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"Its gonna be alright nicco" she said to paccify him, "but i am scared" he said looking at her with eyes filled with fear, anguish and tears.

"I know, its alright to be frightened, it means you are not a brave fool , now listen to me carefully, i am going out, when i signal you just run, run like your life depends on it because it does and never look back , i repeat never look back, at least one of us will get to live"

"No i won't leave you " he cried .

But she ignored him, closed her eyes counted till three and opened her eyes which were now filled with burning fire , her emerald eyes were no longer soft they were burning send chills to spine and she finally moved out of the dark alley where they were hiding. She said to herself if she is going to die then she will die fighting and not like coward hiding.



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flatearthmill

I love the characters so far and the way you describe them is awsome! I also liked the way you described there feelings it's a very passionate way. And how you described her anger for her mother

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elixir_1900

I can feel it has a nice character development. Just waiting to know who she is gonna marry villain or hero heheh😅 Waiting for the updates soon

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eliza01rune

Its my first time writing, please be considerate. I welcome constructive criticism, so please be my guest. I apologise for grammatical error before hand. Thank you for your time.

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