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This is dope......look the chps ,story, grammar ,everything is dope...just continue... suggestion: no training others...I mean this is a military dude from our world,harry potter and voldy all mixed together along with the memories and experience..this mother****er better be stronger than albus...and the romance..pls keep it happy and not some tragic sad ****....if harem keep it small...the bella sisters?
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Your story has a lot to recommend, at first I was a little off-put with the amalgam of souls but you have blended together a not quite unbelievable story. Cheers!