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I like the story and the idea of it but pls do something about the chapter order. the first chapter i get to read is wand pt. 3. I had to figure the order out myself.
Keep up the good work looking forward to more hopefully you wont drop it most Harry Potter fanfics get droped after a week or two or wont update for weeks or month at atime
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The story has been enjoyable to read, please continue on and I would do my best to give power stones and support. To the author. Don't make the story a harem, there has been to many stories that are harems please don't.
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This is really a good read. The story is quite original and interesting so far. Can't wait to see more updates from the author. Thanks to Sonet for recommending this fanfic.
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I like the story and the idea of it but pls do something about the chapter order. the first chapter i get to read is wand pt. 3. I had to figure the order out myself.
Keep up the good work looking forward to more hopefully you wont drop it most Harry Potter fanfics get droped after a week or two or wont update for weeks or month at atime
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Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice 👍👍👍👍😀😂👍😀😀👍🙂😓😫👍🙂😄👍😔😔😊😍😎
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The story has been enjoyable to read, please continue on and I would do my best to give power stones and support. To the author. Don't make the story a harem, there has been to many stories that are harems please don't.
LOOKS NICE---------------------------------------------------------------- ...............................................................................................................................................................................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111111111111123333333333333333333344444444444444444444444444444455555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555555566666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666777777777777777777
This is really a good read. The story is quite original and interesting so far. Can't wait to see more updates from the author. Thanks to Sonet for recommending this fanfic.
Really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Potter
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