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I only have one thing to say about this novel and that is this novel is one of the worst story I've seen on this site I can't even tell If the characters are talking in mind our out loud The persons who gave this novel more than 3 stars are either bots or fools who don't know good novels
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-i dont know even know whats the look of the MC on this fanfic novel -how about adding " " for the character thats talking and ' ' for the character thats talking on thoughts -there are some grammar error but its its still okay its just im getting side effect xD -the chapters of this novel need some fixing -i just hope after fixing the chapters of this fanfic novel it will update again base on your schedule (and just dropping in the middle of the story)
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Well I as a author can advice reader that my grammar is trash and story I don't know. Started for fun and to share my ideas so other author can write OP from starting MC. SO ADVICE READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
Please not another DxD fanpic. No originality and boring. It should be in the trash can..................................................................why am I putting dots? Coz its a waste of time to even be reviewing this.
I only have one thing to say about this novel and that is this novel is one of the worst story I've seen on this site I can't even tell If the characters are talking in mind our out loud The persons who gave this novel more than 3 stars are either bots or fools who don't know good novels
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler (TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)(TT)
;):-!;););););););););););););):;);););););););););););););););););););););););););););););););););););););););););):-!:-!:-!:-!:-!:-!;);););)
Tiết lộ Spoiler -i dont know even know whats the look of the MC on this fanfic novel -how about adding " " for the character thats talking and ' ' for the character thats talking on thoughts -there are some grammar error but its its still okay its just im getting side effect xD -the chapters of this novel need some fixing -i just hope after fixing the chapters of this fanfic novel it will update again base on your schedule (and just dropping in the middle of the story)
Yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy........................................................... ... .. . . . .. . .. .. .............................. . ...... ... . . . . . . . .
Tiết lộ Spoiler Well I as a author can advice reader that my grammar is trash and story I don't know. Started for fun and to share my ideas so other author can write OP from starting MC. SO ADVICE READ AT YOUR OWN RISK
Please not another DxD fanpic. No originality and boring. It should be in the trash can..................................................................why am I putting dots? Coz its a waste of time to even be reviewing this.
Put more Chapter ++++++