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a crackish hp fic, decent enough story-line, could be serious with some effort and twists but overall a story with good ideas and a proper mix of drama/dialogue and storytelling/narrative.
Overall Rating: Average at best. Well written with less to no grammatical errors. Cons (Not my cup of tea): Story development & MC progression is a bit lame as it still carries the "kid/child" genre the cannon has. It mainly focuses on romance & tons of researches which kinda suck as it only caters on teens or below adult level IQ & EQ. Still kudos to author-san for writing this fanfic, it's just not to my expectations.
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Pretty weurd but fun read...dont expect super deep plot more of a popcorn read to binge and enjoy... Wish it updated more... 140 characters
I read first two paragraphs of this work and the description of main character is so similar to myself that I'm starting to think that author is secretly stalking me. I don't know how he got ahold of this information but if I find someone suspicious going after me I'll call the police. Looking at the awesome story so far I'll read more to find what more he knows about me... If I suddenly die and reincarnate you all know who to blame for this.
The story is well written. Its just a shame that its all child smut. I find it disturbing that what I suspect is an *****, is writing ecchi child stuff and feels the strong need to frequently point out their ages in such scenes. There are also indicators that the story will head into beastiality as well. The terrible thing is that the story is well written plot wise, and without the abundant child smut would actually be a good read...
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One of the best novels I've read so keep it up and please don't drop the novel 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
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Jus finished reading chapter 42 and all i can think is that beside the magical discoveries of the mc all the story talk about is child SMUT ..... And now enter the incest part , so I personaly will stop reading and I encourage peoples to not start reading this **** :(
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Really great story hope it continues for a lon time. I also hope the writer has a wonderful time writing more chapters. Thank you for the great story so far.
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amazing story found my self smiling through out the story. please don't drop can't wait for tournament arc. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Wow. Reading all the chapters of this story. The chapters are good. The update is consistent. The story is good. And the world building is also great. I can't wait to read more.
CRYSTAL IS BEST GIRL/SNAKE and lmao malfoy's in Hufflepuff XD XD love the concept and it's well thought out if a little rushed at the start. But no matter, I have thoroughly enjoyed this read and hope it continues!!
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Wow. Great chapter. Great story. Cant wait for more. Wow. Great chapter. Great story. Cant wait for more.Wow. Great chapter. Great story. Cant wait for more.
This is a great story and would love it if you continue it. The story plot is very light and relaxing with an intriguing premise. This story is a bit different from other fanfiction of Harry Potter that I have read until now
wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.
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Omg. So good chapters. And a good story. Cant wait for more. Please update more.Omg. So good chapters. And a good story. Cant wait for more. Please update more.
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Solo diré que gran historia y nunca se me hubiera ocurrido una idea como esta, en verdad este tipo es un genio. Una gran historia, y giro inesperado al final.
a crackish hp fic, decent enough story-line, could be serious with some effort and twists but overall a story with good ideas and a proper mix of drama/dialogue and storytelling/narrative.
Overall Rating: Average at best. Well written with less to no grammatical errors. Cons (Not my cup of tea): Story development & MC progression is a bit lame as it still carries the "kid/child" genre the cannon has. It mainly focuses on romance & tons of researches which kinda suck as it only caters on teens or below adult level IQ & EQ. Still kudos to author-san for writing this fanfic, it's just not to my expectations.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Pretty weurd but fun read...dont expect super deep plot more of a popcorn read to binge and enjoy... Wish it updated more... 140 characters
I read first two paragraphs of this work and the description of main character is so similar to myself that I'm starting to think that author is secretly stalking me. I don't know how he got ahold of this information but if I find someone suspicious going after me I'll call the police. Looking at the awesome story so far I'll read more to find what more he knows about me... If I suddenly die and reincarnate you all know who to blame for this.
The story is well written. Its just a shame that its all child smut. I find it disturbing that what I suspect is an *****, is writing ecchi child stuff and feels the strong need to frequently point out their ages in such scenes. There are also indicators that the story will head into beastiality as well. The terrible thing is that the story is well written plot wise, and without the abundant child smut would actually be a good read...
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One of the best novels I've read so keep it up and please don't drop the novel 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖
Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Jus finished reading chapter 42 and all i can think is that beside the magical discoveries of the mc all the story talk about is child SMUT ..... And now enter the incest part , so I personaly will stop reading and I encourage peoples to not start reading this **** :(
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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Really great story hope it continues for a lon time. I also hope the writer has a wonderful time writing more chapters. Thank you for the great story so far.
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amazing story found my self smiling through out the story. please don't drop can't wait for tournament arc. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Wow. Reading all the chapters of this story. The chapters are good. The update is consistent. The story is good. And the world building is also great. I can't wait to read more.
CRYSTAL IS BEST GIRL/SNAKE and lmao malfoy's in Hufflepuff XD XD love the concept and it's well thought out if a little rushed at the start. But no matter, I have thoroughly enjoyed this read and hope it continues!!
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Wow. Great chapter. Great story. Cant wait for more. Wow. Great chapter. Great story. Cant wait for more.Wow. Great chapter. Great story. Cant wait for more.
This is a great story and would love it if you continue it. The story plot is very light and relaxing with an intriguing premise. This story is a bit different from other fanfiction of Harry Potter that I have read until now
wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.wow. good chapter.. update more pleaseee.
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Omg. So good chapters. And a good story. Cant wait for more. Please update more.Omg. So good chapters. And a good story. Cant wait for more. Please update more.
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Solo diré que gran historia y nunca se me hubiera ocurrido una idea como esta, en verdad este tipo es un genio. Una gran historia, y giro inesperado al final.