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Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
This novel has serious potential from all that I've read mc should be making a religion soon enough and have a tsundare crab goddess as a wife maybe after they grow stronger they can have a human form I would like to think that mc has a domain in knowledge and darkness and little god to have a domain in sand and light hope more chaps
This is one of my favorite novels so far. It also uses many popular genres and tropes with amazing twists. The translation/ writing quality is good, I have seen a couple grammar mistakes but it can be overlooked and is understandable. What is really good is that the author reads the comments for grammar mistakes and goes back to edit them. Something many authors/ editors overlook. The updating stability is okay, the book was on hiatis until a couple months ago till it was picked up again. Its been put on hiatus again and it is unknown when it will be picked up again. There is a good story development, however the story is still in its infancy so not much can be said about this. The first real life threatening antagonist is only introduced in the latest chapter, chapter 31. The characters are very well thought out and are very well layered with a lot of depth. Also the mc acts his age, he was 18 years old when he died with no real social activity or relationships this can be seen when he reincarnates. Although his personality does change a lot but this can be attributed to his whole change in species, environment and stuff. Malik (mc) and his friend (potential romantic interest) Mina have good personalities that slightly conflict which is very good as it shows that they are their own people. They only get names in the later chapter (chapter 20 something). The world background is one of the best I have ever seen 10 out of 5 stars. You can really see the author trying to build a good foundation for the novel with all the information he provides in these first 30 chapters. You only really learn more about the world background in chapters 20 to thirty. For example there is qi, mana and aura that are three words for the same thing used by the different cultures of the world. A lot is explained and these chapters are essential. All in all a good read. I recommend placing this in your library to wait for it to be picked up again and accumulate chapters. So as to have a better reading experience. 😁👌
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Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update pls
I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE.
I really love it. The story is awesome, funny and heartwarming. I also like the MC. I like the way MC think and act. You guy should try read it.
The character designs are very interesting, there are a lot of diverse characters and species in the story, and the world in expanding at a rapid pace, the writing quality is great, just the story takes quite a while to update.
Please update more this book iS one of the ones that i would actually Wait for an update it’s Soo instreaing please please update moee once a week is fine
Hmm... I don’t know if the author is going to see this or not but I have to say that this is one of my favorite webnovel so far the characters you introduce as well as the everything else in this story has really landed well and I can see how much imagination you put into it and the humor is top notch so if you do see this I hope you plan on continuing this series but other than that this is a great piece of literature.
Great novel, funny light-hearted dialogue and all around good feels. Nothing that strikes me as groundbreaking but a truly pleasant experience!
sorry but you got 4.4 because no update and honestly everything else is fine but you juzt need to update more pls os everything ok is it school
Best Of The Best I Dont Know What To Say ❤ Pls Complete We Need More Chapters I Will Recommend It For Every One Thanks For The Work Author 👍
*sigh* Another great story lost to time... I realy hoped that you would continue this story at some point but it seems that it has been abandoned. While it was being updated i loved the characters and thier interactions with each other. The world building was done wonderfully and the description of both the characters and the world was incredible.
I lnow you stopped this untill the virus thing was over with, but please continue i feel like i’ve been waiting far too long for an update on this book.
good book I am just wondering if the Arthur is alive 101010110101010100101101010101101010101010101011010101010101101010101010110101010101010
Great story, I love the characters and the world that bas been built, its been a while since the story last updated but im still holding out hope that the story isnt over.
Dear author, why have you not updated? It's been months. If you don't continue to update, I'm dropping your novel. I've waited for so long for your novel to go past 50 chapters, but I see no increase. By the way, I'm going to spam this review multiple times until you start updating. I feel sad for the rest of your readers. READERS: BEWARE THAT THIS AUTHOR MIGHT IGNORE YOUR REQUEST TO UPDATE!
The story line so far is really good and I cannot wait for more chapters to this story so please author moooorrrreeeeee chapters please I need more.
A really nice story. It’s rushed in some parts but overall better than most stories, just kind of sad that it has been dropped.
Неплохо, хотя не хватает эволюции, или системы, чтобы было развитие интересным, но мне понравилась концепция водного мира, так как, таких произведений немного, кстати читать в оригинале прикольнее, чем в переводе, впрочем, все круто. Привет из России. Автор, хорошо постарался.
I highly rate this book hoping for it to come back, with all the plot hidden like the possibility of the dark church attacking them due to the first Attack on the bison, or the taking of the tree to create stuff even the tournament happening or the chosen for both of them I just can’t wait for it
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I love this novel so much, too sad there hasn't been an update for 2 months, author should really continue writing this story that has a huge potential
I want more please......... Btw why did you stop updating Hdhdhsjsoshdjdjdndkdjdjdjdkjdndkdkdjdndkdjdkdkdjdjdjjfifjfjfkfjjfkfjfjfifjfjfjjfjfj
It is a really enjoyable novel but the updates are way to slow but other wise great book interesting theme. Last it is a little confusing towards the so called "magic".
The story is good,,,and unique ..i love this very much...keep up the good work...and dont forget to update regularly...thank you very much for your hard heartly effort
A really interesting story that should update a lot more and i wonder how was the size of the manta before and after the whale incident and this must be continued
Tiết lộ Spoiler The story is good but some parts feel rushed while other parts feel a bit too stretched out, the characterization is ok though both of them are more than a bit dumb? And sometimes they are rather annoying but overall a good story.
Please update more, we want to see more story and edit some older chapters with correct grammar. Pacing is a little fast, it does slow down a bit later so that's good. Only 31 chapters add more please.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
This novel has serious potential from all that I've read mc should be making a religion soon enough and have a tsundare crab goddess as a wife maybe after they grow stronger they can have a human form I would like to think that mc has a domain in knowledge and darkness and little god to have a domain in sand and light hope more chaps
This is one of my favorite novels so far. It also uses many popular genres and tropes with amazing twists. The translation/ writing quality is good, I have seen a couple grammar mistakes but it can be overlooked and is understandable. What is really good is that the author reads the comments for grammar mistakes and goes back to edit them. Something many authors/ editors overlook. The updating stability is okay, the book was on hiatis until a couple months ago till it was picked up again. Its been put on hiatus again and it is unknown when it will be picked up again. There is a good story development, however the story is still in its infancy so not much can be said about this. The first real life threatening antagonist is only introduced in the latest chapter, chapter 31. The characters are very well thought out and are very well layered with a lot of depth. Also the mc acts his age, he was 18 years old when he died with no real social activity or relationships this can be seen when he reincarnates. Although his personality does change a lot but this can be attributed to his whole change in species, environment and stuff. Malik (mc) and his friend (potential romantic interest) Mina have good personalities that slightly conflict which is very good as it shows that they are their own people. They only get names in the later chapter (chapter 20 something). The world background is one of the best I have ever seen 10 out of 5 stars. You can really see the author trying to build a good foundation for the novel with all the information he provides in these first 30 chapters. You only really learn more about the world background in chapters 20 to thirty. For example there is qi, mana and aura that are three words for the same thing used by the different cultures of the world. A lot is explained and these chapters are essential. All in all a good read. I recommend placing this in your library to wait for it to be picked up again and accumulate chapters. So as to have a better reading experience. 😁👌
Tiết lộ Spoiler Update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update pls
I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE. I NEED MORE.
I really love it. The story is awesome, funny and heartwarming. I also like the MC. I like the way MC think and act. You guy should try read it.
The character designs are very interesting, there are a lot of diverse characters and species in the story, and the world in expanding at a rapid pace, the writing quality is great, just the story takes quite a while to update.
Please update more this book iS one of the ones that i would actually Wait for an update it’s Soo instreaing please please update moee once a week is fine
Hmm... I don’t know if the author is going to see this or not but I have to say that this is one of my favorite webnovel so far the characters you introduce as well as the everything else in this story has really landed well and I can see how much imagination you put into it and the humor is top notch so if you do see this I hope you plan on continuing this series but other than that this is a great piece of literature.
Great novel, funny light-hearted dialogue and all around good feels. Nothing that strikes me as groundbreaking but a truly pleasant experience!
sorry but you got 4.4 because no update and honestly everything else is fine but you juzt need to update more pls os everything ok is it school
Best Of The Best I Dont Know What To Say ❤ Pls Complete We Need More Chapters I Will Recommend It For Every One Thanks For The Work Author 👍
*sigh* Another great story lost to time... I realy hoped that you would continue this story at some point but it seems that it has been abandoned. While it was being updated i loved the characters and thier interactions with each other. The world building was done wonderfully and the description of both the characters and the world was incredible.
I lnow you stopped this untill the virus thing was over with, but please continue i feel like i’ve been waiting far too long for an update on this book.
good book I am just wondering if the Arthur is alive 101010110101010100101101010101101010101010101011010101010101101010101010110101010101010
Great story, I love the characters and the world that bas been built, its been a while since the story last updated but im still holding out hope that the story isnt over.
Dear author, why have you not updated? It's been months. If you don't continue to update, I'm dropping your novel. I've waited for so long for your novel to go past 50 chapters, but I see no increase. By the way, I'm going to spam this review multiple times until you start updating. I feel sad for the rest of your readers. READERS: BEWARE THAT THIS AUTHOR MIGHT IGNORE YOUR REQUEST TO UPDATE!
The story line so far is really good and I cannot wait for more chapters to this story so please author moooorrrreeeeee chapters please I need more.
A really nice story. It’s rushed in some parts but overall better than most stories, just kind of sad that it has been dropped.
Неплохо, хотя не хватает эволюции, или системы, чтобы было развитие интересным, но мне понравилась концепция водного мира, так как, таких произведений немного, кстати читать в оригинале прикольнее, чем в переводе, впрочем, все круто. Привет из России. Автор, хорошо постарался.
I highly rate this book hoping for it to come back, with all the plot hidden like the possibility of the dark church attacking them due to the first Attack on the bison, or the taking of the tree to create stuff even the tournament happening or the chosen for both of them I just can’t wait for it
Tiết lộ Spoiler Bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
I love this novel so much, too sad there hasn't been an update for 2 months, author should really continue writing this story that has a huge potential
I want more please......... Btw why did you stop updating Hdhdhsjsoshdjdjdndkdjdjdjdkjdndkdkdjdndkdjdkdkdjdjdjjfifjfjfkfjjfkfjfjfifjfjfjjfjfj
It is a really enjoyable novel but the updates are way to slow but other wise great book interesting theme. Last it is a little confusing towards the so called "magic".
The story is good,,,and unique ..i love this very much...keep up the good work...and dont forget to update regularly...thank you very much for your hard heartly effort
A really interesting story that should update a lot more and i wonder how was the size of the manta before and after the whale incident and this must be continued
Tiết lộ Spoiler The story is good but some parts feel rushed while other parts feel a bit too stretched out, the characterization is ok though both of them are more than a bit dumb? And sometimes they are rather annoying but overall a good story.
Please update more, we want to see more story and edit some older chapters with correct grammar. Pacing is a little fast, it does slow down a bit later so that's good. Only 31 chapters add more please.