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One Piece: The New King
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THIS A ONE PIECE FANFICTION, BUT I'M GONNA INCLUDE OTHER NON ONE PIECE CHARACTER IN THIS NOVEL. IF YOU DON'T LIKE THAT, PLEASE DON'T READ IT.
disclaimer/: I do not own any of the characters they belong to Eichiro Oda and other creators except from my mc and oc. Leave a review and what i should improve for a better reading experience. And i do not own the picture. Oh i forgot to mention, this fan fiction will involve many other shows as The seven deadly sins, Rakudai Shiki no Cavalry ect.
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Sypnosis/: A man named Skylar reincarnates to his favorite fictional worpd after answering a weird survey. Now let us watch as he writes his own history and marks his name never to be forgotten in this new world he resides in.
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- Thiết kế nhân vật
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Yo, it's the author here, i wanted to ask you to help me improve the novel by leaving productive reviews. Et thanks for reading this terrible novel of mine.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
While I don't think it's bad, I don't think it's good either. There are plenty of plot holes in this that make me think "so this is the power of plot/author". The fact that the MC makes an oath on some dude he hasn't met and not apart in someone's culture is kind of weird to me. The fact that he apparently learned to use a lot of weapons also bugged me as he should have no weapons except a bunch of sticks. The fact he also learned ki in the one-piece world and not in his previous world also bugs me (He does martial arts he learned from his old world to learn ki). There a probably more I haven't mentioned but those are the ones that annoy me. The character cross overs are also stupid. Didn't the MC wish for the world of "One Piece" not the world of "One Piece + character from other worlds" Besides a few other plot holes that I can't be bothered to mention and some other flaws I can't remember I'll stop for now. The writing quality is good but could use a little bit of work as some of the sentences are missing words. The story seems good, the only thing that I don't like, and this is just a personal opinion, is the fact there is gonna be some kingdom building aspect in this fanfic. The story also doesn't seem planned out or at least some of the parts don't seem planned out as the MC said in one of the questions that he doesn't want to be too overpowered otherwise it would ruin the fun. Turns out the devil fruits he is gonna get can either destroy space or the ability to turn into a god-like figure. Both of them cheat like abilities. I haven't read all of the fanfic chapters so it might be better than I say it is or worse so you should check it out before judging based off someone else's opinion. I don't think it's anything special but then again, other people enjoy it so you might too. Have fun!
i love the story ...please make him train with the new pirates for two years to make him reach vice admiral level and the crew become strong 😂😂😍
U should add sabo to the army cause then it give u a good reason to go to the Marine fort war when the Marine kill ace. For now I think u should develop your army ** if sabo joins he should get the sunwokun fruit
A great story I can't wait to see how it goes, what other characters will be joining the protagonist and if he can achieve his goal.[img=coins]
Âm lượng 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Âm lượng 1 : Vol I: South Blue arc
- 1 Chapter 1 5 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 5 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 5 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 5 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 5 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 5 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 5 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 5 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 5 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 5 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11: The marines arrival 5 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12: The hidden prodigy 5 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Do not show me your smug face 5 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14: A New Island 5 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15: A dark past ( i suck at giving titles so you may excuse in that regard but i'm open to critics if it can help improve the story) 5 years ago
- 16 Not a chapter (1) 5 years ago
- 17 Chapter 16: Kurogane Ikki??? 5 years ago
- 18 chapter 17: The Test 5 years ago
- 19 Chapter 18: The Test (2) 5 years ago
- 20 Chapter 19: How to recruit new members 5 years ago
- 21 Chapter 20: How are Stella and Shizuku?!? 5 years ago
- 22 Chapter 21: The First Meeting 5 years ago
- 23 this is not a chapter 5 years ago
- 24 Chapter 22: sometimes you need to have different personalities 5 years ago
From now on I will write three chapters per week. On Monday, Wednesday and Saturday. Hope you can enjoy reading this novel as much as I enjoy writing, also if you have any idea on plots, new crewmembers ( and how to recruit them ) and ideas about the novel in general. You can write it a review or in the comments. I'm also open to critics with good proof not the hate ones so come at me. I'm out...