Acceptance - The Conscious Awakening

LV 3

kazesenken

There's something to be said about how the first moments of this book can instantly grip you and hold you in constant wonder about how things will turn out. From the well-written prose, to the dynamic character interactions, and moments of raw emotion - this is a novel that captures an audience from the get go and slowly reveals the world around a relationship turned sour. After we are presented with the premise of the novel, the way it is written encourages the reader to search for the answer, to figure out just what had happened to lead the characters to this point. Even normally mundane events are laced with tidbits of characterization and clues, all leading towards the big picture. The journey towards this is eloquently displayed through the character interactions. Though I spotted a few typos, these are easily ignorable. If you are looking for a novel with a lot of heart and you are prepared to have yours tugged along for the ride, then you can certainly give this novel a try.

LV 10

RedPandaChick

Loving this. I can totally relate to Irene and Ayden. I have been in both positions and the author has captured all of the messed up/soul shocking emotions felt. Some minor grammatical errors, but excellent read! So looking forward for more. Many thanks, Author!

LV 12

CailinMatthews

First, I'd like to say that this is a realistic novel from what I have seen so far. It may not be everyone's cup of tea but I do would like to recommend it. Not only does it tackle emotions and thoughts of the characters but also it is done well. In this kind of scenario, it's easy to over write in describing them. Also, it can be confusing because normally these jumbled inside a person's mind to the point that even the person himself/herself doesn't know how to express them. The novel does well in creating the flow of these emotions and thoughts so the readers could understand and relate it to it, The other thing that's great about this beginning is how it draws readers to the characters. They get to know them immediately based on what they're going through. It helps them become attached and follow through on their journey. Especially for anyone who had gone through heartbreak. There would be that tug to cheer the MC on to get back up and move on with her life for far more better things to come.

LV 3

Eerie_Olivine

Alright. I read all the available chapters right now. The author has a way of describing people's thoughts and emotions which help understand her characters. The title is called 'Acceptance' and now I can see why. So far the 6 chapters cover the night of the breakup. Each scenario play an important part on wha goes through it. We see both of the characters' sides and the road of getting over a breakup is long and rocky—especially over what happened. Both parties took a toll instead of the usual one sided hurt we often see because one of them turned out to be the antagonist of the story and showed no remorse. For improvement, I recommend adding more physical description like how the characters look like and other significant things around them. It wouldn't need to be everything but some of them do add character like what color is a person's room. Clothes also do the same. Anyway, I hope this story goes far! So the MC would reach happiness!

LV 5

amateur_reader

To the ardent readers out there , this book offers u an insight to a heartbroken soul. U can find it relatable if u have been through the same . Her journey can open u to new perspectives.

LV 10

Toastiee

I usually read fantasy books and litRPG, so this novel is a really different thing for me to read. However it is probably one of my favourite novels in my reading list, it's such a good read. Explaining emotions and the troubles that Irene and the people around her go through, it's a sad but a very touching thing to read. It shows the faults we have as humans but then it also shows the things that we should be proud of, I'm looking forward to continue reading this novel and what will become of Irene. Thank you Author :)

LV 2

floramagical12

Beautiful story😍😍................................. Author never disappoints her reader she always come with good story which express all the emotions💕💕

LV 3

bestreaderbordZ

Just amazing writing from this author. I hope you go far because you are doing a good job. The novel is wonderfully written, a near perfection and I love it.

LV 14

Overlord_Venus

Well, I started to read this story just because it is my competitor in WPC. Well, glad I read it. The story begins in what looks like a normal quarrel when you see how the ML screw things up....grandly. By the end of the first chapter, I was getting angry at the ML (I am shocked that I could feel anger) for what he did. The story is nothing new based on my reading experience but the way in which the author delivers it, you can expect a wonderful story. you will feel yourself emotionally drawn to the characters, but (don't break your phones out of anger folks, they are expensive). All I can say is that the author seems to know what she is doing. Had this not been a WPC entry, I could have leisurely read this but as a competitor, I am going to stint on my praises, humph.

LV 5

HavenlyJeep

I'll summarize my experience with this novel in one sentence. I read the first chapter, the characters gripped me, and after that, all I could remember was the frustration of finishing the 6 chapters available. And beyond this one sentence, It might seem rude of the lowly Jeep here to suggest this, but I think more description on the character's looks and surroundings would make the scenes more vivid. Other than that, this is on my list to read (in addition to my already packed TBR pile) Don't let others discourage you, author. This is a great story. I'll be waiting for the chapters to arrive. :D

This book is great! Love the fact that two chapters get uploaded daily! The storyline is amazing. Love how the story is still growing! I can't wait to read more!

LV 3

MachaKitKat

My emotions are running rapant in this story! Ugh, the author does so well to bring in the readers into the events. I can already tell it will be quite a ride ahead. I see it's entered in a Writing Prompt Contest. Best of luck, dear author!

LV 3

Melissa_Nepal

So far the book is great, it's uploading atleast two chapters a day and its detailed. The story has developed a lot in just for chapters. Super happy I found this novel!!!

LV 1

LinaWrites

I have no idea how I found this story, but it’s really good! I hope you keep writing! I cannot wait to see the outcome of all the characters!

LV 5

Veronica8

A believable story of relationships between people who make mistakes, find their strengths in accepting perceived truths and, I guess, finding themselves to be able to accept their other. The writing is honest and relatable. Thanks LostInFiction for keeping this story going. I'm proud of your efforts and talent. You rock. ❤️

LV 2

bai_lu

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 4

Augustine_Loritha

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 2

abeach

ok so this book is to good I just want to keep reading it cuz it holds you so tight that you can't wait to see how it turns out and the characters are good

LV 2

ReMichaelis

Amazing. Let me start with saying that I am not generally one to leave reviews. But after reading this there is no way I could stay silent. The writing was done with incredible skill. The way the author captured the train of thought of the characters was masterful. Whilst reading, the raw emotion led me to feel flashbacks to my own life, but this time it was different. Usually I can relate to only one character, only one side of the story, but this time, I felt as if I understood them both. I understood the pain she felt because of his actions, and I understood his actions because of desperations. Though not mentioned explicitly, I can imagine many emotions that led him to do what he did. The feelings of him not wanting to seem weak in front of her, not wanting to make her think that he doubted her. He thought he could get away with what he did, being led on by his friend. This was truly a work of art. I wish the author all the best, and I plan to read more of your incredible work.