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So let me get this straight. He’s poor as f*ck and is homeless yet he chose to spend a large portion of his income in making web fluids when his body can naturally produce it? And the reason for this unnecessary expense was because he was a nerd? WTF?!!
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It's surprisingly Good 👍👍👍👍 And surprisingly need more chapter 🤓🤓🤓🤓 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
i love spider man and this is amazing and how venom is in this is great plez continue this.one of the best fan fic i've read this is the best way totell spidys story.
This is a well written story that is fun to read. It has an interesting take on Spider-Man and the world, as well as not rushing to make the MC some sorta god.
YAS!!!!!! Finally, there's a new variation of a Spiderman Story! Not one with him living with aunt May! One where he carries weight, where he plays with the X-men!! Bravo author! I'll read when I have time but it seems very promising
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Just NO HAREM PLEASE, I BEG YOU AUTHOR. Need a REASON????????? BECAUSE IT RUIN THE FUCKING NOVEL, AND YOU END UP DROPPING IT IN THE END. You end up getting a writer block and use bunch of useless excuse saying this and that. And Bam!!! You delete the novel.
This review is just to encourage the author. Also to get it a rating. Really sad that it did not have any reviews yet. The writing style could use some work but it's decent. The plot is good. Do give this a try. Author thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work appreciate it. 😁👍 Ps. You need to update more chapters.
He joined the x man under duress, I declare this fanfic garbage. It is incomprehensible, they violate your mind, they force him to fight against the brotherhood, they kidnap him, they continue to violate his mind, and he decides to join, this fanfic is rubbish, not recommended
So let me get this straight. He’s poor as f*ck and is homeless yet he chose to spend a large portion of his income in making web fluids when his body can naturally produce it? And the reason for this unnecessary expense was because he was a nerd? WTF?!!
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It's surprisingly Good 👍👍👍👍 And surprisingly need more chapter 🤓🤓🤓🤓 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
i love spider man and this is amazing and how venom is in this is great plez continue this.one of the best fan fic i've read this is the best way totell spidys story.
This is a well written story that is fun to read. It has an interesting take on Spider-Man and the world, as well as not rushing to make the MC some sorta god.
YAS!!!!!! Finally, there's a new variation of a Spiderman Story! Not one with him living with aunt May! One where he carries weight, where he plays with the X-men!! Bravo author! I'll read when I have time but it seems very promising
Yea Nnnnnn Hhdhhshsbshshshs D A A A A A A A A A A A A S S D D A A A A S D D Ddsnsnsjdjsjsgdgdyyyyygfhudhshsusususususususususususususbbbbnnn Vvvbb Hdjrfhfhfhrhrhrhffhrhyfyryryryryryryfyfuururyryryryr
Shameless plug by the author need more reviews figured I should be one of em😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋
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Just NO HAREM PLEASE, I BEG YOU AUTHOR. Need a REASON????????? BECAUSE IT RUIN THE FUCKING NOVEL, AND YOU END UP DROPPING IT IN THE END. You end up getting a writer block and use bunch of useless excuse saying this and that. And Bam!!! You delete the novel.
This review is just to encourage the author. Also to get it a rating. Really sad that it did not have any reviews yet. The writing style could use some work but it's decent. The plot is good. Do give this a try. Author thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work appreciate it. 😁👍 Ps. You need to update more chapters.
He joined the x man under duress, I declare this fanfic garbage. It is incomprehensible, they violate your mind, they force him to fight against the brotherhood, they kidnap him, they continue to violate his mind, and he decides to join, this fanfic is rubbish, not recommended