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hi author i really liked your story i dear to ask if you will continue with the story ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖
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why did you drop it, man ?!!! it's great to keep it up. why did you drop it, man ?!!! it's great to keep it up. why did you drop it, man ?!!! it's great to keep it up.
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The quality of hand writing is great, though the updating is a sad thing to see had a lot of time skips don’t mind don’t hate the designs and description of characters very well written even though not very descriptive the world back ground very well written give 3.2 Not hating just living it please don’t drop
La verdad me gusta mucho como va tomando rumbo la historia buen trabajo :) :)jdnzbsozb :)djhzbsbzo :)zbOoabeb :)zbzbziozs :)Lnsbsizndi :)znziisoson :)znapapsbd
An exciting new take on the Marvel universe! The novel has a great potential for growth and success. But it's sad that it seems the author has already given up as there's been no update for upwards of 2 months...
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Bro you should not make this into an harem. There a lot of harem stories so make your story different. And hopefully let peggy stay with Steve. Your story is great hope you can write some more
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Thanks for the story. Don't drop. ........................................................................ .....................................................
Really 😑, Bruce roger? That’s pretty much Batman with the super soldier serum isn’t it? I mean even the story photo implies it. I love that you made a novel about a super soldier like Steve Rogers but come on bro, why you gotta bring Batman into this? Is this some sort of indirect idea stealing?
This is hands down, the best story i have ever read. First of all, i like those stories where he goes to learn magic from the ancient one, not given magic from a mysterious being and with no explanation (that i like) of how it works. There's so much potential for this story. He could go and learn to use Qi as well since planned on using both and with his original two abilities he had before all that magic and stuff, he could hands down be the best mc who is not too op but also op in an understanding and acceptable way.
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Such great potential novel! I really recommend this book! 5 stars ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
A very interesting take on a new character read through quite a few Marvel fanfic say none of them started in the 1950s with Captain America so that makes it unique so far a very interesting story progression the character isn't necessarily instantly overpowered can't wait to see how he interact with the characters in the future and how he gets his character to the Future whether he will be frozen or live his life till them should be interesting finding out
Good story hope update soon The Mc is op but still has room for improvement Have characters from marvel TV shows to including daredevil agents of shield. Etc.
Good story hope update soon The Mc is op but still has room for improvement Have characters from marvel TV shows to including daredevil agents of shield. Etc.
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..........................................................looking forward to it.....................................................................................................................................................
ok, I just love this story it so god I hope you update more.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This novel has great potential .i can give you some ideas every marvel fanfiction we see train,fight and girls .why not you business empire its have great potential cause of timeline and mc will live a long life.
good story with good background,, i hope mc can become bilionaire, make a.i etc, for the power, because the bloodline and author mention from human can become divinity, i think he can ascend to asgard when he call his divinity and when old enought to not make people on earth suspicious.. then follow the plot..hehe good luck author
a good story but you need to do a good skip time as i can see nothing is important in their baby life at least until he is 5 years old or more also the slow release you gotta try to do a daily release the previous chapter was 4 days ego
Current writing is top notch and the idea is going well... Ill rewrite the review later date when more chapter go out and I do this just to boost its rating so people can see it on the new section!
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this is going on the great fanfics that ive read so if there's any writer's that gonna continue this or there's already one please tell me how to find it i wanna continue reading this great fanfic
hi author i really liked your story i dear to ask if you will continue with the story ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏📖
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why did you drop it, man ?!!! it's great to keep it up. why did you drop it, man ?!!! it's great to keep it up. why did you drop it, man ?!!! it's great to keep it up.
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The quality of hand writing is great, though the updating is a sad thing to see had a lot of time skips don’t mind don’t hate the designs and description of characters very well written even though not very descriptive the world back ground very well written give 3.2 Not hating just living it please don’t drop
La verdad me gusta mucho como va tomando rumbo la historia buen trabajo :) :)jdnzbsozb :)djhzbsbzo :)zbOoabeb :)zbzbziozs :)Lnsbsizndi :)znziisoson :)znapapsbd
An exciting new take on the Marvel universe! The novel has a great potential for growth and success. But it's sad that it seems the author has already given up as there's been no update for upwards of 2 months...
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
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Bro you should not make this into an harem. There a lot of harem stories so make your story different. And hopefully let peggy stay with Steve. Your story is great hope you can write some more
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Thanks for the story. Don't drop. ........................................................................ .....................................................
Really 😑, Bruce roger? That’s pretty much Batman with the super soldier serum isn’t it? I mean even the story photo implies it. I love that you made a novel about a super soldier like Steve Rogers but come on bro, why you gotta bring Batman into this? Is this some sort of indirect idea stealing?
This is hands down, the best story i have ever read. First of all, i like those stories where he goes to learn magic from the ancient one, not given magic from a mysterious being and with no explanation (that i like) of how it works. There's so much potential for this story. He could go and learn to use Qi as well since planned on using both and with his original two abilities he had before all that magic and stuff, he could hands down be the best mc who is not too op but also op in an understanding and acceptable way.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Such great potential novel! I really recommend this book! 5 stars ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
A very interesting take on a new character read through quite a few Marvel fanfic say none of them started in the 1950s with Captain America so that makes it unique so far a very interesting story progression the character isn't necessarily instantly overpowered can't wait to see how he interact with the characters in the future and how he gets his character to the Future whether he will be frozen or live his life till them should be interesting finding out
Good story hope update soon The Mc is op but still has room for improvement Have characters from marvel TV shows to including daredevil agents of shield. Etc.
Good story hope update soon The Mc is op but still has room for improvement Have characters from marvel TV shows to including daredevil agents of shield. Etc.
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..........................................................looking forward to it.....................................................................................................................................................
ok, I just love this story it so god I hope you update more.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This novel has great potential .i can give you some ideas every marvel fanfiction we see train,fight and girls .why not you business empire its have great potential cause of timeline and mc will live a long life.
good story with good background,, i hope mc can become bilionaire, make a.i etc, for the power, because the bloodline and author mention from human can become divinity, i think he can ascend to asgard when he call his divinity and when old enought to not make people on earth suspicious.. then follow the plot..hehe good luck author
a good story but you need to do a good skip time as i can see nothing is important in their baby life at least until he is 5 years old or more also the slow release you gotta try to do a daily release the previous chapter was 4 days ego
Current writing is top notch and the idea is going well... Ill rewrite the review later date when more chapter go out and I do this just to boost its rating so people can see it on the new section!
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this is going on the great fanfics that ive read so if there's any writer's that gonna continue this or there's already one please tell me how to find it i wanna continue reading this great fanfic