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I really love one pice novels and that's why I will give you 5 stars. Hope you can contini writing and don't drop................................
I like it. Bottem is to get to that 140carchacter min Yeet you can come to the house to get my car fixed and I will be there at school and I have a lot going on and I'm not sure how to get to the airport and thenyou can
Did you just copy-paste the translation of 海贼之海军黄猿 CN fanfic? Your summary reads like a mix between this one and One Piece – Thundergod Marine, another translated CN fanfic. I hope you plan to write with your own ideas too without just copying a CN fanfic.
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Writing Quality OK 5/5 Update ( you said depend on your mood ) 3/5 Story ( Not Much Progressed ) 4/5 Character ( Not many introduced yet ) 4/5 World Bck. ( Not much seen yet ) 4/5 Final >>> Tada .. . da. .. . < 4.0 > (*_*) ( ^_^ ) ( 0_0 )
Since you have posted this novel recently , i will give you 5 star. Starting is good I wish you can continue this novel instead of Dropping it.
As an author, I will rate my work at 5 Star. But story whether it is worth it or not, only after reading people may know. I am writing just for fun. No Money No Business. So you should not expect best from me. Just think of this novel as a time pass. If you like to Bookmark it if you don't then write a bad comment and Leave. It doesn't matter much. If you are interested in this story you can wait patiently. Updates may be a little slow. ---------- If anyone wishes to take this concept or this novel itself or just copying it and then starting anew, then you are welcome. I would also love to read similar novels. Just don't go too much into harem or making it Harem Focus Novel. --------- And yes one last thing if any of you know few One Piece Good Fan-Fic pls. recommend me I would like to read. ----- In the end, English is not my main language.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler I really love one pice novels and that's why I will give you 5 stars. Hope you can contini writing and don't drop................................
I like it. Bottem is to get to that 140carchacter min Yeet you can come to the house to get my car fixed and I will be there at school and I have a lot going on and I'm not sure how to get to the airport and thenyou can
Did you just copy-paste the translation of 海贼之海军黄猿 CN fanfic? Your summary reads like a mix between this one and One Piece – Thundergod Marine, another translated CN fanfic. I hope you plan to write with your own ideas too without just copying a CN fanfic.
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Writing Quality OK 5/5 Update ( you said depend on your mood ) 3/5 Story ( Not Much Progressed ) 4/5 Character ( Not many introduced yet ) 4/5 World Bck. ( Not much seen yet ) 4/5 Final >>> Tada .. . da. .. . < 4.0 > (*_*) ( ^_^ ) ( 0_0 )
Since you have posted this novel recently , i will give you 5 star. Starting is good I wish you can continue this novel instead of Dropping it.
As an author, I will rate my work at 5 Star. But story whether it is worth it or not, only after reading people may know. I am writing just for fun. No Money No Business. So you should not expect best from me. Just think of this novel as a time pass. If you like to Bookmark it if you don't then write a bad comment and Leave. It doesn't matter much. If you are interested in this story you can wait patiently. Updates may be a little slow. ---------- If anyone wishes to take this concept or this novel itself or just copying it and then starting anew, then you are welcome. I would also love to read similar novels. Just don't go too much into harem or making it Harem Focus Novel. --------- And yes one last thing if any of you know few One Piece Good Fan-Fic pls. recommend me I would like to read. ----- In the end, English is not my main language.
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