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The first was quite good but the moment he met his ex it became **** he doesn’t explain what the system is even though everyone can have one after killing a monster and he doesn’t tell anyone anything even tho it can make them follow him and you should expect arrogant young masters and **** here even tho his ex had a chance of killing the young master **** she didn’t she said something abt it’s against jsutice ****
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I think i found my new number one am in love.................................................................................................................
Good story Xp ….......................................…............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The world background and the writing style is good. The only negative point is the braindead foolish MC(i read till ch68 in royalroad). No one can be more irritatingly idiotic than this MC and if anyone is more idiotic then they will directly come under the mental illness category. He is so idiotic that he cant even realise the most obvious of things. The author might be making this MC a super idiot lucky b@stard for the progression of the plot but it will definitely lead to the failure of this good story. I hope he realises it soon corrects it. If he does that, this story will be the best. But this wouldnt have been a drawback if the author had named it "The brainless fool that killled the first monster" or if he had said in the introduction that the MC will have some mental problems.
the story was ok at first but then mc starts to have negative iq and retardation syndrome around ch 45 and 52 which pretty much ruin the story via author forcing situations that is uncharacteristic of the mc which only leads me to think its beta mc and dummy mc furthermore when mc is in building he doesn't even make smart decisions like why would he now think about his status screen first omg i don't wanna think about more things that's wrong with the mc the more i think the more i realize was stupid things that he did in the story READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING ELSE *shrugs*
I fucking love this novel, if I had to choose a novel to read for the rest of my life, it would be this one. The only thing that annoys me a little is that the chapters are a little short for my tastes, you always crave for more chapters of this novel. Read it, it's very good.
This story is pretty food but the updating doled and how short the chapters are makes it eh how do I put this aggravating buy everything else is pretty good
SRIUS, tidak ada yang memberi tags Tragic untuk novel ini??, Atau lemah ke kuat??, Sudah updatenya lama, ceritanya lama" kaya novel" naek juga yang udah stuck!!
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Damm.... It's good.... I like how the mc is being developed and hope to a good backstory btw ml and fl....... Also release more chapters .... Overall a good until I have read...
Up to chapter i read its good but dude pls name the chapters so it can make some people read it readily as not all people will try to read every novel in webnovel wish you dont discontinue and continue to write it wisely :)
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact avarohm_review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
The first was quite good but the moment he met his ex it became **** he doesn’t explain what the system is even though everyone can have one after killing a monster and he doesn’t tell anyone anything even tho it can make them follow him and you should expect arrogant young masters and **** here even tho his ex had a chance of killing the young master **** she didn’t she said something abt it’s against jsutice ****
Tiết lộ Spoiler I think i found my new number one am in love.................................................................................................................
Good story Xp ….......................................…............................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The world background and the writing style is good. The only negative point is the braindead foolish MC(i read till ch68 in royalroad). No one can be more irritatingly idiotic than this MC and if anyone is more idiotic then they will directly come under the mental illness category. He is so idiotic that he cant even realise the most obvious of things. The author might be making this MC a super idiot lucky b@stard for the progression of the plot but it will definitely lead to the failure of this good story. I hope he realises it soon corrects it. If he does that, this story will be the best. But this wouldnt have been a drawback if the author had named it "The brainless fool that killled the first monster" or if he had said in the introduction that the MC will have some mental problems.
the story was ok at first but then mc starts to have negative iq and retardation syndrome around ch 45 and 52 which pretty much ruin the story via author forcing situations that is uncharacteristic of the mc which only leads me to think its beta mc and dummy mc furthermore when mc is in building he doesn't even make smart decisions like why would he now think about his status screen first omg i don't wanna think about more things that's wrong with the mc the more i think the more i realize was stupid things that he did in the story READ THIS IF YOU HAVE NOTHING ELSE *shrugs*
I fucking love this novel, if I had to choose a novel to read for the rest of my life, it would be this one. The only thing that annoys me a little is that the chapters are a little short for my tastes, you always crave for more chapters of this novel. Read it, it's very good.
This story is pretty food but the updating doled and how short the chapters are makes it eh how do I put this aggravating buy everything else is pretty good
SRIUS, tidak ada yang memberi tags Tragic untuk novel ini??, Atau lemah ke kuat??, Sudah updatenya lama, ceritanya lama" kaya novel" naek juga yang udah stuck!!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Damm.... It's good.... I like how the mc is being developed and hope to a good backstory btw ml and fl....... Also release more chapters .... Overall a good until I have read...
Up to chapter i read its good but dude pls name the chapters so it can make some people read it readily as not all people will try to read every novel in webnovel wish you dont discontinue and continue to write it wisely :)
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Reincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa