his tribe or his women and wolves would come its amazing. I'm not really good with words but if you read it I promise you will like it.

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Lazy_dude

Here this is for moti. And tbh i quite like this novel........interesting novel by far........i really want to see more I found this novel by chance At first didn't except much But quite good for a few chapters Can't say much now since there's not much chapter to begin with But well dear author i hope you can write more! I will be waiting for more and GOOD LUCK to you!

LV 5

Immortal_Boomstick

Spoiler At the end Writing quality 3.8 out of 5 The author writing quality is somewhat above average he has not made any large mistakes just some small things here and there so its a cut above average but not top tier. Updates 4.1 out of 5 The author has updated quite stable the reason why i put 4.1 is because its not frequent around 3-4 chapters a week story development 3.2 out of 5 So the story is intriguing but its quite fast pace since you will read about being in a cave to out on the fields, Then there are several unnecessary other than the MC povs that pops up from seemingly anywhere and then pops back onto Mc witch is in a whole new scenario than when you left him in. I wouldn't care much if it only happend 3 or 4 times but it was like 6 or 7 it quite honestly ruined the flow the story and it felt like the athour was only filling in for the word count had but aside from that if you just skip the povs and focus on the Mc the story is still great. Character Design 3.4 out of 5 Now if i had to describe it its extremely vague we get he is somewhat evil and tyrannical but we really dont know what his motives are it feels like one of those superhero villains that has one emotion put into them and we just follow that he is somewhat like a robot except with a lot of anger there isn't any laughter or being amused or even happiness outside of combat. so MC is a quite interesting character except i wished he showed some other emotions on how he reacts to his subordinates or even thinks just show how he thinks about them cause the only thing explaining them is scheming or cunning war-like. All side characters where basically based on a concept cunning scheming war-like airhead-like reckless this could be good in some cases but when you dont show off the side characters personality it becomes hard to connect to them. Thought they all have somewhat off a personality but the moment you have a chance for them to express them and understand them a pov cuts it off or some text like going into the future for 30 min. World background 4.9 out of 5 it seems like a solid world cant say much about the author seems like he has a good idea on how he wants to build the world as a whole and im okay with it. personal opinion and overall score 3.9 Personally i quite enjoy this novels there are sometimes some gaps of logic in the novel where i have to go back and read the part again but for the most part it makes sense and i quite enjoy the novel. It is a kingdom building, action novel that is based with the Mc as a orc It puts the main character of this novel into another novel thought this isn't explained that well and Mc background is seemingly from a yakuza/mafia/gang background and he seemed to have had some position there but probably not the highest ranking one cause his anger and ambition seemingly comes from both arrogance and ill feelings towards his former boss. for the most part this is a good novel except some parts it mentions things seemingly out of nowhere and there isn't much of an explanation to why he came into that sense of logic or how we/he got to know that.

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Archonn

The concept is good. This story could be great but it's somewhat unreadable. The author keep changing perspective that breaks the immersion. and keep using 1st person and 3rd person. Please choose one and stick with it.

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soupetime

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NikTitanik866

This needs an editor. The constant POV switches make it hard to follow the story. Also, the MC feels a bit fake, idk, maybe I should just give this more time.

LV 4

Coolpants

The concept is really good. The whole world is based on a non-existent Novel and thus follows the journey of the MC who has been reincarnated into one of the non-human races. The only problem is with how this idea has been implemented. The story is written assuming you know about the world and characters thus bombarding you with lots of facts which would make sense if we had access to the source material. Overall the concept and story is quite good but poorly implemented.

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DreamingRuby

How can so many writing mistakes be made in just one sentence... I feel like I will find out if I keep reading, which I will not. Why the hell are the random capitalizations and some sentences don't start with one? I don't care about the story quality because my attention is taken by the writing mistakes.

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DisastrousPride

tbh i still havent read the story .i was just drawn by the thick thighs ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................

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TK_2000

Love the Outlook of an orc and the fact that Hes not a goody twoshoes but is also not completely unforgivIng. perfect balance. Keep up the good work

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Rudranarayan_Nanda

Bro super good chapters Super good story Also super good characters But I think you should more elaborate things like the action scenes and character design and looks And why are you showing us the human protagonist???

LV 4

Goto_Beats

This book is fabulous ! The English sentences are proper and the transition between chapters is also well thought. One thing which I would personally like is that the chapters to be released timely ... Don't get me wrong ... It's just that I am addicted to this book 🥺... To the author.. This book has so much potential and thank you for making one of those rare good books which are free of cost ... To everyone .. Whenever the author release a Chapter ... The ranking of this book generally revolves around 90s to 100s , which is absolutely correct, but it should be all time ranking ... This book deserves it ! Once agin to the author .. if you want your book to be more acclaimed, popular and reach the position it should be.... Maybe creating an active discord Server with dictated fans with scheduled timley chapter realese ( like a chapter on 8 o clock on Sunday GST timing and mentioning it in the synopsis area) and maybe certain bonus chapters if certain achievements or criteria has been met .. Made a Patreon or "Bye me a Coffe" account so that loyal fans can support you like People support the author of Chryrsalis , who had released hundreds of good free chapters or like Legion , were Loyal Fans support his work by buying him coffee ... And once again ,to my fellow loyalists , we have to bring his book to atleast top 💯! All Time ! Then we can work slowly towards top ten .... And people Definitely right reviews and your thoughts on this book ... Many people reads the reviews and then starts reading ... And author keep up the good work ! 🤗

LV 15

Lucien121

honestly its a very good novel tho i put 5 star update time in hopes that the author updates more he has or she has a very interesting concept and story thats well written id love to read it more often

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Platinum_Dragon

It is a great story about gaining the most benefits from a horrible situation. It is definitely something I recommen reading. -------------------------------------------------------------‐-------

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LegolasGreenleaf

First the main two things people dislike which is the writing quality and point of view shifts. The writing quality isn’t perfect but readable as it is mostly minor mistakes like lighting/ lightning getting switched up as an example. I usually auto correct it as I read so I don’t notice it much but just something to be aware of for those who care about that. The Pov switch in the beginning isn’t the best but it improves as it goes. The different point of views let us see what movements are happening in the world that relate to the mc or provide information whether it is about the world or characters. The way it is used especially later on with characters to flesh them out is great. The world is done well with a interesting background and how it works. The story is good keeping you interested on finding out more and seeing what actions the main character will take. To wrap it up it is a good read that is worth a try to see if you like it and I hope it gets updated plenty in the future as it is getting good.

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whochad

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Mobby

This novel is amazing I love it. The story line is fun the orc pov is really done well. Plus the plot isn't just forced or just has plot armor! it works the way it's meant to and makes sense, and to be honest that's all you need to get 5 stars from me. Though sometimes the writing quality dips a bit, ik you've said before you plan to do a mass correction thing and tbh they are just a few spelling mistakes here and there so here is the 5 star for writing quality ahead of time! But make sure to correct them all! dont let me down!!!!!! and keep being awesome (also I don't mind the other pov thing but so others don't complain keep it to 2 POVs and clearly write Alex's POV or POV ??? / unknown or something like that, so they don't get confused ) thank for reading here's one year's worth of luck you'll need it for 2021

LV 4

LRWJONES

So far the story progression is steady and well written with a very intriguing main character the first few chapters were a little bit confusing but this is resolved by later chapters. I definitely look forwards to more