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Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I'm not against it but I don't know why the boys were mixed in this adventure-log. It just felt weird. Sorry if I offended. If you just write it normally it will be better, somehow, it's hard to imagine...even though it can happen. Please try to edit it, it will get better... Otsukare
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The story is really amazing. It's so interesting to read. I can't believe it's the author's first novel. The author's writing skill I'd soo good.
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Good story. Nice plot. Love the characters. Keep up the good work. And keep making new stories. Awesome job. Excited to more of your works. Fighting!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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I'm not against it but I don't know why the boys were mixed in this adventure-log. It just felt weird. Sorry if I offended. If you just write it normally it will be better, somehow, it's hard to imagine...even though it can happen. Please try to edit it, it will get better... Otsukare
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The story is really amazing. It's so interesting to read. I can't believe it's the author's first novel. The author's writing skill I'd soo good.