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the MC lilliny is really cool i wish i was like her she's such a role model and the novel is even better because she has a cloud of mystery surrounding her i cant wait to find out what the mystery is. anyways stan lilliny the FL/MC, stan 007 devil queen, even male readers like crucru like this book b/c the MC lilliny is just so cool. be sure to read it to date if you wanna drop... otherwise you're a horrible individual. 5 star and a whole 10 out of 10 yo p.s. have I said lilliny is my favorite main character all time no lie ???
I started reading this one after the Entangled Fates, and I was like, ok, this must me yet another romance+revenge novel, and I was quite convinced about that. BUT, the author does a great job in keeping us on our toes. I demand compensation for the nervousness and anxiety. Cough. I should run before the author comes after me with her new knives and guns. 🏃♀️ The story flows fast and it does keep us on tether hooks. God! I love Blake. Now, Lillian, back away... Let me have Blake. Why do I feel like chasing the author for torturing the poor souls? *Sob Sob* Anyway, I really like how the characters are sketched well, and I don't think I need to mention the Author's writing quality. Coz it is awesome. I love ya, dear Author. 😘 Anyway, I think I have spoken long enough. But, in a certain person's style, I would like to yell, I WANT BLAKE, GIMME. This book is worth spending your time and money over, so, I would recommend everyone to give it a read. [img=recommend] I assure you, you will definitely fall in love with the story once u start it. 😉 P.S. This took a long time. And, I absolutely love Lilliny. 🤣
Just started this book and really enjoy it such a good book ....the FL is so cute 😍 its good that she was found by the ML and hopefully he can help her become strong
sounds interesting..this mau not an immediate revengw..bu this revenge may come true through this male lead...pnly if they may fall in love .there maybe parting..yet...
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The author never fail to amaze me, every time I would read her works I couldn't help myself but admire her writing style. The structure and narration are well-written. Cant find any error at all. The story plot itself is superb. It captivates me to read the story more. I am looking forward for such amazing story like this. Don't want to spoil the readers so I encourage everyone to read it by yourself and find out how fun and interesting this story is. Good job dear author. 😍❤❤❤❤🎉🎉
I loved it Author. 😍 The characters, the writing, the suspense and tension slowly building up is awesome! 💖 I especially liked your writing very much, your descriptions were to the point. I agree with author Baevida. Show don't tell is done superb and I also want to really learn that in my writing 😭 The flow and pacing is also just right, not too fast or too slow. Great work author! Keep it up! 💕💕💕
Grt work Author. I really really like as well as envy a bit for your style of narration. Mysterious and Marvellous story. No errors and typos so far. The descriptions are vivid and the characters are well portrayed so far. A novel worth reading and the world background is great. Keep up the good work author. Added the book and lastly I would like to say that it's really a promising one. ☺ Simply Loved it😊
Wow... Good work. Lovely title, good cover, I love it and good synopsis. Your writing style is just great, same with your world background, character design and story development. There is good flow in your story. Grammatical errors and typos, cudnt find them. You even did a lot of show not tell, one thing as a writer I am trying to learn. I simply love your book and your narration. Added to my library. Good work, keep it up. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I started reading the story without expectation, the story is interesting will continue reading which great as I don't usually read this genre, the grammar is good
I seriously don't have much to say, because the story was just as good as expected. I'm a fan of the author and the former books didn't disappoint. Each chapters would make you crave for more. Join us and let's embark on the journey of 'AUTHOR, MASS RELEASE PLEASE!' It's exactly as I said up there. You will crave for more(^_−)☆ Grammar is good update.... Well it's just the start and I can't say much. World building and character development..... That u would love. Highly recommended (^_-)
Writing Quality: Five stars. The author makes nice use of grammar and vocabulary. As for typos, those are also nonexistent. Stability of Updates. I can't say much because it's only been three days. Story Development: From six chapters. The protagonist has lost memory. With no recollection of who she is or where she is, she has to find a way to escape. Character Design. The protagonist seems to have a mellow personality. Not too cold... World Background: This is what the author has been best at. The world background is described with description. Overall the story is a satisfying read. It happens in a mafia setting in Europe. The author has extrapolated the story of supporting characters from her previously completed novel 'My Little Sunshine.' Best of luck to author-sama!
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I was deceived by the author into thinking that this was just your average fluff. But boy, was I wrong. The first chapter begins with a horrific gore administered to the MC despite it being written off as a dream. The character's thoughts and actions are perfectly equivalent to a girl her age, no more, no less. Each characters are life-like and seem like they have well-defined character traits. I also loved the conversations. They, for some reason, sent chills up my spine. Also, the author's use of expressive language sometimes gave me goosebumps. Moreover, since her writing style is in perfect sync with my reader requirements, I am enjoying this story more than possible. The story has a lot of suspense and creates that feeling where you begin to feel jittery when you see the chapters decreasing as you read more. And, the cliffs deliver you with perfect critical hits, so watch out for them. Back to the plot, it is pretty engaging and complex enough that I am afraid I would miss out key elements if I just gave it a light reading. So, heavy reading it is. Author, beware!!! The moment I run out of chapters to read, I am coming after you with raised pitchforks.
the MC lilliny is really cool i wish i was like her she's such a role model and the novel is even better because she has a cloud of mystery surrounding her i cant wait to find out what the mystery is. anyways stan lilliny the FL/MC, stan 007 devil queen, even male readers like crucru like this book b/c the MC lilliny is just so cool. be sure to read it to date if you wanna drop... otherwise you're a horrible individual. 5 star and a whole 10 out of 10 yo p.s. have I said lilliny is my favorite main character all time no lie ???
I started reading this one after the Entangled Fates, and I was like, ok, this must me yet another romance+revenge novel, and I was quite convinced about that. BUT, the author does a great job in keeping us on our toes. I demand compensation for the nervousness and anxiety. Cough. I should run before the author comes after me with her new knives and guns. 🏃♀️ The story flows fast and it does keep us on tether hooks. God! I love Blake. Now, Lillian, back away... Let me have Blake. Why do I feel like chasing the author for torturing the poor souls? *Sob Sob* Anyway, I really like how the characters are sketched well, and I don't think I need to mention the Author's writing quality. Coz it is awesome. I love ya, dear Author. 😘 Anyway, I think I have spoken long enough. But, in a certain person's style, I would like to yell, I WANT BLAKE, GIMME. This book is worth spending your time and money over, so, I would recommend everyone to give it a read. [img=recommend] I assure you, you will definitely fall in love with the story once u start it. 😉 P.S. This took a long time. And, I absolutely love Lilliny. 🤣
Just started this book and really enjoy it such a good book ....the FL is so cute 😍 its good that she was found by the ML and hopefully he can help her become strong
sounds interesting..this mau not an immediate revengw..bu this revenge may come true through this male lead...pnly if they may fall in love .there maybe parting..yet...
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The author never fail to amaze me, every time I would read her works I couldn't help myself but admire her writing style. The structure and narration are well-written. Cant find any error at all. The story plot itself is superb. It captivates me to read the story more. I am looking forward for such amazing story like this. Don't want to spoil the readers so I encourage everyone to read it by yourself and find out how fun and interesting this story is. Good job dear author. 😍❤❤❤❤🎉🎉
I loved it Author. 😍 The characters, the writing, the suspense and tension slowly building up is awesome! 💖 I especially liked your writing very much, your descriptions were to the point. I agree with author Baevida. Show don't tell is done superb and I also want to really learn that in my writing 😭 The flow and pacing is also just right, not too fast or too slow. Great work author! Keep it up! 💕💕💕
Grt work Author. I really really like as well as envy a bit for your style of narration. Mysterious and Marvellous story. No errors and typos so far. The descriptions are vivid and the characters are well portrayed so far. A novel worth reading and the world background is great. Keep up the good work author. Added the book and lastly I would like to say that it's really a promising one. ☺ Simply Loved it😊
Wow... Good work. Lovely title, good cover, I love it and good synopsis. Your writing style is just great, same with your world background, character design and story development. There is good flow in your story. Grammatical errors and typos, cudnt find them. You even did a lot of show not tell, one thing as a writer I am trying to learn. I simply love your book and your narration. Added to my library. Good work, keep it up. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I started reading the story without expectation, the story is interesting will continue reading which great as I don't usually read this genre, the grammar is good
I seriously don't have much to say, because the story was just as good as expected. I'm a fan of the author and the former books didn't disappoint. Each chapters would make you crave for more. Join us and let's embark on the journey of 'AUTHOR, MASS RELEASE PLEASE!' It's exactly as I said up there. You will crave for more(^_−)☆ Grammar is good update.... Well it's just the start and I can't say much. World building and character development..... That u would love. Highly recommended (^_-)
Writing Quality: Five stars. The author makes nice use of grammar and vocabulary. As for typos, those are also nonexistent. Stability of Updates. I can't say much because it's only been three days. Story Development: From six chapters. The protagonist has lost memory. With no recollection of who she is or where she is, she has to find a way to escape. Character Design. The protagonist seems to have a mellow personality. Not too cold... World Background: This is what the author has been best at. The world background is described with description. Overall the story is a satisfying read. It happens in a mafia setting in Europe. The author has extrapolated the story of supporting characters from her previously completed novel 'My Little Sunshine.' Best of luck to author-sama!
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I was deceived by the author into thinking that this was just your average fluff. But boy, was I wrong. The first chapter begins with a horrific gore administered to the MC despite it being written off as a dream. The character's thoughts and actions are perfectly equivalent to a girl her age, no more, no less. Each characters are life-like and seem like they have well-defined character traits. I also loved the conversations. They, for some reason, sent chills up my spine. Also, the author's use of expressive language sometimes gave me goosebumps. Moreover, since her writing style is in perfect sync with my reader requirements, I am enjoying this story more than possible. The story has a lot of suspense and creates that feeling where you begin to feel jittery when you see the chapters decreasing as you read more. And, the cliffs deliver you with perfect critical hits, so watch out for them. Back to the plot, it is pretty engaging and complex enough that I am afraid I would miss out key elements if I just gave it a light reading. So, heavy reading it is. Author, beware!!! The moment I run out of chapters to read, I am coming after you with raised pitchforks.