/ Fantasy / Cutest in the Omniverse [OLD]

Cutest in the Omniverse [OLD] Nguyên gốc

Cutest in the Omniverse [OLD]

Fantasy 21 Chương 532.0K Lượt xem
Tác giả: DestroKind

4.7 (25 số lượng người đọc)

Đã đọc
Về Mục lục

Tóm tắt

Hello all reading this! This is the old version of Cutest in the Omniverse as I am currently rewriting everything in the new book by the same name but on a different account, you can search it up under the name ExplosiveBubble.

The new book would be better planned out as originally I had minimal planning and thus made it harder for it to last long with improper planning and though Cutest in the Omniverse would be quite an open novel with a lot of ideas i wanted to write, it wouldn't be well written IMO and I'd lose motivation from being unable to keep track of everything.

Hope you'll come read the rewrite!

Join the discord!
https://discord.gg/JbMr9wRX7K

General Audiences

Người hâm mộ

  1. Kioga
    Kioga Đóng góp 250
  2. Too_cool_to_stab
    Too_cool_to_stab Đóng góp 4
  3. Up_gola
    Up_gola Đóng góp 3

Tình trạng nguồn điện hàng tuần

Rank -- Xếp hạng Quyền lực
Stone -- Đá Quyền lực

Bạn cũng có thể thích

25Các đánh giá

4.7

  • Chất lượng bài viết
  • Tính ổn định của các bản cập nhật
  • Phát triển câu chuyện
  • Thiết kế nhân vật
  • Bối cảnh thế giới

Chia sẻ suy nghĩ của bạn với người khác

Viết đánh giá
Ms_Magician

This story is top notch. Now don't be put off by the genderbender as it does not affect the story whatsoever. There are no grammar errors to point out and the story flows smoothly. The interactions are good and well cute. I am looking forward to more as we rarely find good female MCs. About the world building part, I am not sure as not much as been shown but judging by the wish it seems great. Anyway it's a hidden gem worth reading.

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
Cecil_2005

DON'T JUDGE THE BOOK BY IT'S COVER. Well, I originally thought that the story is going to be lame and some annoying plots. Oh boy I was wrong! The story is fantastic! I would recommend you reading this millions times! Keep up the good work, author!

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
0PandaFox

This book was really good when i read it i was even here when it still released chapters so its sad that even after all this time the book didn’t continue signaling the book was dropped. If you see this author then I ask you to continue this marvelous book.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Ghost1645

Just found this and noticed it had no reviews after reading it, so I'll leave one. The writing quality is top notch with good sized chapters, the world and character building is steady and interesting and I can't wait to see how the story progresses, I would however like to see more character interaction as she grows, with less info dumpiness(mainly just the magic development, it's good, I've just read early magic development one too many times😂) overall just keep it up and it'll be great 👍

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Kioga
LV 14 Badge

This novel is very good. Although from the moment until now(for me ch.21) things have been pretty slow, it is understandable because the MC is in its infancy, where she doesn't have much liberty, which makes it a good time to expand the world, which to the author's credit, is done very well, a very promising novel at it's cradle. Writing-wise, it is well done, can't find much to nitpick, probably because I'm not an expert at English, but oh well. I have mentioned the pacing before, and the elements in the story are well detailed. Regarding stability, from the info I can gather, this novel was updating daily until the new year, I do not know what happened to Mr.Author, but I can only be sincere and say that three months is a lot of waiting, and I want to encourage the author to keep writing, because this novel has very promising aspects and a good writing quality in general, wish to read more of this very much. The characters are detailed, and until now, have not shown much complexity, mostly because this novel is just starting, I can only say that the main character is growing to be cute, is smart and determined, can't say much else, but it is not bad in any way. The world looks very promising being a futuristic magitech one, a lot can be built upon it and it's potential only depends on the Author's creativeness, as he has already inserted some interesting concepts, all is good and I trust that the author will build this world very well. Again, from the time this review is being written, the novel is only at it's beginnings and there is not much to be reviewed, with me mostly just betting on the Author to keep a good work, if you want an calm, magic related and cute novel, this one is a good one, if it hasn't been dropped, I hope not... Really. I just want to see this grow.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Rojikku
LV 14 Badge

Cute! I'll probably drop it if she gets a male love interest, though. But until then, I'm enjoying the ideas and the story. It's got its interesting points, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops.

4yr
Xem 3 lời trả lời
Chirichirichiri

This story is incredibly relaxing to read, and it had me laughing a lot and there were so, so many cute moments. It’s definitely not the kind of story that I usually find on this site, but a kind I wish there was more of. It made me very happy 😊

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Wardian_Dust

I really enjoy the story. it's really unfortunate that it is dropped. I truly wish I could read more.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

img
3yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
UnknownKind

I'm a beginner novel writer and read ur book and I like it so I hope we can help each other grow and hopefully u can leave a vote or at least a review

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Raion_Utsaketitu

I love the story. Plot. Characters. And valky. Please give a a humanoid body. And more updates. The story is great, perfect, and absolutely awsome.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Demiurge_Ohara

Mmm... whayt should I say... The Mc have some sort of OCD or Fetish on Cute Female's, His... decision is full of absurdity and the world is... not much... this is a Gender bender mc. Mc is Naive, has Happy go lucky personality ( try referring it to Naruto on his Child hood ) He's a man child... Also who the heck use an Old SHOVEL ( of all things... ) as your Bond Weapon_object in the Multi world threat. The Side characters are not worth mentioning, I haven't read it pass 6 but... the sheer absurdity is just... *Shiver*. The only worthy of it is the English language quality ( probably his mother language which is Rare... But wasted on this... Mc or story, ) Sorry author but the Chats are all 5 star and im not even sure if they're properly rating.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
gamabunda4873

Way better than the description led on lucky i felt adventurous Fresh world type Like the mc doesn't feel like she* is the whole and only being in the universe and everything revolves around her*(even if thats what she wants) High expectations because of high quality hopeful for no degradation

Tiết lộ Spoiler
4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Orthanos

Dude I don't know why but is this MOE.. THIS HAS TO BE MOE. ITS MOE!!! I am getting diabetes from reading this! TOO CUTE! God damn it!!! Release more chapters!!!

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
KonekoDxd8

👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
PrinceOfSleep

a word to describe this Romance, [Relaxing]. Just click on the chapters and read it is worth it. ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰🥰☺️🥰☺️☺️☺️🥰☺️☺️🥰🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰☺️🥰

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
adawhiter

I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
MerkurySol

It's a really great story with nice character it's just sad that there weren't any updates since a year ago. hshdbdbdbdbbddbdbdbddnkdkk

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Tipota
LV 11 Badge

I haven't read it yet but the moment I saw you day cutest of the omniverse I'm in bro I gave u a stone right away man this is going to be amazing and I'm exited to read it ok bye

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
YueLqn

Love it! giving update stability a 4 because there have been no chapters since last year QwQ Great story, nice parents and the MC is pretty smart, and cute uwu want moar pls nwn

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Nik_2280

This is awesome story. Very cute and nice, I like heroine and her parents. I wait continue. I like this world and magic system. I want to see the future appearance of general heroine.

3yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời

Tác giả DestroKind