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Chương 29: Update and Question

Hey guys, the author here. I've been feeling better, but not quite there yet. And as I have sat here trying to write, I've been thinking. This story is something I want to keep writing as I enjoy it a lot, but as it sits, I'm struggling to continue. I'm finding it hard to write this with out any planing and all that I do write, fells forced. I wanted this story to take readers on a journey that both you and I would enjoy. I honestly can't continue this with it as it is now.

That is why I want to ask you guys this. Would you be mad if I rewrote this as a system story, one that will not make him overpowered. Logan, would still have his backstory as a soldier, doing a great deed of his home world, and getting rewarded. I already have this as a simple outline, no real story written yet, just simple ways he interacts with others and the system. The reason I bring this up, is so that I can generate missions and scenarios I can work off of, as I am a novice writer.

So far for the system, I have the following:

Stats: Name, race, and age, Special points (Like Fallout game series simplified, 1 being the worst; 10, being the best) S= Strength P=Perception E =Endurance & aura C=Charisma I= Intelligence A= Agility L=Luck

Abilities: None overpowered abilities, things from anime/manga/games are there but cost a lot and drain aura fast (Example: Sharingan price 1,000,00 system points and heavy aura drain)

Titles: Give small boosts to small things.

Shop: Where he can buy the things he needs/wants Categories: Weapons, Armor, Skills, and Misc.

Missions: Where Missions/Objectives will appear.

This is just the simple outline I have already. I might add more if this is okay with you.

Please let me know your feelings in the comments.


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