Rebirth and Second Chances

LV 4

InfernalHunt

It’s an amazing book. The plot is very in depth and fleshed out, and there isn’t any plot holes I can see so far. The system of magic and in general is different than a lot of the others on this site, and it’s very well planned out. The characters are very real, and it isn’t just your typical villager A and B except for the main characters. This also draws on a lot of myths from our world, and masterfully weaves them into the story, bringing creatures from imagination and fairytale to life in this book. While it isn’t as ridiculous as the people who were releasing 2-3 chapters a day, the book’s update schedule is also quite good, especially to books that only update once every week or two.

LV 5

RionSteiner

Response on authors note at synopsis. Dude you're wrong many reader like OP, strong from the start MC rather than weak and wuss. Exceptional are smart MC then have fast growth rate to get his power. Majority of the reader like OP mc that's the truth. I tried to give a shot or your story but if MC get push around and always lose even tho the MC is smart ass like on your summary, I lose interest on that MC.

LV 13

F_Riley

A bit self-serving to write my own review, but I thought I could use this platform to answer any questions you might have. Webnovel doesn't really offer a way to contact authors, no private messaging exists. Thanks for taking the time to give the novel a try. I did make it to 6th in the #80 Writing Prompt contest.

LV 14

The_Hero_Of_Old

I am enjoying reading this so far. I find it better because the Mc doesn't pretends too be weak and actually thinks before hand. Also I enjoy the character creation at the beginning.

LV 4

Rafael_Neves

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DaoistImmortal

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LV 4

BookFan

Bit of a different take on the system trope. The author has created a world that exists in a parallel multi-dimensional Universe. A System Administrator is responsible for reincarnation protocols and helps the MC plan his next life after his death. The world he finds himself in follows Game-like mechanics with status menus, magic, and Gods. This review is up to chapter 11, and the author is just getting the MC established in the new world. So far, it's been amazing. Give it a try, if you haven't.

LV 3

RedGunner

The best part here is that the characters are three dimensional, Giving the characters an emotional background helps the reader to feel for them. One more positive is that, this story is a unique one....not a rip-off or an inspired story. I like how the author did good research on the backgrounds of mythology and also makes the reader feel that the author put his 100 percent. Let's come to negatives My first concern is on how the first 50 chapters have a lot of info dumps which makes some people feel like you are reading an encyclopedia of the world. You are supposed to slowly introduce the unknown things about the world to the reader, but the author puts everything he wants us to know at the starting which makes us feel stuffy. Another concern is that the author forgot about what Kel discusses at the start with his wife on system glitch and how they are involved, MC literally ignores about that topic about Kel's and his wife's involvement. Too much and too long system prompts to my liking. Last concern is regarding the pacing of the plot, it is too uneven......sometimes the story is too fast and sometimes it's dead slow. These are my concerns but overall it's worth a read for its unique setting and good writing quality. I hope the author corrects the negatives. Keep up the good work.

LV 4

Avid_Reader1

Nice System and Reincarnation story. And a premise for how things happen that make a kind of sense. System doesn't just appear one day. It is a Cosmic entity like Time and Space. That has a function to perform.

LV 10

Willian_Vitor

Eu tenho uma pergunta. Ele usa máscara para sempre? detesto quando o personagem usa máscara para esconder sua beleza... apenas quando necessário, em missões por exemplo. Então, ele vai usar máscara para sempre? estou no capítulo 60.

LV 11

Scott_Todd

Please don't drop this book. It's amazing!!! If you're worried about readers, there are a lot more on pirating websites.

LV 13

Salimoney

The world building, the characters, the story and everythIng else is to die for. 100% recommended. Never have a read a story that Encompases the Sidhe in such a detailed way. A literal Gem

LV 2

Supsooped

I'm unsure how to rate this novel. On one hand it's a great novel that is well written and fun to read. On the other hand however, this novel gets bogged down by one of the big sins of writing: too much exposition. This novel starts out great, with a great first chapter. After that however, you get 6-7 chapters of mostly exposition -- which is very much on the heavy side already. When that's through, you think to yourself: finally, now things will really get started! But even after things get started, the exposition keeps coming. Pretty much every little things needs a paragraph of exposition. See a character -> several paragraphs of exposition about said character. Want to walk through a portal -> a paragraph of exposition about what it feels like walking through a portal. See a weapon -> a paragraph of exposition about said type of weapon. It's just too much. To be fair though, besides the 'sin of exposition', I have fairly few complaints about this novel. It's written well, with character that aren't just dumb NPCs and a world and story that are fairly interesting. Sure, there is things I could nit pick about, but it's honestly not worth the effort. When this novel isn't bogged down in its excessive exposition, it's a great read. So my one tip to the author would be: think/talk about things less, but make characters do more. If it were up to me, I'd cut that entire "friend" character out of the novel -- he is the main device for most of the exposition.

LV 2

Colr_Gren

I think it is good in terms of story and plot but for me, I like to keep things simple. Not too simple, but simple. Although I am going to give it a pretty good review because I can see how much better it is than regular web novels, in the end, it is not for me. There is too much talking and the plot kind of makes me confused. I know people will disagree with me on some a lot of things but, well, I have my own opinion. The entire story is also too slow for me. I mean, it has a lot of detail, and I am fine with that but overall, I don't really see myself enjoying this too much. I have always liked web novels where the main character has some kind of goal but this main characters goals and ideas are all over the place and I am not able to piece them together. I also feel like he is dumb and naive and that just makes me less interested in this novel. Also, the constant thought of trying to figure out what his sexuality is is driving me mad. Again, I might not have the same opinion as some other people and a lot of people are going to be like 'What the heck is this guy talking about' or 'I thought it was good and did not see the things this guy is claiming' but in the end, this is all my opinion and my preference. Basically, this story is not my cup of tea. In conclusion, I will still say that it is a good story and if you want to read it go for it.

LV 6

TheAncientOnell

The book is great and all there should be a kingdom building tag. There's miniscule action and a whole lot of planning, conspiracy, talking and bouquets. It's beaming tidious to read without action or magic The levels a thoroughly explained but confusing as hell. The mc is well average, questions almost everything, he's plain not exciting at all. The book is full of potential like crazy. But the long discussion makes it boring to read. All in all its a good read if you have the patience[img=recommend]

LV 15

Spirit_Prince

This book is amazingly written. It is well thought out and makes it seem as if you are part of the story. All parts of the story seem as if it is real and is actually able to happen. I sincerely hope that when this novel is done that it will get published. I would definitely be one of the first people to buy this book! Hope it continues as well as it began. May blessings come upon you!

LV 5

Ediimon

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LV 4

BookFan

I'm just testing this to see if I can post more than one review for the same story. It seems simplistic and idiotic if that's the case, but the review story button shows up, so who knows?