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If you like those stories where the main character goes on adventures in a parallel medieval-like world, then you've come to the right place. What also makes this story unique is that Andrei, the novel's protagonist isn't summoned as some kind of powerful hero. Instead, he tried to figure out his way all by himself. The way each chapter ends makes you want to dive into the next chapter immediately. The words in this novel are not complicated, and yet they provide vivid sceneries to the mind of the readers. Overall, this story is very interesting and I recommend it for anyone searching for great stories on this website!
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail. Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters. I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building. The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand. Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem! I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
Sorry people but the author have dropped this novel,so as the other one.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I have really enjoyed the story and the world building to it. I am currently on 112 and I am really enjoying this war between the light and dark elves. As I haven't finished this story and seeing the amount of remaining chapters I want to ask have you taken a break from this story? And if you have do you intend on finishing it?
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Chapter 46 needs update. Everything is quite entertaining yet reading experience wise it fails. The font built in in the Android app is useless, I dont know whats the problem about this. This will be a neutral review. Having sensitive in reading app typography affects my review as well. I hope there will an update this will change if theres none, so be it.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact cttbx123@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this story is a complete tear jerker this is coming from a dude! I don’t know what else to put so uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Not going to lie I was caught from the start. The way the main character developed from a boy confused from awaking in the middle of nowhere, to a badass soldier all because of the time he spent with the ones he cares about and that a tragedy that fell upon His last loved one may curse his life again is what drives him in this new world.
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I’m just gonna say it...I love the fucking book cover so much it’s the only reason. I even started to read this so try this book OR ELSE!!!!!!!!
Great i love it can't wait for more chapters andrei got dense after going to the elves it's kinda sad claire is sleaping 私はそれが大好きです、私はそれをとても愛しています
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This is kind of good . Although it look like the mc did not have a system or a superskill. The author make it that he can make do with intelligence. Though not also super like itachi or shikamura but still readable
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Personally I really liked the character development not only of the MC but also of the secondary characters, it's rare to see that in Isekai and that's what made me abandon the genre a while ago. Another positive point, the author takes his time to describe the situation, I think that in a good novel the author shouldn't rush the story since without pictures you need a lot of details to appreciate the story. Good job, nice discovery for me 👍 Like what has been said in other reviews, I think the biggest flaw of this novel is the spelling errors, I advise the author to correct them, at least in Chapter 1, since a lot of new readers will not go any further.
If you like those stories where the main character goes on adventures in a parallel medieval-like world, then you've come to the right place. What also makes this story unique is that Andrei, the novel's protagonist isn't summoned as some kind of powerful hero. Instead, he tried to figure out his way all by himself. The way each chapter ends makes you want to dive into the next chapter immediately. The words in this novel are not complicated, and yet they provide vivid sceneries to the mind of the readers. Overall, this story is very interesting and I recommend it for anyone searching for great stories on this website!
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail. Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters. I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building. The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand. Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem! I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
Sorry people but the author have dropped this novel,so as the other one.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I have really enjoyed the story and the world building to it. I am currently on 112 and I am really enjoying this war between the light and dark elves. As I haven't finished this story and seeing the amount of remaining chapters I want to ask have you taken a break from this story? And if you have do you intend on finishing it?
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Chapter 46 needs update. Everything is quite entertaining yet reading experience wise it fails. The font built in in the Android app is useless, I dont know whats the problem about this. This will be a neutral review. Having sensitive in reading app typography affects my review as well. I hope there will an update this will change if theres none, so be it.
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Nice & Good 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact cttbx123@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
this story is a complete tear jerker this is coming from a dude! I don’t know what else to put so uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Hi there! Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact litrpgwritingcontest_review@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Not going to lie I was caught from the start. The way the main character developed from a boy confused from awaking in the middle of nowhere, to a badass soldier all because of the time he spent with the ones he cares about and that a tragedy that fell upon His last loved one may curse his life again is what drives him in this new world.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Just Harvesting Some EXP!Just Harvesting Some EXP!Just Harvesting Some EXP!Just Harvesting Some EXP!Just Harvesting Some EXP!Just Harvesting Some EXP!
I’m just gonna say it...I love the fucking book cover so much it’s the only reason. I even started to read this so try this book OR ELSE!!!!!!!!
Great i love it can't wait for more chapters andrei got dense after going to the elves it's kinda sad claire is sleaping 私はそれが大好きです、私はそれをとても愛しています
Review is free I need exp so don’t mind me hey hey Review is free I need exp so don’t mind me hey hey Review is free I need exp so don’t mind me hey hey Review is free I need exp so don’t mind me hey hey Review is free I need exp so don’t mind me hey hey
This is kind of good . Although it look like the mc did not have a system or a superskill. The author make it that he can make do with intelligence. Though not also super like itachi or shikamura but still readable
Jffjjrbubj8fy7fugfhighidgufhivhjcgcuyvhhchubvhguvjkvguctuvuguthfyudtufyudg7rtyfyifygu8gugugihfhifhighighogjkgjogjgjgjgjhjnjnkbtdtwdzrstcgcfsdcgvhcrctbin
Personally I really liked the character development not only of the MC but also of the secondary characters, it's rare to see that in Isekai and that's what made me abandon the genre a while ago. Another positive point, the author takes his time to describe the situation, I think that in a good novel the author shouldn't rush the story since without pictures you need a lot of details to appreciate the story. Good job, nice discovery for me 👍 Like what has been said in other reviews, I think the biggest flaw of this novel is the spelling errors, I advise the author to correct them, at least in Chapter 1, since a lot of new readers will not go any further.