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Chương 3: Chapter 3: March 29, Friday

~YOO'S RESIDENCE~

In Yoo's residence...

"Ae-ya! Come here faster!"

Shout the woman in the kitchen to Yeonae who's going down the stairs.

"Coming, eomma (mum)~"

Answered Yeonae as she quickly ran towards the kitchen with her bed hair and loose large gray t-shirt.

"HURRY UP AND EAT YOUR SNACK. We're having dinner at the Lee's."

Said Yeonae's mother as she gives Yeonae's snack and looks at her with trace of grumpiness on her face. Yeonae choked, began to cough, drinks water and after swallowing her snack, she quickly looked at her mother with wide eyes.

"Mwo (What)?!"

Asked Yeonae to her mother as she continues to look at her with her eyes wide open. Her mother just glared at her and walk towards the living room then take a sit at the couch.

"Because Jiwoo's eomeoni (mother) invited us for dinner and it's Jisun-ah's 25th birthday."

Answered Yeonae's mother to her as she now plays in her phone at the living room. Yeonae quickly finishes her snack and put the plate at the sink.

"What date is it today, eomma (mum)?"

Asked Yeonae to her mother as she walk towards the living room to talk to her mother.

"It's March 29 and it's your eonni's (older girl *female to female*) birthday."

Answered Yeonae's mother to her question without even looking at her and continues to play on her phone.

"But I don't want to go, eomma (mum)."

Said Yeonae as she stood in the living room while facing her mother, before her mother says anything to her, their doorbell suddenly rang, making them both look at the door.

"GO AND TAKE A LOOK WHO IT IS."

Ordered Yeonae's mother to her as she continues to play on her phone. Yeonae quickly followed her mother's order then walks out of their house to open their gate.

"You didn't text me the other day! Nakakainis ka (You are annoying)!"

Yelled Danica to Yeonae as soon as she unlocks and opens the gate while Hayden is standing behind Danica and glares at Yeonae. She quickly closed their gate without locking it and goes back inside the house.

"WHO IS IT?"

Asked Yeonae's mother as soon as Yeonae comes back inside and still not looking at her.

"IT'S THEM."

Answered Yeonae to her mother as she began to climb up the stairs. Few seconds later, Danica and Hayden enter their house while looking at Yeonae who ignored them and continues to climb up the stairs.

"Yeonae-ya! Bumalik ka dito (Come back here)! Good afternoon imo (close aunt). Yoo Yeonae!"

Yelled and greet Danica to Yeonae and Yeonae's mother, Willow, as she bows to her and then quickly follows Yeonae with her eyes.

"Good afternoon imo (close aunt). WILL YEONAE COME AT THE LEE'S LATER?"

Asked Hayden to Willow after he bowed to her. She looked at them and bows back to both of them while still sitting at the couch.

"GOOD AFTERNOON HAYDEN. DANICA. SHE SAID THAT SHE DIDN'T WANT TO."

Answered Willow to Hayden's question and then continued playing with her phone. Hayden and Danica quickly looked at each other and then looks back at their imo.

"Imo, can we go to Yeonae-ya's room?"

Asked Danica to Willow very politely as she continues to look at her with a smile on her face or maybe gritting her teeth.

"GO WAKE UP HER SENSES FOR ME, OKAY? Jiwoo's eomeoni and Jisun-ah wants her there."

Answered Willow to Danica as she quickly looks at her then looks back on her phone to continue her game.

"WE WILL, imo."

Answered Hayden as he and Danica bowed to her again, go upstairs then enters the room of Yeonae.

"Why didn't you text me the other day?! We're worried sick because of you!"

Yelled Danica to Yeonae who's laying on her bed with her blanket covering her whole body as Danica takes a sit on her bed. Hayden closed the door and quietly takes a sit at her bed as well.

"Eonni (older girl *female to female*)."

Called Yeonae to Danica as she now sits on her bed as well, removes her blanket and faces Danica.

"Mwo?!"

Yelled Danica to Yeonae with wide eyes as she looks at her.

"I think I had a dream about BTS this past nights."

Said Yeonae to Danica with a trace of confusion in her tone and on her face. Danica widened her eyes even more while Hayden just rolled his eyes.

"Hala (Oh my)~! What kind of dream? Am I in there too? Did I hug them in your dreams? Tell me! Spill it out! Nae-excite na ako (I'm already excited)~!"

Asked Danica excitedly to Yeonae while holding her arms as she tries not to shake Yeonae. Hayden quickly glares at Danica and then stands up from Yeonae's bed.

"I'm just gone go to hyeong's (older guy *male to male*) room."

Said Hayden to both Danica and Yeonae as he points the door. Danica just shooed him as an answer, while Yeonae just looked at him. Hayden quickly walks towards the door, opened it, walks out from Yeonae's room and closed it again.

"So here's the thing. In my dream, I bumped into Taehyung oppa (older guy *female to male*). He dropped the shopping bags that he's carrying and I helped him pick it all up. Then you, Hayden oppa and the 'other' one who I don't want to hear the name, came out of nowhere. That's when Taehyung oppa ran away and I got pissed with you guys."

Said Yeonae to Danica as she slowly removes Danica's hands on both her arms. But before Yeonae succeeds on removing Danica's hands from her arms, she got hit by her on her leg.

"Ack! What was that for?!"

Asked Yeonae to Danica pissed as she now caresses her leg that got hit and glares at Danica.

"Magtigil ka dyan (Stop there)! Just continue your story!"

Said Danica to Yeonae as she looks at her.

"Geurae (Ok). So, then I walked out and went to the parking lot where I saw Taehyung oppa (older guy *female to male*) again then we became friends and he introduces me to the other members of BTS. After that, we went to a photo studio and you won't believe it."

Continued Yeonae then quickly hold Danica's hands. Danica quickly glares at Yeonae but that didn't make her flinch, not a little bit.

"Ano (What)?! Ano (What)?! Finish it already!"

Shout Danica at Yeonae as she tries to escape from Yeonae's grip on her hands.

"I became friends with the photographer and then the photographer let me join the photoshoot WITH BTS! AAAHHH!"

Finished Yeonae to her story as she finally releases Danica's hands, lay down her bed and roll around while screaming.

"Manahimik ka (Shut up). That'll only happen in your dreams."

Said Danica to Yeonae as she crosses her arms and tries to avoid looking at Yeonae who's still rolling around her bed. Then suddenly, the door of Yeonae's room opened and a young man with black messy hair, wearing white sleeveless shirt and a pair of red boxers enters her room.

"YEONAE YOO!"

Called the young man with messy hair, wearing white sleeveless shirt and a pair of red boxers to Yeonae as he now stands in front of her bed.

"Neo mwohanya (What are you doing)?"

Asked the young man with messy hair, wearing white sleeveless shirt and a pair of red boxers to Yeonae as soon as he sees her rolling around her bed, while Danica stared at him with her mouth slightly opened and then Hayden appeared beside the young man all of a sudden.

"Yeonae-ya... next time, call me when you had a dream and I will gladly go here in no time just to see Yeonhun oppa (older brother *female to male*)-- I mean just to hear your story."

Said Danica to Yeonae as she continues to stare at Yeonae's older brother named Yeonhun. Yeonae quickly stopped rolling on her bed and then glares at her older brother.

"Why are you here, oppa (older brother *female to male*)? This is my room."

Asked Yeonae to her older brother, Yeonhun, as she now sits properly on her bed while still glaring at her older brother.

"Hayden-ah told me that you did not text them the other day if you got home safely or not. Then you don't want to go to the Lee's for dinner. Neoneun jukgo sipeo (Do you want to die)?"

Said Yeonhun to Yeonae as he crosses his arms while still looking at his younger sister. Yeonae quickly glares at Hayden.

"So that's why you went to his room, huh. Nega sirheoyo (I hate you)!"

Shout Yeonae to Hayden as she throws a pillow at him, but Yeonhun quickly caught it while he's now glaring at his younger sister. And suddenly, a young girl showed up at Yeonae's bedroom door who's carrying an anime stuffed toy while rubbing her eye.

"Argh! Dakcheo (Shut up)! I'M SLEEPING! Nan neoga sirheo (I hate you)!"

Yelled the young girl from Yeonae's door as she glares to all of them while still holding her anime stuffed toy.

"Enough! Yoo Yeonae! You will go to the Lee's with us whether you like it or not! And Yoo Yeonchae! Go fix yourself and eat your snack downstairs!"

Yelled Yeonhun to both of his younger sisters as he now scowls at them.

"Sirheo (No)!"

Yelled Yeonae to Yeonhun as she now throws a pillow towards him. Yeonhun quickly catches it effortlessly, walk towards Danica and give both pillows to her while smiling.

"Please make her look like a human for the evening. Gamsahabnida (Thank you)."

Said Yeonhun to Danica then started to walk out of Yeonae's room, while Hayden quickly followed his cousin and closes Yeonae's bedroom door. As soon as the door closes, Yeonae yelled aggressively and throwed another pillow to the floor.

"Yeonhun oppa (older guy *female to male*) talked to me."

Said Danica to herself while still staring at the door and hugging Yeonae's pillows that Yeonhun gave to her earlier. As soon as Yeonae heard it, she quickly hit Danica using her another pillow.

"Aaah! That freakin' hurts, ok?! Neo peongkeu (You punk)!"

Yelled Danica to Yeonae as she hit her too using the pillows that she's hugging a while ago. Yeonae just shut her eyes and recieved Danica's hit, making her lay on her bed once again.

"Ahh. Forget it. I'm just gone take a shower."

Said Yeonae as she gets up from her bed and then walk towards the bathroom inside her bedroom. As Yeonae enters her bathroom, Danica quickly snatched Yeonae's pillows that Yeonhun gave her and hugged it again.

"And I'll help you to look like a human because Yeonhun oppa (older guy *female to male*) told me to."

Said Danica as she places the pillows that she's hugging on a beanbag and then fixes Yeonae's bed. A few moments later, Yeonae walks out from the bathroom wearing only a purple robe. Danica, who's now sitting on the beanbag while still hugging Yeonae's pillows, quickly looked at her, raised an eyebrow, gave her a naughty smile and then, out of the blue, nods at her.

"Mwo (What)? Purple is my favorite color and you know that."

Said Yeonae as she walked closer to Danica. She just hit Yeonae using the pillow that she's holding as soon as she stands in front of her.

"Aaah! What was that for?!"

Shout Yeonae as she now caresses her arm that Danica hit. Danica quickly stood up from the beanbag, puts down the pillows that she's holding there and then suddenly touches Yeonae's shoulders.

"For misunderstanding me! It's not the reason why I looked at you like that! It's your body figure, bobo (stupid)!"

Yelled Danica as she removes her hold from Yeonae's shoulders, walk towards Yeonae's cabinet, took her light pink colored underwear and raised it near Yeonae's face. Yeonae yelled at her and then puts down Danica's hand that's holding her underwear.

"Ano (What)? It means affection and admiration, you know."

Said Danica then pouts at Yeonae while still holding her underwear.

"Pabo (Fool)! I KNOW! And that is why I don't want to wear it today!"

Yelled Yeonae as she whacked Danica with the towel that she's now holding.

"Ahh! Tama na (Stop)! But how about coral? It means gentle and DESIRE~"

Asked Danica to Yeonae as she quickly snatches the coral-colored underwear of Yeonae from the cabinet. Yeonae looked at Danica with disgust, while Danica just moved her eyebrows up and down with a naughty smile on her lips.

"Sirheo (No)!"

Yelled Yeonae to Danica as she continues to whacking her with her towel.

"Then peach it is!"

Shout Danica as she snatched the peached colored underwear of Yeonae from the cabinet, making Yeonae stop whacking her.

"Hmm... gwaenchanhayo (it's okay)."

Answered Yeonae as she arranges the other underwear that Danica took from her cabinet. Yeonae quickly wears them and took the peach-colored bra and wears it, too . As soon as Yeonae finished wearing her underwear, she walks back to her bed where Danica is already sitting and then looks at the gown that Danica prepared for her.

"Hmm... Come to think of it. Why do you hate Lee Jihun so much?"

Asked Danica to Yeonae who's now putting on the gown that she prepared for her while still sitting on the bed.

"Because he's obsessed with me."

Answered Yeonae quickly as she finished dressing herself up and then takes a sit in front of her dressing table. Danica quickly followed her and starts applying moisturizer on Yeonae's face.

"That's not a good reason at all."

Said Danica as she now applies a primer on Yeonae's face.

"UH... YEAH, IT IS."

Said Yeonae to her. Danica just pouts in front of Yeonae as she now applies a bb cream on her face.

"The real reason please. That's just an excuse."

Said Danica to Yeonae. She just rolled her eyes and crossed her arms as Danica applies concealer under her eyes and on her tiny moles on her face.

"Ugh. I d-don't hate him. I just... feel uncomfortable around someone who likes me."

Said Yeonae then glares at Danica while pouting as her friend now applies bronzer on specific parts of her face. As soon as Danica finished applying bronzer, she now applies a light blush on both Yeonae's cheeks. A little touch of highlights, a smokey feel eyeshadows, eyeliner to define her eyes more, mascara for forming her long eyelashes, a small amount of red wine lipstick and viola~!

"Uhuh. Thought so. Ayan, tapos na (There, finished)."

Said Danica as she let Yeonae see herself in front of the mirror. Danica then places her face beside Yeonae's.

"And now they can mistake us as twins."

Said Danica to Yeonae who's wearing a lavender colored floral maxi dress, have messy bun and is wearing a simple and a little touch of dark kind of make-up.

"Jeoriga (Go away)."

Said Yeonae to Danica as she starts to glare at her friend again. Danica pouts and then walk towards the bedroom door. Yeonae looks at herself a little but longer in the mirror, but then stood up and followed Danica towards her bedroom door and both of them now started walking down the stairs.

"Daebak (Awesome). Now you look like a human."

Said Yeonhun to Yeonae when both Danica and Yeonae reached the bottom of the stairs while looking at his younger sister.

"How come you like a human?! You're supposed to look like an alien, eonni (older sister *female to female*)! "

Said Yeonchae then crossed her arms and pout while looking at her older sister. But after a few seconds of silence, all of them walks out of the house and hop into the van. As the evening is slowly approaching, they finally reached their destination.

~LEE'S RESIDENCE~

"Annyeonghaseyo (Hello)~ eotteohge jinae (how are you), Yoo Jeonhyeon-ssi (Mr. Jeonhyeon Yoo)?"

Asked the woman who's wearing a white modified A-line gown to the man who's wearing a black structured suit jacket silhouette, Jeonhyeon, while smiling at him.

"Naneun haengbokhada (I am happy). Gamsahabnida (Thank you)~."

Answered Jeonhyeon to the woman who's wearing a white modified A-line gown while smiling at her.

"Appa (Dad)! Baegopah (I'm hungry)!"

Said Yeonchae to Jeonhyeon as she started to pull the end of the sleeve of her father's suit jacket silhouette while looking at him.

"Geumanhae (Stop it). Have some patience, Yoo Yeonchae-ssi (Ms. Yeonchae Yoo)."

Said Jeonhyeon to his youngest child as he looks at her and starts to grind his teeth in front of Yeonchae.

"Gwaenchana (It's okay), Yoo Jeonhyeon-ssi. You kids go to the dining area first and we'll follow. Danica-ya and Hayden-ah, your family is waiting for the both of you at the dining table."

Said the woman who's wearing a white modified A-line gown to Yeonchae, Yeonae, Yeonhun, Hayden and Danica.

"Gamsahabnida (Thank you), imo (aunt)~."

Said the five of them as they bowed to the woman who's wearing a white modified A-line gown. The woman smiled at them and the five of them starts to walk towards the dinning.

"We're just eating dinner, right? But why do we need to wear such dinner attire? IT'S VERY UNCOMFORTABLE."

Asked Yeonchae to the others while they're walking towards the dining area.

"Find it out by yourself, Yeonchae-ya."

Answered Yeonhun to his younger sister, Yeonchae. When they finally reached the dining area, a young woman wearing a red mermaid gown, have lace braided bun and is wearing a natural red lipstick makeup look ran towards Yeonhun and hugged him so tightly.

"I missed you, you dumbass!"

Said the young woman wearing a red mermaid gown, have lace braided bun and is wearing a natural red lipstick make-up to Yeonhun while still hugging him with a smile on her face.

"I missed you too, Jisun-ah."

Replied Yeonhun who's wearing a maroon fitted suit jacket silhouette to the young woman named Jisun, while he's now smiling at her, too. And then a few seconds have passed, they both let go of their hug. A young girl wearing a pink chiffon gown ran towards Yeonchae who's wearing a lime green flapper gown and as soon as they get close with one another, they hugged each other. Hayden, who's wearing a white sack suit jacket silhouette and Danica who's wearing a gray asymmetrical gown just walk towards their parents. Then later on, a young boy wearing a purple tuxedo ran towards Yeonae with a wide smile on his face.

"Annyeong (Hi), Wonhyeon-ie~"

Greet Yeonae to the young boy wearing a purple tuxedo named Wonhyeon, as she carries him as soon as he gets close to her.

"Annyeonghaseyo, Yeonae nuna (older girl *male to female*)~!"

Replied Wonhyeon to Yeonae as he hugged her so tightly while she's carrying him. Yeonae smiled widely as well as Wonhyeon lets her go from his hug.

"Yeonae-ya, come sit here beside us."

Said the man wearing a black tuxedo to Yeonae while looking at her and Wonhyeon.

"Ige gwaenchanhseubnikka (Is this okay)?"

Asked Yeonae to the man wearing black tuxedo, Jiwoo, while she's still carrying Wonhyeon.

"Gwaenchana (It's okay). Besides, you're Yoo Yeonae."

Answered Jiwoo to Yeonae while smiling at her. She then walks towards the seat beside Jiwoo and make Wonhyeon sit beside his father and takes a sit between Wonhyeon and Hayden. As the foods are being placed by the maids of the Lee's, Sehui, Willow and Jeonhyeon finally arrived at the dining area.

"Thank you all for coming tonight. Today is my daughter, Lee Jisun's, 25th birthday. Saengil chukhadeurimnida (Happy birthday *formal*), Jisun-ah."

Said the man wearing red tuxedo while standing, then raised his glass of wine at the air. And so all the adults raised their glass of wine in the air while looking at Jisun with a smile on their faces.

"Saengil chukhadeurimnida (Happy birthday *formal*)~."

They all cheered, making Jisun smile. Suddenly, Yeonae looked at Yeonhun who is looking at Jisun while smiling. And so is Jisun to Yeonhun. Yeonae just smile, hoping that her Yeonhun oppa (older brother *female to male*) and Jisun eonni (older girl *female to female*) end up with each other.

"Yeonae-ya."

Called Hayden to Yeonae all of a sudden while they're all eating. Yeonae quickly swallowed the food she's chewing and then looks at Hayden.

"YES?"

Yeonae asked while still looking at her cousin sitting next to her.

"YOU REALLY DON'T WANT TO COME HERE TONIGHT, RIGHT?"

Hayden asked whispering, as if he don't want anyone to hear it except for Yeonae. She just nods as an answer while still looking at him.

"COME WITH US LATER. Danica nuna (older girl *male to female*) will come too."

Hayden whispered again to Yeonae as he continues to eat. Yeonae smirked then looks at Danica who's now looking at her while smiling.

"OK."

Yeonae answered then continues to eat her meal. And so, the evening continues while they are all now chatting about their company, family, achievements, goals, plans and so many other things that they want to brag about.

"Nuna (older girl *male to female*) let's play!"

Said Wonhyeon to Yeonae while he's shaking Yeonae's arm and looking at her with a smile on his face, making her look at him with a smile on her face as well before finishing her drink.

"Wonhyeon-ah, let your Yeonae nuna (older girl *male to female*) finish drinking her juice first."

Said Jiwoo to his son Wonhyeon. So then Yeonae quickly drinks her juice, as if she doesn't want to stay in an awkward situation like that.

"Gwaenchanayo (It's okay). I'm already finished."

Yeonae said to Jiwoo as she looks at him while smiling. Jiwoo just sighed as Wonhyeon smiles and claps his hands due to his happiness.

"Geurae (Okay). Be a good boy with your Yeonae nuna (older girl *male to female*) okay, Wonhyeon-ah?"

Said Jiwoo to Wonhyeon while smiling at his son. The young boy nods, quickly gets off the chair and pulled Yeonae away from the dining table outside. Jiwoo chuckled as he watches his son, then continued eating. Yeonae and Wonhyeon enters the mansion and took a sit on the couch at the living room.

"What do you want us to play, Wonhyeon-ie?"

Yeonae asked Wonhyeon while looking at him with a smile on her face. The young boy looks around like it is his duty is to protect Yeonae.

"Neo mwohanya, Wonhyeon-ie (What are you doing, Wonhyeon-ie)? I thought you want to play with me?"

Yeonae asked Wonhyeon again as she now looks at him with her eyes wide open. The young boy just stood straight in front of the sitting young lady and then held her hands.

"I want to nuna (older girl *male to female*), but it's time for bed and Hayden hyeongnim (formal / huge age gap - older guy *male to male*) asks me a favor in exchange of chocolates for a whole week~!"

Answered Wonhyeon to Yeonae as he let go of her hand and starts to jump around the living room. Then suddenly, Danica showed up and takes a sit at the couch beside Yeonae.

"HELLO, MY DEAR BESTIE!"

Said Danica to Yeonae as she rests her arm across Yeonae's shoulders while looking at her. Yeonae quickly looks at Danica with a grin on her lips.

"What excuse did you say?"

Asked Yeonae to Danica while still grinning at her.

"I told uri eomeoni (my mother) that I don't feel so well and that I'll barf any minute if I don't go home now."

Answered Danica to Yeonae as she continues to rest her arm across her friend's shoulders, then Hayden suddenly showed up and stand beside Wonhyeon who's still standing in front of Yeonae. Wonhyeon, Danica and Yeonae just looked at him with their eyes wide open.

"Here's the key. Go and take the clothes I bought from the trunk of my abeoji-oe (father's) car, and for you Wonhyeon-ah, I'll start giving you chocolates tomorrow, ok?"

Said Hayden to the three of them while looking at them. Yeonae and Danica both stood up from the couch and then started to walk out from the mansion and towards the car of Hayden's father, while Wonhyeon nods in glee.

"Heh. Gwiyeobne (Cute). Uhm... excuse me nuna (older girl *male to female*), could you take care of Wonhyeon-ah? He told me that he's sleepy."

Ask Hayden to the young maid of the Lee's as he guides Wonhyeon towards the maid. The young maid bowed at him then take Wonhyeon with her to his bedroom. A few more minutes, Yeonae and Danica finally get back from where they left Hayden with the clothes that he's talking about.

"HERE'S YOUR CLOTHES."

Said Danica to Hayden as she gives the gray t-shirt and red shorts to him.

"DANICA AND I WILL GO CHANGE FIRST."

Said Yeonae to Hayden as she and Danica starts to walk towards the bathroom as soon as Hayden nods at them. Both of them young ladies enter the bathroom and began changing their clothes. Hayden then took a sit on the couch in the living room as he waits for Yeonae and Danica.

"Planning to get away?"

Asked Jihun to Hayden as soon as he enters his family's mansion then stand far from Yeonae's cousin. Hayden quickly glares at Jihun and then crosses his arms.

"Yeonae-ya don't want to stay here any longer."

Answered Hayden to Jihun as he continues to glare at him.

"Neo michyeosseo (Are you crazy)?! You knew that if you guys get caught, Yeonae-ya will be grounded!"

Said Jihun to Hayden worriedly as he points his index finger towards the bathroom that. Hayden finally stood up from the couch, walk towards Jihun and look at his eyes sharply.

"My cousin don't want to be here in the first place. Wae (Why)? Because she's not comfortable with someone who 'likes' her. Mian (Sorry). Let me correct that. She's not comfortable with someone who's 'obsessed' with her. If you really 'like' her, then let her be happy. Even if it doesn't include you."

Said Hayden to Jihun as he continues to look in his eyes sharply. A few seconds later, Yeonae and Danica walks out of the bathroom saw Hayden and Jihun standing in front of one another.

"I-I should go back. Enjoy your n-night."

Said Jihun as soon as Yeonae and Danica stood near him and Hayden. Danica just slightly bowed at him and so is he then he now started to walk back at the dining area outside of the mansion.


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