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amazed by male character ashton ....he was the ideal man to keep his love to be happy and feel secured.he even gone to the same college to be with her.....while Fiona is doing all she could to be match the love she recieved..
First of all thanks for the story .... I just read the first chapter n was just curious to let u know that u should work on every details for eg u wrote she woke up n it was 3 am n his brother comes n tells her to get ready n come for breakfast its quite not matching .....hope u dont mind .... Still looking forward for it all the very best
This is a very well written story so far. I'll love 2 share this 2 evry1. A newcomer like u is really talented.👌👌👌👌👌👌 Best of luck...keep writing...good luck
Dear Readers, This novel had already been closed by me due to some issues. Despite that, I've been writing another novel. If you have time, then read it. Here I provide the name of the novel. "Lyricist: Her Revenge" Please give it a try!! Thank you 🙂🙂🙂
amazed by male character ashton ....he was the ideal man to keep his love to be happy and feel secured.he even gone to the same college to be with her.....while Fiona is doing all she could to be match the love she recieved..
First of all thanks for the story .... I just read the first chapter n was just curious to let u know that u should work on every details for eg u wrote she woke up n it was 3 am n his brother comes n tells her to get ready n come for breakfast its quite not matching .....hope u dont mind .... Still looking forward for it all the very best
This is a very well written story so far. I'll love 2 share this 2 evry1. A newcomer like u is really talented.👌👌👌👌👌👌 Best of luck...keep writing...good luck
Dear Readers, This novel had already been closed by me due to some issues. Despite that, I've been writing another novel. If you have time, then read it. Here I provide the name of the novel. "Lyricist: Her Revenge" Please give it a try!! Thank you 🙂🙂🙂