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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.
The story is good but grammar in this novel makes me think that the author must have learnt English from MTL novels
I keep bouncing around between 4 different books bc none of them are completed, so 1-2 pages a day gets frustrating
Just caught up , Great character development , and peak story , i've seen enough , hurry up and drop 200 more chapters [img=Speechless]
I've bought privilege for this month but cant read beyond 1561, i see that the chapters are being updated but they don't appear, i was wondering if im the only one this is happening to.,Honestly, the author has done a good job of keeping up with updates recently , and the story is developing nicely once again.
When tang eventually wins the third phase of the god trial and selects his new race he should choose a class like progenitor that allows him to like devour his skills and bloodline into his race and also have the ability to turn his family into Tangs as well as his people but obviously his would be some sorta lesser Tangs idk just thought the dude really needa to figure out his race since he was kinda an idiot about it all
Definitely one of good ones .it as some its and downs but I like where it is now and the Tang character developed a lot in recent chapters
I'm caught up at chapter 1484. This is honestly one of my favourite or the best novel I have ever read, I really like the kingdom building aspect and the mc being OP. I can't find the right words to describe it but the thrill it gives is insane and you'll enjoy it for sure
Seperti novel China lainya ini hanya tentang menyinggung dan disinggung plot selalu diulang lagi lagi sungguh membosankan di mengoleksi Harem seperti pokemon yang bahkan tidak bisa mengingat beberapa dari mereka politik novel sederhana hanya pemberontakan saja tak ada yang lain MC sama sekali tidak miliki sekutu tapi dia terus mencari cari musuh, masalah di novel ini hanya diselesaikan dengan kontrak budak atau mati kerangka MC malah lebih pintar daripada dirinya perkembangan seperti novel China lainya seperti bumimu adalah kota pemula dan MC akan terus berpindah pindah dunia meninggalkan semuah haremnya dan mencari wanita lainnya lagi plot ini sudah diulang lagi dan lagi g ada istimewa dengan novel ini hanya akan populer diwebnovel saja aku meragukan di platform lainya karena jenis novel seperti ini sebenarnya sanagat banyak dan aku tidak tahu orang bisa menilai ini bintang 5 padahal ada lebih bagus dari ini
I'm upset that this isn't trending, I don't know the guys are complaining since if reality hits you'd use your common sense first. I can truly say each arc of the story feels good... Especially the fighting parts and harem of course. Overall it's a good read would recommend I'm a sucker for skills/power, money, and story development. It's a slow progress, hoping author writes a fast phase book if he can with the same genre and tags.
Seperti novel xiaxia lainya ini hanya cerita berulang MC lainya yg g berpikir logis dan hanya menyelesaikan masalah dengan kontrak budak sepanjang waktu dan teruse menerus seperti itu kalau tidak akan ada pembataian seperti novel China lainya .dan MC kurang didepartemen otak dan yang paling bermasalah adalah penulis membuat terlalu banyak adegan pemerkosaan disana dan dia bakan meniduri wanita bawahannya yg setia padanya hanya plot dipaksakan seperti karena MC tiba-tiba membantai seisi kota dan wanita bawahannya takut akan nasib suaminya dan anaknya nanti itu sungguh bodoh dan terlalu dipaksakan perselingkuhan ini bakan lebih buruk dari permerkosaan penulis seperti menulisnya seperti hey pemerkosaan tidak seburuk itu rata rata penulis China kayak gini
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this novel is super good. I strongly recommand reading it. but one thing that bothers me is that sometimes the updating schedules is out off wack, and we are left in the dark. with no regards to the authors health. i mean and adore the story. but i don't want to get invested in the story, for it to be sunddenly droped with warnig or reasons whatsoever, like ''My super necromancer systeme''
Really hoping you finish this novel the world and story have a lot of potential
AUTHOR I NEED MORE CHAPTERS I LOOOOVVVVVE YOUR NOVEL BUT I NEED MORE CHAPTERS TO READ GIVVVVVE MEEEEEEE MORRRRRE PLZ 🥹
if you cab get past the first part of the novel where the mc is a little slow. he becomes a lot more intelligent and it's a very good read.
I barely read 2 chapters. The grammar is absolutely disgusting 😑It's quite surprising that people read 1000 chapters so I guess the author did something right with the story.If you're like me who would love to read legible stuff, don't bother fr.con be like say na pry 2 write am smh
so it's a greqt novel except its a adult novel disguise as a normal one i read like 500 chapters every chapter he is sleeping around and to skip the whole women feeling let's give him a magic p*** THAT solve every problem man already have like dozen women and every new female lead end on the expected end of it
ughh.. I've been reading a lot of novel at WN, so far, this novel is the best one, from character building, storyline, world building, reaction and interaction for each character, power level, ect, I can say this one is the best one I've read. it's soooooo humane, sooo realistic, sooo logical. aside from a few missing word, miss translate, and rarer r17 action at later chapter, this novel is simply one of the best. if you are 17yo, or not taboo with r17 content and harem, this one for you. non reincarnation novel, but apocalypse, the best one on apocalypse setting novel. better than infinite mana in apocalypse world, imho.
MY CUP OF TEA!!! A addicting story, interesting characters, it does all cliches nicely, at least until now (1400s). The only problem that I realized recently is the unstable releases, its sad but I hope they go back to at least 7 ch/week.
The story itself is quite alright; it's typical LitRPG. One thing that bothers me a bit is the grammar. I mean, I ran the first chapter through Grammarly Premium once, and I got over 70 erro
Been a big fan of this web novel for years now, this is the only web novel that I always look forward to, and with the current chapters (where he returns to the Arkania continent) it just keep getting better and better.
The story development wise it's good, though I really like the character development, from the 1 to 1000 chapters our main character continues to improve base on the time line of the novel not to fast and not to slow witch coincide with reality, although this is a apocalypse/game it really hits when faced with realism great approach from the author. I'm curious why it's not on the leader board, might be because of the progression rate is slow in my opinion but I like the writing as not to offset balance and plot. That's it for me love the novel
some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
I can't read more of this. The grammar is god-awful, and it does NOT get fixed later on. Decent premise, terrible translation. I can feel my braincells die reading this.
The story is good but grammar in this novel makes me think that the author must have learnt English from MTL novels
I keep bouncing around between 4 different books bc none of them are completed, so 1-2 pages a day gets frustrating
Just caught up , Great character development , and peak story , i've seen enough , hurry up and drop 200 more chapters [img=Speechless]
I've bought privilege for this month but cant read beyond 1561, i see that the chapters are being updated but they don't appear, i was wondering if im the only one this is happening to.,Honestly, the author has done a good job of keeping up with updates recently , and the story is developing nicely once again.
When tang eventually wins the third phase of the god trial and selects his new race he should choose a class like progenitor that allows him to like devour his skills and bloodline into his race and also have the ability to turn his family into Tangs as well as his people but obviously his would be some sorta lesser Tangs idk just thought the dude really needa to figure out his race since he was kinda an idiot about it all
Definitely one of good ones .it as some its and downs but I like where it is now and the Tang character developed a lot in recent chapters
I'm caught up at chapter 1484. This is honestly one of my favourite or the best novel I have ever read, I really like the kingdom building aspect and the mc being OP. I can't find the right words to describe it but the thrill it gives is insane and you'll enjoy it for sure
Seperti novel China lainya ini hanya tentang menyinggung dan disinggung plot selalu diulang lagi lagi sungguh membosankan di mengoleksi Harem seperti pokemon yang bahkan tidak bisa mengingat beberapa dari mereka politik novel sederhana hanya pemberontakan saja tak ada yang lain MC sama sekali tidak miliki sekutu tapi dia terus mencari cari musuh, masalah di novel ini hanya diselesaikan dengan kontrak budak atau mati kerangka MC malah lebih pintar daripada dirinya perkembangan seperti novel China lainya seperti bumimu adalah kota pemula dan MC akan terus berpindah pindah dunia meninggalkan semuah haremnya dan mencari wanita lainnya lagi plot ini sudah diulang lagi dan lagi g ada istimewa dengan novel ini hanya akan populer diwebnovel saja aku meragukan di platform lainya karena jenis novel seperti ini sebenarnya sanagat banyak dan aku tidak tahu orang bisa menilai ini bintang 5 padahal ada lebih bagus dari ini
I'm upset that this isn't trending, I don't know the guys are complaining since if reality hits you'd use your common sense first. I can truly say each arc of the story feels good... Especially the fighting parts and harem of course. Overall it's a good read would recommend I'm a sucker for skills/power, money, and story development. It's a slow progress, hoping author writes a fast phase book if he can with the same genre and tags.
Seperti novel xiaxia lainya ini hanya cerita berulang MC lainya yg g berpikir logis dan hanya menyelesaikan masalah dengan kontrak budak sepanjang waktu dan teruse menerus seperti itu kalau tidak akan ada pembataian seperti novel China lainya .dan MC kurang didepartemen otak dan yang paling bermasalah adalah penulis membuat terlalu banyak adegan pemerkosaan disana dan dia bakan meniduri wanita bawahannya yg setia padanya hanya plot dipaksakan seperti karena MC tiba-tiba membantai seisi kota dan wanita bawahannya takut akan nasib suaminya dan anaknya nanti itu sungguh bodoh dan terlalu dipaksakan perselingkuhan ini bakan lebih buruk dari permerkosaan penulis seperti menulisnya seperti hey pemerkosaan tidak seburuk itu rata rata penulis China kayak gini
Mc is very stupid. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Tiết lộ Spoiler this novel is super good. I strongly recommand reading it. but one thing that bothers me is that sometimes the updating schedules is out off wack, and we are left in the dark. with no regards to the authors health. i mean and adore the story. but i don't want to get invested in the story, for it to be sunddenly droped with warnig or reasons whatsoever, like ''My super necromancer systeme''
Really hoping you finish this novel the world and story have a lot of potential
AUTHOR I NEED MORE CHAPTERS I LOOOOVVVVVE YOUR NOVEL BUT I NEED MORE CHAPTERS TO READ GIVVVVVE MEEEEEEE MORRRRRE PLZ 🥹
if you cab get past the first part of the novel where the mc is a little slow. he becomes a lot more intelligent and it's a very good read.
I barely read 2 chapters. The grammar is absolutely disgusting 😑It's quite surprising that people read 1000 chapters so I guess the author did something right with the story.If you're like me who would love to read legible stuff, don't bother fr.con be like say na pry 2 write am smh
so it's a greqt novel except its a adult novel disguise as a normal one i read like 500 chapters every chapter he is sleeping around and to skip the whole women feeling let's give him a magic p*** THAT solve every problem man already have like dozen women and every new female lead end on the expected end of it
ughh.. I've been reading a lot of novel at WN, so far, this novel is the best one, from character building, storyline, world building, reaction and interaction for each character, power level, ect, I can say this one is the best one I've read. it's soooooo humane, sooo realistic, sooo logical. aside from a few missing word, miss translate, and rarer r17 action at later chapter, this novel is simply one of the best. if you are 17yo, or not taboo with r17 content and harem, this one for you. non reincarnation novel, but apocalypse, the best one on apocalypse setting novel. better than infinite mana in apocalypse world, imho.
MY CUP OF TEA!!! A addicting story, interesting characters, it does all cliches nicely, at least until now (1400s). The only problem that I realized recently is the unstable releases, its sad but I hope they go back to at least 7 ch/week.
The story itself is quite alright; it's typical LitRPG. One thing that bothers me a bit is the grammar. I mean, I ran the first chapter through Grammarly Premium once, and I got over 70 erro
Been a big fan of this web novel for years now, this is the only web novel that I always look forward to, and with the current chapters (where he returns to the Arkania continent) it just keep getting better and better.
The story development wise it's good, though I really like the character development, from the 1 to 1000 chapters our main character continues to improve base on the time line of the novel not to fast and not to slow witch coincide with reality, although this is a apocalypse/game it really hits when faced with realism great approach from the author. I'm curious why it's not on the leader board, might be because of the progression rate is slow in my opinion but I like the writing as not to offset balance and plot. That's it for me love the novel
some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.