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Tiết lộ SpoilerThis is one of my favorite fan fics hands down and if you get a chance could you please resume chapters 🔥🤞🏽🙏🏽
Oh sorry, but I can't... That's a steaming pile of... Well, you know... Maybe it will improve in later chapters, as the author said, but let's face it, having to read 40 chapters for the story to start getting decent is complicated, I have more to do... I could barely bear to read another one recently that needed to read 25 chapters before it was decent... But, that's it, typical simple-minded Japanese MC, who thinks that life is some kind of perverted fantasy and that all women are walking holes for his pleasure, naive, he literally saves the woman from the group that tried to kill him and kills the two guys, and the explanation for this is silly and completely ridiculous, in his mind, because she caught the old man's attention(without knowing he was there) when the old man was about to kill(or do something bad) to him, the MC thinks this is some kind of life debt, it simply seems that the author twisted the plot so that the random female character doesn't die... Apart from the fact that apparently the MC is in a forest in the human world, a forest that Tiamat is in, and canonically she should be in the forest in the underworld after the great war, after all, shortly after it is mentioned that Ddraig and Albion have already fought and turned into Sacred Gear... In other words, completely bugged.... Not to mention that all the chapters I read until the moment I stopped are a shameless Copy and Paste of the Novel from which the author "was inspired", and like, I understand that it's fanfic, but you have to create a fanfic and repost the same thing, right? ... Rough...
no idea what the authors thought process was and what he smoked but anything that was even close to good or decent was thrown into the garbage not even 2min later its just sad.
I think it's very good. I always liked the dragons and with this story its fantastic, in my opinion
Very good history like how the Mc grow. only bad in this is the Ch are shorts or take so much time in publish.°Meow°
Es una buena novela, sobre todo el personaje esta bien estructurado, pero con los últimos capítulos empezó a desviarse un poco de lo que inicialmente era, la recomiendo [img=recommend][img=recommend]
read this a long time ago but forgot to review, start is kind of bad and almost dropped but im very glad i didnt since you can see how much author improved over time. its my first and favorite dxd fanfic without a doubt, highly recommend.
Slow start to the quality of the story but tbh once Mc joined Grigori the story was really good the character really developed well from an idiot to warrior. I think that the stats are to misleading tbh since most people don't know what his true stats are once he uses all his skills. World design in dxd was really good being able to combine percy jackson with dxd but Fate was terrible and really underestimated or maybe doesn't know the true monsters of Fate like the conceptual enemies that you just can't measure the strength with stats. Although like his announcement about his motivation it kinda showed that the fate arc was subpar it lacks character interaction a lot of things were internal thoughts I think he should've focused more on developing relationships with different characters in the fate universe from clock tower, two shiki, two aozaki, Twenty-seven Dead Apostle Ancestors and many more. you also have benn focusing to much on how mc would fit in the plot. remember how you can feel happy about reading the story
Boy do i hate novels that keep the mc under monitoring.. and this novel has 2 beings behind him! also, the fact that the author himself is telling us that the mc will be dumb for the first 30-40 chapters doesn't help either. I'll give it 10 more chapters, if this dumb handholding doesn't go away i'm dropping.
At first I thought this would be very good, until I read 120 chapters I finally found that this is no different from the others. Especially why does an MC have to be perfect to the point where even cooking is better than FMC, I mean with MC's ability that continues to grow in the end MC becomes the strongest can FMC do nothing but satisfy desires? Give FMC the use of being a good wife and mother, not just to satisfy desires, because we know that in the end, MCs become the strongest if all MCs do what's the point in having a partner?
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before i started reading this i thought it would be really good, but the mc is just a big pervert who is also the biggest simp he is cringe and really stupid i mean like really really stupid its like he doesn't think and just waits for either his system, tia or god to spell things out for him also there is so much contradiction in this story Example: mc saves a girl that was with 2 other males who wanted to kill him his reason? (she saved me so ill return the favor) she didn't save him she didn't even know he was there she just talked to the male asking him what he was doing which distracted him, but okay, after saving the girl he says he is never going to risk his life for someone again, after a couple chaps he goes and risks his life to save kuroka and koneko, there is a lot more that would make u have a headache.
Si no fuera porque tengo que escribir cierta cantidad de palabras solo usaría unas pocas palabras para resumir al MC "ISSEI 2.0" y esta evolución a peor por eso lo dejo, la historia es genial me gusto mucho pero el MC me dio asco así que me largo, espero no ofenderte Autor
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The mc is a lvl higher than stupid my Mortal mind can't comprehend. I read 20+ chapters and the thing is I don't like enemies knowing the special thing that made the mc unique knows by ppl and the higher world's thing and other reincarnators with system.
Tiết lộ SpoilerEefghjrrgtttttttttt Eefghjrrgtttttttttt Eefghjrrgttttttttttbuena saquen más pero me gustaría que Gilgamesh también se fortalezca como antagonista o algo asi
i like this book up until the percy jackson arc. i mean y the trouble going across country?? just turn into a dragon and fly... u just evolved also... makes 0 sense they couldve all rode on his back smh
Tiết lộ SpoilerA master piece is all I can think of this book I read all 290 chapter i still want more but won’t get The character was really good wasnt op and I liked how it didn’t take years for him To get 3 levels I also liked how he was the fighting was really good well described I hope you pick this back up after your next book or novel becuase I really wish for this to contine
This story is going great! Can’t wait for the next chapter, hope the Author won’t keep the readers waiting any longer. Besides, the plot is amazing and it is fantastic, though I’m still trying to find out where are the images.
I really enjoy this piece of literature. It can be a little jarring and can be slow at times but it has a nice build up in certain arcs, and is all around one of the best Deus Dragon fics out there.
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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I am sorry but I can't read this the writing is bad the Grammer is bad sometimes a whole chapter doesn't make sense ... but the plot and story is a interesting concept so keep writing on tell you get better 👍
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I have to say, I have been reading a few reviews on this novel and to say I am not disappointed would be a huge understatement. Sure, the first few chapters were totally unbearable with Mc's perversive personality and dumbness, the story itself took a turn for the better. Our Mc seems to have grown up, he acts and behaves like a proper and mature person, he is rational and cold about situations and doesn't give in to emotions very easily which is a good thing. Surely the biggest improvement has been his behavior around the opposite gender, in the first few chapters, his personality was just like a horny dog and nothing more. It really was unbearable and made my want to drop the novel but I didn't and continue to read it to this day. The reviews state the truth but they aren't up-to-date, this story has progressed a lot since the start and the author's style of writing has also seemed to mature quite a lot. The character description of Azazel is also spot-on and interesting, the direction of the story is also interesting so is the upcoming Holy-grail arc. I personally would like people to once again read this novel and update their reviews, it doesn't give a good impression to readers who only read the bad beginning and drop the story. The author-san can maybe edit those chapters and also delete those reviews after asking the readers to post a much-updated review. This novel has the potential to be a 4.5 or 4.6-star novel, it is very well written and designed. I hope people do update their review after reading my post. Thank you for your time guys..... Stay safe and stay inside.... Diseda~....
главный герой тупой как и сам автор произведения этого гавно. Удали это гавно с сайта автор далбаеб. Идите все *****. аллаоаоаоаоаоаооаооаоаоаоаоаоалаоаоаоаллалалаоалаоалаоаооаоаоаоаоаоалаоаоаоаоаоаооаоаоаоаоао
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis is one of my favorite fan fics hands down and if you get a chance could you please resume chapters 🔥🤞🏽🙏🏽
Oh sorry, but I can't... That's a steaming pile of... Well, you know... Maybe it will improve in later chapters, as the author said, but let's face it, having to read 40 chapters for the story to start getting decent is complicated, I have more to do... I could barely bear to read another one recently that needed to read 25 chapters before it was decent... But, that's it, typical simple-minded Japanese MC, who thinks that life is some kind of perverted fantasy and that all women are walking holes for his pleasure, naive, he literally saves the woman from the group that tried to kill him and kills the two guys, and the explanation for this is silly and completely ridiculous, in his mind, because she caught the old man's attention(without knowing he was there) when the old man was about to kill(or do something bad) to him, the MC thinks this is some kind of life debt, it simply seems that the author twisted the plot so that the random female character doesn't die... Apart from the fact that apparently the MC is in a forest in the human world, a forest that Tiamat is in, and canonically she should be in the forest in the underworld after the great war, after all, shortly after it is mentioned that Ddraig and Albion have already fought and turned into Sacred Gear... In other words, completely bugged.... Not to mention that all the chapters I read until the moment I stopped are a shameless Copy and Paste of the Novel from which the author "was inspired", and like, I understand that it's fanfic, but you have to create a fanfic and repost the same thing, right? ... Rough...
no idea what the authors thought process was and what he smoked but anything that was even close to good or decent was thrown into the garbage not even 2min later its just sad.
I think it's very good. I always liked the dragons and with this story its fantastic, in my opinion
Very good history like how the Mc grow. only bad in this is the Ch are shorts or take so much time in publish.°Meow°
Es una buena novela, sobre todo el personaje esta bien estructurado, pero con los últimos capítulos empezó a desviarse un poco de lo que inicialmente era, la recomiendo [img=recommend][img=recommend]
read this a long time ago but forgot to review, start is kind of bad and almost dropped but im very glad i didnt since you can see how much author improved over time. its my first and favorite dxd fanfic without a doubt, highly recommend.
Slow start to the quality of the story but tbh once Mc joined Grigori the story was really good the character really developed well from an idiot to warrior. I think that the stats are to misleading tbh since most people don't know what his true stats are once he uses all his skills. World design in dxd was really good being able to combine percy jackson with dxd but Fate was terrible and really underestimated or maybe doesn't know the true monsters of Fate like the conceptual enemies that you just can't measure the strength with stats. Although like his announcement about his motivation it kinda showed that the fate arc was subpar it lacks character interaction a lot of things were internal thoughts I think he should've focused more on developing relationships with different characters in the fate universe from clock tower, two shiki, two aozaki, Twenty-seven Dead Apostle Ancestors and many more. you also have benn focusing to much on how mc would fit in the plot. remember how you can feel happy about reading the story
Boy do i hate novels that keep the mc under monitoring.. and this novel has 2 beings behind him! also, the fact that the author himself is telling us that the mc will be dumb for the first 30-40 chapters doesn't help either. I'll give it 10 more chapters, if this dumb handholding doesn't go away i'm dropping.
At first I thought this would be very good, until I read 120 chapters I finally found that this is no different from the others. Especially why does an MC have to be perfect to the point where even cooking is better than FMC, I mean with MC's ability that continues to grow in the end MC becomes the strongest can FMC do nothing but satisfy desires? Give FMC the use of being a good wife and mother, not just to satisfy desires, because we know that in the end, MCs become the strongest if all MCs do what's the point in having a partner?
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before i started reading this i thought it would be really good, but the mc is just a big pervert who is also the biggest simp he is cringe and really stupid i mean like really really stupid its like he doesn't think and just waits for either his system, tia or god to spell things out for him also there is so much contradiction in this story Example: mc saves a girl that was with 2 other males who wanted to kill him his reason? (she saved me so ill return the favor) she didn't save him she didn't even know he was there she just talked to the male asking him what he was doing which distracted him, but okay, after saving the girl he says he is never going to risk his life for someone again, after a couple chaps he goes and risks his life to save kuroka and koneko, there is a lot more that would make u have a headache.
Si no fuera porque tengo que escribir cierta cantidad de palabras solo usaría unas pocas palabras para resumir al MC "ISSEI 2.0" y esta evolución a peor por eso lo dejo, la historia es genial me gusto mucho pero el MC me dio asco así que me largo, espero no ofenderte Autor
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The mc is a lvl higher than stupid my Mortal mind can't comprehend. I read 20+ chapters and the thing is I don't like enemies knowing the special thing that made the mc unique knows by ppl and the higher world's thing and other reincarnators with system.
Tiết lộ SpoilerEefghjrrgtttttttttt Eefghjrrgtttttttttt Eefghjrrgttttttttttbuena saquen más pero me gustaría que Gilgamesh también se fortalezca como antagonista o algo asi
i like this book up until the percy jackson arc. i mean y the trouble going across country?? just turn into a dragon and fly... u just evolved also... makes 0 sense they couldve all rode on his back smh
Tiết lộ SpoilerA master piece is all I can think of this book I read all 290 chapter i still want more but won’t get The character was really good wasnt op and I liked how it didn’t take years for him To get 3 levels I also liked how he was the fighting was really good well described I hope you pick this back up after your next book or novel becuase I really wish for this to contine
This story is going great! Can’t wait for the next chapter, hope the Author won’t keep the readers waiting any longer. Besides, the plot is amazing and it is fantastic, though I’m still trying to find out where are the images.
I really enjoy this piece of literature. It can be a little jarring and can be slow at times but it has a nice build up in certain arcs, and is all around one of the best Deus Dragon fics out there.
Good job! Continue in the same spirit. zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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I am sorry but I can't read this the writing is bad the Grammer is bad sometimes a whole chapter doesn't make sense ... but the plot and story is a interesting concept so keep writing on tell you get better 👍
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I have to say, I have been reading a few reviews on this novel and to say I am not disappointed would be a huge understatement. Sure, the first few chapters were totally unbearable with Mc's perversive personality and dumbness, the story itself took a turn for the better. Our Mc seems to have grown up, he acts and behaves like a proper and mature person, he is rational and cold about situations and doesn't give in to emotions very easily which is a good thing. Surely the biggest improvement has been his behavior around the opposite gender, in the first few chapters, his personality was just like a horny dog and nothing more. It really was unbearable and made my want to drop the novel but I didn't and continue to read it to this day. The reviews state the truth but they aren't up-to-date, this story has progressed a lot since the start and the author's style of writing has also seemed to mature quite a lot. The character description of Azazel is also spot-on and interesting, the direction of the story is also interesting so is the upcoming Holy-grail arc. I personally would like people to once again read this novel and update their reviews, it doesn't give a good impression to readers who only read the bad beginning and drop the story. The author-san can maybe edit those chapters and also delete those reviews after asking the readers to post a much-updated review. This novel has the potential to be a 4.5 or 4.6-star novel, it is very well written and designed. I hope people do update their review after reading my post. Thank you for your time guys..... Stay safe and stay inside.... Diseda~....