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did u drop the novel author? need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more
Is this supposed to be a fanfic of a bad chinese fanfic…? If you guys haven't read "In another world with naruto system" then do it's much better 300+ chapters of xianxia shinobi. Plus this has no logic 🥱
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Pretty good so far, I am hoping his hiatus won't go for too long. I can wait about 1-2 months but i really want it to end in like 2 more weeks? Anyway, story is good. It has that same feeling when i read these types of cultivating/fantasy genres that I read often. Honestly I am pretty bored with one of the fanfics I have read because it drastically changed to a slice of life, romance one instead of a system cultivating one but meh. Hope you can find something to use for continuing this fanfic or novel, I don't know.
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Author is a bit of a novice, but overall the book is great. Just some deviation from actual Naruto plot and some grammatical error.👍👍👍👍👍
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your story quite good i think..... but when more i read your story this is just like wuxia/xianxia novel or whatever is that I kind of don't like that
Awesome job so far author. So far I like the main character and the way you've set up the world. I was wondering if he would learn the other energies since he does have kage bunshin. Keep up the good work!!
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Cool, cool, cool!)) I liked it, I look forward to continuing. I liked the pumping system and its strength. Especially the combination of shinobi with magicians. How do they protect. I hope you continue)) How long will the bro wait?)))
I liked the premise of this novel but the longer I read, the I got irritated. Why? Well because he uses a former assasin who was driven by revenge but after a while he acts like some whiny little girl who tries to look edgy. It's like having the backstory of sasuke but have naruto's goofiness but more pathetic. I could've live with it if it weren't for chapter 22. If you couldn't see how pathetic he is in that chapter then you're probably like him in front of girls.
Honestly it’s a great novel. I’m not one to usually write reviews but I just wanna say I hope that the author can continue posting this. I’ve seen too many good novels get dropped and I would hate to see it happen again here. 🎖
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Okay read! That's all I can say now. Still waiting for the story to progess more till I give an in depth review. The story is okay I guess till now. Very bad update stability.
._. Lazy Pig here, just read the goddamn book, it's pretty good ..........................................................................................................................................
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Very fun and cool novel ......................................................................................................................
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Your novel is quite cool. There is originality in it and also I like the MC. He is not stupid or overly lusty. Keep up the good work. I'll do my best to support you.
The book is interesting change for a sword and magic world adding the new way for the MC to cultivate in this new world. So far interested main character and world I will be continuing to read and would recommend to everyone.
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Ninpo:reviewing no jutsu! (I can't say myself that I am good in reviewing As this is my first time ever reviewing a novel in my web novel career :v) So as the story goes you would see that there would be some boring times and as always that would always or the least boring times in novel yes? The story goes pretty well and as the time goes the story itself would be more interesting (As to what I thought ofc everyone has their own preference) Hight hope for this novel As always keep up the good works......creator *respect*
Damn girl hurry up with them updates I need to know if they be smashin or not it all depends on that if I should continue reading this or not.......#PrioritysAreStraight:)))
Story is good.İf you guys are bored and want to kill some time than this story is definitely your cup of tea that's all................................................................
The work is readable and there are few to no grammar errors. Updates are somewhat frequent but not daily or predictable. So far the author has done some world building which by now starts to get into the meet of the conflict. The main character seems too attached to the system but the world in which the main character resides in is somewhat original since the author handcrafted this through world building as aforementioned.
face the chinese novel that has the same name is very bad, protagonist worm, his personality is a woman's slave, he does not know how to take advantage of the system, outside that he is weak, chinese is not good for anything bunch of filthy should be exterminated.
Really fun read, I'm enjoying every second of it. Keep it up author!...........................................................................
One of my problems with this story is the grammar, it could be much better, the sentences for example could be structured better, the change of scenes could be smoother, it falls short. Other problem is with the MC change of personality, that was way too forced, you could have make a better approach with something so important as that.
Its a damn good fanfic I reccomend this fanfic to our brother and sister out who are sitting in their homes during quarantine ........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌
I will immediately give you a score of 1/5. After all, the Naruto system in the magical world is something very disgusting, because many authors do not even realize the full power of the Naruto universe. For example, any representative of the Ootsutsuki clan will be able to erase this magical world only on a whim, and no one will be able to stop him, just as in the case of Sharingan, the author weakened it by 100 percent. Since chakra and mana are different types of energy, there should be no magical protection from sharingan, this is something alien to the magical world. And if the author wants to justify himself by saying that the chakra and magic coincide for some reason and they work on the same energy, so this means that it is even more difficult to protect yourself from this, then in the world of Naruto, Sharingan - is one of the strongest dojutsu.
did u drop the novel author? need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more
Is this supposed to be a fanfic of a bad chinese fanfic…? If you guys haven't read "In another world with naruto system" then do it's much better 300+ chapters of xianxia shinobi. Plus this has no logic 🥱
That, as they note, is the same price as the original Google Pixel, which could mean prices in other regions are the same too, meaning we might be looking at £599 / AU$1,079 for the Google Pixel 5 in the UK and Australia. That’s also a lot less - at least in the UK and the US - than the Google Pixel 4, which started at $799 / £669 / AU$1,049
Pretty good so far, I am hoping his hiatus won't go for too long. I can wait about 1-2 months but i really want it to end in like 2 more weeks? Anyway, story is good. It has that same feeling when i read these types of cultivating/fantasy genres that I read often. Honestly I am pretty bored with one of the fanfics I have read because it drastically changed to a slice of life, romance one instead of a system cultivating one but meh. Hope you can find something to use for continuing this fanfic or novel, I don't know.
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Author is a bit of a novice, but overall the book is great. Just some deviation from actual Naruto plot and some grammatical error.👍👍👍👍👍
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your story quite good i think..... but when more i read your story this is just like wuxia/xianxia novel or whatever is that I kind of don't like that
Awesome job so far author. So far I like the main character and the way you've set up the world. I was wondering if he would learn the other energies since he does have kage bunshin. Keep up the good work!!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Cool, cool, cool!)) I liked it, I look forward to continuing. I liked the pumping system and its strength. Especially the combination of shinobi with magicians. How do they protect. I hope you continue)) How long will the bro wait?)))
I liked the premise of this novel but the longer I read, the I got irritated. Why? Well because he uses a former assasin who was driven by revenge but after a while he acts like some whiny little girl who tries to look edgy. It's like having the backstory of sasuke but have naruto's goofiness but more pathetic. I could've live with it if it weren't for chapter 22. If you couldn't see how pathetic he is in that chapter then you're probably like him in front of girls.
Honestly it’s a great novel. I’m not one to usually write reviews but I just wanna say I hope that the author can continue posting this. I’ve seen too many good novels get dropped and I would hate to see it happen again here. 🎖
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Okay read! That's all I can say now. Still waiting for the story to progess more till I give an in depth review. The story is okay I guess till now. Very bad update stability.
._. Lazy Pig here, just read the goddamn book, it's pretty good ..........................................................................................................................................
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Very fun and cool novel ......................................................................................................................
Tiết lộ Spoiler Your novel is quite cool. There is originality in it and also I like the MC. He is not stupid or overly lusty. Keep up the good work. I'll do my best to support you.
The book is interesting change for a sword and magic world adding the new way for the MC to cultivate in this new world. So far interested main character and world I will be continuing to read and would recommend to everyone.
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Ninpo:reviewing no jutsu! (I can't say myself that I am good in reviewing As this is my first time ever reviewing a novel in my web novel career :v) So as the story goes you would see that there would be some boring times and as always that would always or the least boring times in novel yes? The story goes pretty well and as the time goes the story itself would be more interesting (As to what I thought ofc everyone has their own preference) Hight hope for this novel As always keep up the good works......creator *respect*
Damn girl hurry up with them updates I need to know if they be smashin or not it all depends on that if I should continue reading this or not.......#PrioritysAreStraight:)))
Story is good.İf you guys are bored and want to kill some time than this story is definitely your cup of tea that's all................................................................
The work is readable and there are few to no grammar errors. Updates are somewhat frequent but not daily or predictable. So far the author has done some world building which by now starts to get into the meet of the conflict. The main character seems too attached to the system but the world in which the main character resides in is somewhat original since the author handcrafted this through world building as aforementioned.
face the chinese novel that has the same name is very bad, protagonist worm, his personality is a woman's slave, he does not know how to take advantage of the system, outside that he is weak, chinese is not good for anything bunch of filthy should be exterminated.
Really fun read, I'm enjoying every second of it. Keep it up author!...........................................................................
One of my problems with this story is the grammar, it could be much better, the sentences for example could be structured better, the change of scenes could be smoother, it falls short. Other problem is with the MC change of personality, that was way too forced, you could have make a better approach with something so important as that.
Its a damn good fanfic I reccomend this fanfic to our brother and sister out who are sitting in their homes during quarantine ........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌
I will immediately give you a score of 1/5. After all, the Naruto system in the magical world is something very disgusting, because many authors do not even realize the full power of the Naruto universe. For example, any representative of the Ootsutsuki clan will be able to erase this magical world only on a whim, and no one will be able to stop him, just as in the case of Sharingan, the author weakened it by 100 percent. Since chakra and mana are different types of energy, there should be no magical protection from sharingan, this is something alien to the magical world. And if the author wants to justify himself by saying that the chakra and magic coincide for some reason and they work on the same energy, so this means that it is even more difficult to protect yourself from this, then in the world of Naruto, Sharingan - is one of the strongest dojutsu.