HUMAN?

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Patt_toon07

Hey there this is RDS, commnet, rate, and add! The support is good to see. It helps me to push out more and better content! Thanks for reading!!!- RDS

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MochaBanquet

The quality of one's story, character development and overall world building needs a strenuous tangent more effort in depth world building/character development/writing quality and overall design for such a tale in order to have it all actually make some thorough sense. You could use some honest work with your writing, RDS. It's as if you were trying to force the story in its entirety without proper representation of what there is to be had in terms of just the basics in writing in itself. I highly recommend you revise your works and try a different tactic. The current standard is barely subpar, even at it's best. Maybe try reading others' works and getting ideas, y'know? You have creativity, but a little more ideation wouldn't hurt nor would some more work on your quality instead of quantity. Sorry, but that's the truth. Seems to me as if yojte trying too hard to come off as an anime manuscript or storyboard basis that didn't go through even a rough draft foundation. umu

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.