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Viết đánh giáOk , i think i read enough chapters to give this novel a review...300+ chapters First of all i must say author has a creative mind and new ideas will come to his mind and he puts them in his story but sadly it's also has a downside for author because of it he can't focus on one or two stories he writes many novels as soon as he got a nice idea, well it's a mistake that new writers do you can't find a pro author to focus all his attention to more than 2 works...well as i said because of it the quality of his writing is getting a little bad and you will find many mistakes in story from misspellings to forgetting some minor things in story like the age restrictions of a tournament or the number of poison pills MC created etc... The next important matter is that even thought this novel has romance Tag ,you can't find a proper romance relationship building between characters only MC teasing Xun time to times while other girls get few talking with him and few lewd scenes (every 50+ chapters 😐 )(for R-18 scenes even if author doesn't want to write it continuously , sometimes just mentioning that they had a passionate night is enough when they go to sleep in their rooms) The same goes for Harem Tag ... when you combine Harem and romance Tags together you expect to get lovey dovey scenes and some normal chapters about their interactions and romantic moments to make their relationships bound stronger otherwise it'll become like those weird Chinese cultivation novels which MC has 99% of his mind about getting stronger and how to cultivate and 1% of his mind remind him he also has some women around the world 😂 I think the cause of it is at the beginning of this novel when few readers called MC a skirt chaser which scared the author and impacted the love part of the story...sadly. BUT on the other hand MC is ruthless which i like, and becoming a demon slowly well a person who will become a demon for the sake of his family not a brain dead evil demon who keeps killing for fun (hopefully it stay the same till the end) And in this novel we have many characters and places and empires etc but sadly it doesn't have a glossary about it so be prepare to forget some info in journey of reading this novel. And lastly if you want to read about a ruthless MC read this one but I'm not sure about the romance and Harem part cuz it's not developed properly yet after all this time... . . . - Writing quality: 7/10 - Stability of update: 10/10 - World background: 7/10 - Ruthless mc: 8/10 - Harem relationships building: 6/10 - Romance: 5/10 - Characters design: 7/10
really great story, it starts off a little slow. but once it hits its strides its an amazing experince, there a few archs in the story that are all eciting and help advance the story in a natural way. with the exceptuon of a few mistakes here and there that in no way deminsh the story i highly recomnd it. magic ✅ sowrds ✅ op mc ✅ intreging events ✅ fun adventures ✅ loot✅ power ups ✅ world shaking events ✅ haram ✅ what else can u ask for. go read now.
A perfect combination of OP yet somehow balanced main character. Not too righteous, not too evil. Excellent story and character dedevelopment. One of my favorite serieses I've read thus far (and I've completed quite a few.) Just try it out. It's well worth the stones.
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Typical op Mc who get everything and cliches it a a normal novel face slapping and brain villains😂
is it over now or there any remaining chapters and if yes can u tell us estimate and after that is there any planning of updating Awakening Of The Ancient
The author doesn't know how to write a plot. Frequent logical errors and the author's stupidity are some of the many flaws of this story. It's a waste of time on this point. My rating is minus 100
I am dropping after reading 100 chapters.This novel doesn't have anything special iI it.It is full plot holes and plot armors .Well it is not that bad for new readers but full of cliches for me. In many places development is a little forced and after so many similar contexts it is really frustrating to continue reading this.If I want to enjoy this novel I have to lower my IQ and avoid thinking about it.So over all the story is just okay and more than that.
Yeah it was going good until it didn't. Over 500 chaps and I feel like there is no growth. The author is introducing new characters and new worlds and new plots without closing the previous ones properly. Feels like it will be a long ride, maybe over 3000 or 4000 chaps. Typical generic Chinese wuxia novel with not much difference from the other ones. Maybe come back when it's completed. If it ever is.
Everything is good but the plot with his clone is very much unnecessary.............................................................................................
Tiết lộ SpoilerPeak level waste of time. The character is retarted, the story is so cliche, forced and stupid that even childern’s bedtime stories appear to be top tier literature. I’ve seen my fair share of stupid, naive, unreasonably kind and all sorts of other mcs, and this novels protagonist does not fail to make it to my list of top 10 worst written characters. Ignore what the author says; the story does not get better after 10 or even 100 chapters. It’s hopeless — give up. Find a better use for your time.
I don’ know why the author never change his name to long tian and kept using his original name. Doesn’ explain any details on how to master a cultivation technique. He might as well be a supreme master who took over that boys body. Character devolopement is trash too
Entretenida, ten atrapan los personajes, facil de leer, no se vuelve lenta casi en ningun momento, es una pena que el final sea tan rápido en comparacion con el resto de la historia. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thanks a lot for the novel. It made my days for the past few weeks ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thank you, I just love it so much ❤️
If I have to give rating before 800 chapter then i will give 4.6 star but now at 1100 i must say the story development is going too insensible. At one point hero can kill the emperor in front of 20 world and at one point he is running and worried just because one empire accused him for raping a side character.
for godsake, just update the chapters faster!!! why do you need to leave a gap of 27 days!? start only 1 or max 2 books at a time and then finish them. Be realistic instead of overambitious dear author
I have seen bricks smarter than the MC of this story! Completely unreadable due to stupidity of MC. If you want to needlessly get angry and frustrated I recommend this story 👍🏽
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I have given it this review as the author decided that our money wasn’t worth him completing the novel, despite still actively releasing chapters in his other novel(‘s). Beware of following him as he may do it again.
some parts of story is good. mc is shown as a smart character, but because of some skills and schemes of others, he slowly becomes an impatient character. it's an interesting character study from that point of view, how a person becomes dark because of his surroundings, he doesn't care about even killing entire planet of beings. but what i dislike about story is, author is trying to keep it too mysterious. mc has a bloodline of literal God, but thr God seems stupid here. he has dumped all his enemies on mc, while giving very less boost to mc. that's why I dislike the story. the God is shown too arrogant, refusing to take help from others, again because of some mysterious reasons. that's why I dislike the mysteries here
Tiết lộ SpoilerVery good novel! MC is a reincarnated guy in a cripple body, he gains his powers back after some time. He is not a forgiving type, as title may suggest. Relationship with his family (close one) is very good, his parents and grandfather care about him, so it wont be a revenge plot where he runs,power up and kill everyone. Thanks to his newfound powers(they slowly influence him, i dont want to spoil more;p) he dont have a "moral judgment" like typical reincarnated MC on topics like killing - you are in my way, death. Plot starts to thicken after he gains his powers, so be sure to read it:).
Ok , i think i read enough chapters to give this novel a review...300+ chapters First of all i must say author has a creative mind and new ideas will come to his mind and he puts them in his story but sadly it's also has a downside for author because of it he can't focus on one or two stories he writes many novels as soon as he got a nice idea, well it's a mistake that new writers do you can't find a pro author to focus all his attention to more than 2 works...well as i said because of it the quality of his writing is getting a little bad and you will find many mistakes in story from misspellings to forgetting some minor things in story like the age restrictions of a tournament or the number of poison pills MC created etc... The next important matter is that even thought this novel has romance Tag ,you can't find a proper romance relationship building between characters only MC teasing Xun time to times while other girls get few talking with him and few lewd scenes (every 50+ chapters 😐 )(for R-18 scenes even if author doesn't want to write it continuously , sometimes just mentioning that they had a passionate night is enough when they go to sleep in their rooms) The same goes for Harem Tag ... when you combine Harem and romance Tags together you expect to get lovey dovey scenes and some normal chapters about their interactions and romantic moments to make their relationships bound stronger otherwise it'll become like those weird Chinese cultivation novels which MC has 99% of his mind about getting stronger and how to cultivate and 1% of his mind remind him he also has some women around the world 😂 I think the cause of it is at the beginning of this novel when few readers called MC a skirt chaser which scared the author and impacted the love part of the story...sadly. BUT on the other hand MC is ruthless which i like, and becoming a demon slowly well a person who will become a demon for the sake of his family not a brain dead evil demon who keeps killing for fun (hopefully it stay the same till the end) And in this novel we have many characters and places and empires etc but sadly it doesn't have a glossary about it so be prepare to forget some info in journey of reading this novel. And lastly if you want to read about a ruthless MC read this one but I'm not sure about the romance and Harem part cuz it's not developed properly yet after all this time... . . . - Writing quality: 7/10 - Stability of update: 10/10 - World background: 7/10 - Ruthless mc: 8/10 - Harem relationships building: 6/10 - Romance: 5/10 - Characters design: 7/10
really great story, it starts off a little slow. but once it hits its strides its an amazing experince, there a few archs in the story that are all eciting and help advance the story in a natural way. with the exceptuon of a few mistakes here and there that in no way deminsh the story i highly recomnd it. magic ✅ sowrds ✅ op mc ✅ intreging events ✅ fun adventures ✅ loot✅ power ups ✅ world shaking events ✅ haram ✅ what else can u ask for. go read now.
A perfect combination of OP yet somehow balanced main character. Not too righteous, not too evil. Excellent story and character dedevelopment. One of my favorite serieses I've read thus far (and I've completed quite a few.) Just try it out. It's well worth the stones.
Hello author! I would like to ask some questions, if possible, please answer... they are as follows: I would like to know if there is harem in the work, I would like to know if there is ntr or yuri in the work (I hope not), I would also like to know if there would be yanderes among the harem... and the last question, and if the mc really loves the girls, he doesn't just use them and discard them... if you can, please answer!
Typical op Mc who get everything and cliches it a a normal novel face slapping and brain villains😂
is it over now or there any remaining chapters and if yes can u tell us estimate and after that is there any planning of updating Awakening Of The Ancient
The author doesn't know how to write a plot. Frequent logical errors and the author's stupidity are some of the many flaws of this story. It's a waste of time on this point. My rating is minus 100
I am dropping after reading 100 chapters.This novel doesn't have anything special iI it.It is full plot holes and plot armors .Well it is not that bad for new readers but full of cliches for me. In many places development is a little forced and after so many similar contexts it is really frustrating to continue reading this.If I want to enjoy this novel I have to lower my IQ and avoid thinking about it.So over all the story is just okay and more than that.
Yeah it was going good until it didn't. Over 500 chaps and I feel like there is no growth. The author is introducing new characters and new worlds and new plots without closing the previous ones properly. Feels like it will be a long ride, maybe over 3000 or 4000 chaps. Typical generic Chinese wuxia novel with not much difference from the other ones. Maybe come back when it's completed. If it ever is.
Everything is good but the plot with his clone is very much unnecessary.............................................................................................
Tiết lộ SpoilerPeak level waste of time. The character is retarted, the story is so cliche, forced and stupid that even childern’s bedtime stories appear to be top tier literature. I’ve seen my fair share of stupid, naive, unreasonably kind and all sorts of other mcs, and this novels protagonist does not fail to make it to my list of top 10 worst written characters. Ignore what the author says; the story does not get better after 10 or even 100 chapters. It’s hopeless — give up. Find a better use for your time.
I don’ know why the author never change his name to long tian and kept using his original name. Doesn’ explain any details on how to master a cultivation technique. He might as well be a supreme master who took over that boys body. Character devolopement is trash too
Entretenida, ten atrapan los personajes, facil de leer, no se vuelve lenta casi en ningun momento, es una pena que el final sea tan rápido en comparacion con el resto de la historia. [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thanks a lot for the novel. It made my days for the past few weeks ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thank you, I just love it so much ❤️
If I have to give rating before 800 chapter then i will give 4.6 star but now at 1100 i must say the story development is going too insensible. At one point hero can kill the emperor in front of 20 world and at one point he is running and worried just because one empire accused him for raping a side character.
for godsake, just update the chapters faster!!! why do you need to leave a gap of 27 days!? start only 1 or max 2 books at a time and then finish them. Be realistic instead of overambitious dear author
I have seen bricks smarter than the MC of this story! Completely unreadable due to stupidity of MC. If you want to needlessly get angry and frustrated I recommend this story 👍🏽
Tidak hanya mc nya yang idiot penulisnya juga idiot[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I have given it this review as the author decided that our money wasn’t worth him completing the novel, despite still actively releasing chapters in his other novel(‘s). Beware of following him as he may do it again.
some parts of story is good. mc is shown as a smart character, but because of some skills and schemes of others, he slowly becomes an impatient character. it's an interesting character study from that point of view, how a person becomes dark because of his surroundings, he doesn't care about even killing entire planet of beings. but what i dislike about story is, author is trying to keep it too mysterious. mc has a bloodline of literal God, but thr God seems stupid here. he has dumped all his enemies on mc, while giving very less boost to mc. that's why I dislike the story. the God is shown too arrogant, refusing to take help from others, again because of some mysterious reasons. that's why I dislike the mysteries here
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Very good novel! MC is a reincarnated guy in a cripple body, he gains his powers back after some time. He is not a forgiving type, as title may suggest. Relationship with his family (close one) is very good, his parents and grandfather care about him, so it wont be a revenge plot where he runs,power up and kill everyone. Thanks to his newfound powers(they slowly influence him, i dont want to spoil more;p) he dont have a "moral judgment" like typical reincarnated MC on topics like killing - you are in my way, death. Plot starts to thicken after he gains his powers, so be sure to read it:).