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If you are bashing this because the author made the A.I rogue, then your assumption is very wrong. Read the next chaps to see what really happened. Only **** judge a book by its cover.
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What can I say, give this a try and I doubt anyone would regret it. The MC and his antics are a joy to read and while he is an asshole. He is our dear author's endearing asshole xD Oh man, this was a "fun" read, let loose and enjoy the ride. Don't take it so seriously. Thanks for sharing author!
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I really admire what you have done with your story. You took me for a ride with the whole Von Doom angle. I didn't see it coming. Please, keep up the great work! You have a gift.
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Even being brutal. The first thing that comes to mind are some very minor spelling mistakes which could be equated to autocorrect and the MC's iffy connection to people around him due to him being a transmigrator. Two minor problems. Now if I were to talk about pro's, i would be swamped. But to keep it short; the MC is "actually" intelligent, is paranoid (it's funny that I name a problem like it's a good thing on webnovel yet it actually is), the mc isnt stupidly ruthless or rude but not some pacifist goody two-shoes, and he actually puts in effort to get strong. Oh and the author's writing makes his characters all really easy to see as human. For example, the mc goes through this extremely painful experience and doesn't "push through out of sheer force of will" but because he has to. Being literally incapable of movement and only allowed to resist death. He also doesn't try to curry favors with stronger beings, which is nice.
This is one of my favourite fic and the way you portray your mc that's brillent also show your are a talented writer with lots of potential.I am just hoping this story become popular also please update faster
The update stability is horrible but i still gave it a 5 star because of how great the writing is. I still dont believe its a fanfic because of how well its written better that 60% of other novels ( yes novel not fanfics because most fanfics are horrible except this one )❤️❤️❤️❤️
this is simply unbelievable . to think someone could take the story to this realm. damn. totally in love with this. keep updating. we would love to see the end.
This is really good author. Hope you continue more.This is really good author. Hope you continue more.This is really good author. Hope you continue more.This is really good author. Hope you continue more.
How shit reborn as a 40-year-old guy is a good thing, all those years of youth could be used to gain knowledge studying and training his physique, so much potential wasted.
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dude u r deliberately extending the wordings using synonym and rewriting it in different context with the same ending...... need some genuine content.. DOOM needs his audience and his audience demands more action less words.
Before chapter eleven I was loving this novel,great things where going on but then the author did something terribly stupid. He did the classic, sentient A.I goes rogue and tries to kill their creator. I can not tell you how much this ruined the story! If you want an amazing novel then read the first ten chapters but for the ones after that,it’s all crap. Very disappointed. 
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Damn, I forgot you have a WN account, even though I remembered reading your Iceman and hulk fics, haha pretty dumb of me, anyways I really like your story, I hope you keep it up! I'll be waiting for the next updates, I'm looking forward to how much his list for power affected him emotionally, and if he'll ever be able to actually feel familial and whatnot feelings again, My mind's kinda fuzzy but can't he make a serum like the SSS that only affects his emotional side to grant him an increased of whatever characteristics he has?the good ones though... Damn, I shouldn't be writing this suggestions here...
Tiết lộ Spoiler Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
Well this novel is one of the best marvel fanfics out here author is a bit lazy (joking he is very lazy) I only deducted stars because he updates very slowly but his/her chapters are big but not enough to cope with his laziness
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This is a very good fan-fic. Quite unique as the mc searches for power and realizes that it has a cost. Overall quite excellent, ...............................................................
Love it first time seeing someone reincarnated as hammer. Just wish author would update more :) 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111114444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444440000000000000000000000
Do not let a certain chap fool you to drop. It was part of the plot so just read the next chap after that. The author obviously put a lot of time in this. It is a very great novel.
If you are bashing this because the author made the A.I rogue, then your assumption is very wrong. Read the next chaps to see what really happened. Only **** judge a book by its cover.
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
What can I say, give this a try and I doubt anyone would regret it. The MC and his antics are a joy to read and while he is an asshole. He is our dear author's endearing asshole xD Oh man, this was a "fun" read, let loose and enjoy the ride. Don't take it so seriously. Thanks for sharing author!
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I really admire what you have done with your story. You took me for a ride with the whole Von Doom angle. I didn't see it coming. Please, keep up the great work! You have a gift.
Tiết lộ Spoiler great,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Even being brutal. The first thing that comes to mind are some very minor spelling mistakes which could be equated to autocorrect and the MC's iffy connection to people around him due to him being a transmigrator. Two minor problems. Now if I were to talk about pro's, i would be swamped. But to keep it short; the MC is "actually" intelligent, is paranoid (it's funny that I name a problem like it's a good thing on webnovel yet it actually is), the mc isnt stupidly ruthless or rude but not some pacifist goody two-shoes, and he actually puts in effort to get strong. Oh and the author's writing makes his characters all really easy to see as human. For example, the mc goes through this extremely painful experience and doesn't "push through out of sheer force of will" but because he has to. Being literally incapable of movement and only allowed to resist death. He also doesn't try to curry favors with stronger beings, which is nice.
This is one of my favourite fic and the way you portray your mc that's brillent also show your are a talented writer with lots of potential.I am just hoping this story become popular also please update faster
The update stability is horrible but i still gave it a 5 star because of how great the writing is. I still dont believe its a fanfic because of how well its written better that 60% of other novels ( yes novel not fanfics because most fanfics are horrible except this one )❤️❤️❤️❤️
this is simply unbelievable . to think someone could take the story to this realm. damn. totally in love with this. keep updating. we would love to see the end.
This is really good author. Hope you continue more.This is really good author. Hope you continue more.This is really good author. Hope you continue more.This is really good author. Hope you continue more.
How shit reborn as a 40-year-old guy is a good thing, all those years of youth could be used to gain knowledge studying and training his physique, so much potential wasted.
Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp Exp
dude u r deliberately extending the wordings using synonym and rewriting it in different context with the same ending...... need some genuine content.. DOOM needs his audience and his audience demands more action less words.
Before chapter eleven I was loving this novel,great things where going on but then the author did something terribly stupid. He did the classic, sentient A.I goes rogue and tries to kill their creator. I can not tell you how much this ruined the story! If you want an amazing novel then read the first ten chapters but for the ones after that,it’s all crap. Very disappointed. 
Tiết lộ Spoiler Damn, I forgot you have a WN account, even though I remembered reading your Iceman and hulk fics, haha pretty dumb of me, anyways I really like your story, I hope you keep it up! I'll be waiting for the next updates, I'm looking forward to how much his list for power affected him emotionally, and if he'll ever be able to actually feel familial and whatnot feelings again, My mind's kinda fuzzy but can't he make a serum like the SSS that only affects his emotional side to grant him an increased of whatever characteristics he has?the good ones though... Damn, I shouldn't be writing this suggestions here...
Tiết lộ Spoiler Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more. Please more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Cant wait to read more.
Well this novel is one of the best marvel fanfics out here author is a bit lazy (joking he is very lazy) I only deducted stars because he updates very slowly but his/her chapters are big but not enough to cope with his laziness
ONE OF THE BEST MARVEL FANFICTION MORE UPDATES PLEASE 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 .................,.....................,....... ................
:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o:o
This is a very good fan-fic. Quite unique as the mc searches for power and realizes that it has a cost. Overall quite excellent, ...............................................................
Love it first time seeing someone reincarnated as hammer. Just wish author would update more :) 11111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111111114444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444440000000000000000000000
Do not let a certain chap fool you to drop. It was part of the plot so just read the next chap after that. The author obviously put a lot of time in this. It is a very great novel.