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You are a born story teller The co-ordination is wonderful one thing you how suspended you readers you also educate the your readers in way that they are always alert
This a good readable book please keep on.The is story interesting The writer is open minded he is a teller he has a good follow up of segments and the joinery
Since there are already a lot of chapter, i will read it halfthrough and review it, all I could say this is such a cute and fluffy romance, the plot is interesting and all, there was a bit problem in writing, maybe you could go more indetail instead of moving in a fast pace, but overall it was no problem. Good job author! Keep it up.
I like the idea, it gives the necessary amount of fan-fic vibes, it's cute and fun to read, hOwEveR, I do have some problems with it. The writing quality could be so much better. It seems like every sentence has a grammatical error and punctuation is either used or not used. I suggest you use Grammarly or any other sort of grammar check system. The story development is mediocre to me, I feel like it could be much more vibrant. Speaking of which, I feel like the characters could feel a bit more realistic. It just seems like something is lacking. The world background is okay, but with more descriptive detail of how everything looks like and how things are done, I believe this story would greatly improve. The last thing is the stability of updates. As an author, I know how difficult it can be when it comes to writing something because, you know, life... but try and come up with a schedule. Even if it's once a month or so. It's better for your fans to know when you plan on updating instead of you updating whenever you feel like. Hopefully I didn't offend you in any way, I just want to give the right feedback in order for your story to thrive. Either way, you nice keep going! (please tell me you got that reference or I will be sad)
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Same I love or should I say I purple taehyung and Lisa💜💜💜♥️♥️♥️💜♥️💜♥️💜. I also love k dramas when I read the synopsis I got hooked. It is nice💜♥️💜💜♥️💜♥️💜♥️♥️💜💜💜♥️💜♥️♥️♥️💜♥️💜♥️
Honest Review This one is hard for me to review as the genre is not one I normally read. I'll be a little generous with the stars. Overall though, you have a good story and if you can flesh out the grammar issues, many of the other issues will disappear as well if you ask me. The Good: Interesting plot, the characters have good chemistry and the FL doesn't annoy me which is a big plus. The Bad: The grammar... oh the grammar... I recommend Grammarly or getting an editor. I've probably misinterpreted some of the things that have been written, but I can't say for sure. Check your facts/units sometimes. You once gave a woman 100 inch hips, that's HUGE! Did you maybe mean 100 cm? 100 cm is much more reasonable. The Neutral: Short chapters... very short chapters, this breaks immersion in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. The structure is painful to read for me. One short sentence and a line break followed by another short sentence and a line break without grouping common sentences into paragraphs makes it look like just a lot of lines of text.
The story is alright - I saw a lot of people say this but you really need to work on the grammar and the spelling of things. Maybe the characters get more complex later on but they seem a little too perfect for me, y'know. I'm very interested to see how this new world works and why the MC was transported there, not to mention the magic.
My God thisnis really amssing but i have a question,why that bortex are opening and changin peoplenfrom.places? And what is going.on betwen the pet andmaster? Tell.me qhy have to be so dam exaiting all the thing they made together
The FL sure is relatable. I understand. I also want to run to South Korea for a Bigbang concert someday *_* Too bad she got stuck in the Chinese empire era haha. I would love to see how she progresses from there. The writing is amazing and its easy to read. Keep up the good work :)
So everyone has already talked about the grammar and writing style. Might want to read over your chapters a bit more but the writing style makes it easy for any time of reader to follow along. The story is pretty simplistic but interesting, as far as it goes compared to others it's decent and worthy enough to give a try. As for world background, it's actually done well at least in a cultural aspect. Which is great, I always tell people this is the hardest thing to do. Painting a landscape and telling a story at the same time is crucial and not many people can do it, including myself. Keep going and definitely recommend reviewing your chapters a bit more before posting.
I just found this story and through the synopsis, it seems interesting. The kind of genre I like is romance, transmigration and it really sounds good. I will definitely gonna give it a try because all the novels I am reading are ongoing. So I need to find some more. And I guess I found one.
At the beginning, I thought that the story would be just another typical cliche transmigration story (coughs the plane crash and her background). But I really didn't expect the humor? It made for a nice touch in comparison to the rest of the story. Good luck!
I just started reading this book and I will have to say it a really great book and I will recommend this to other people to read as well it some new to read
I wouldn't dwell on the writing part, they have said quite enough of that already and its understandable that its your first. It is my first either with my novel. If everyone can pass this part, the plot is actually good and witty. As well as the character backgrounds. So far your doing good author! Keep it up ! 🙌 (Review Trade)
The story is nice and interesting. And I won't go to the grammar as many has pointed it out. The story has processed obviously better in grammar since those reviews were left so if you are nitpicking type and would say you won't even touch this novel because the ratings and the people saying the grammar is bad. Then you are missing a lot as this author has had lots of development in that area. First when I started to read the character development could have had many developments and it didn't sometimes seem like the characters were alive but when I got further into the novel the author made the characters to come alive more and had lots of progress in that and making the story and it's flow more alive. So the story has developed quite a lot and it has potential still to become better and the author also has potential. So let me say good work with the novel and keep writing as you have developed quite a lot and the story really feels nice.
FL& her fox seriously drive me bonkers but I guess in a good way kinda! Funny when our fox shows clear signs of raging jealousy an still can me utterly clueless on his feelings for his 'master'. But such can be said bout our FL too ahaha
I saw that you have received a lot of feedback to improve. I will not discuss that. I think you got potential here. I am also a new writer and I understand what the challenges here. I think you're getting there, it's great. Keep on moving forward! I think the characters are great. The world was also shaped nicely. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!
As a beginner, I don't fault you. I have to say well done. You really did great. Writing is not as easy as it looks. All the errors you made will come to pass as you continue writing. The only way to improve better is to continue writing. Although, most of the chapters are short, don't change it yet. Continue like that for now, you are perfectly fine. I will be following your work. 👍.
Hi there!! I’ve read a few chapters of your story so far and am pleased with it. Nice cover art as well to attract your readers. I also agree with all the reviews on grammar. Perhaps you can try grammarly? It helps edit and spots grammar mistakes which some were simple I spotted in the story. You are beginning writer so I do wish you the best of luck upon building vocab and such. I have nothing else to say other than that your story is interesting and I will continue reading. Updates seem stable and characters could use more work on the emotions but with time, I think I can see the characters slowly grow as well!! Take all reviews with great criticism and good luck on this story author~
The story is interesting... I didn't have any problems with your grammar as I could read through it just fine. I liked your synopsis, it was funny😂 Your grammar did improve a lot throughout ( I have my fair share of grammar mistakes too😂). I like how you add your reactions in between the story. I could sympathise with the Fl when the plane crashed. Overall, this story made me laugh a lot. Keep up the good work❤
The author's idea of a silly, spoiled girl getting transmigrated into ancient times is different from all those doctors/assassins/military personnel getting a chance at transportation and it shows in the story. When the MC makes decisions without thinking through or goes with her knee - jerk reaction, it depicts clearly that she isn't that well-versed in societal terms and has led a very sheltered life. I like this concept and it's more satisfying than reading about all those manipulative girls putting on an act. Though there are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that takes away the enjoyment of reading the story 🙂 Keep up the good work, author!
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The cover of the book catches the attention of a reader. Making the book special since it’s book cover represents the main idea of the story. While the cover does this it’s also tells a little bit of the story through the picture. Mainly using non - verbal communication to talk their audience. You have perfect spelling grammar. All of your sentences are well developed and has good structure. The story you are writing is a original. I am always to excited to read the next chapters to find out what happens next. Your book is awesome and please continue writing.
All right, I'm not really someone who scrutinize one's english, as long as it's understandable and smooth to read, it's good to go. It's a good story with interesting plot, but yeah, the characters lacks emotion and consistensy. However, if you'll just go with the flow of the story, it was really a good read!
Fan Girl faces the afterlife with new problems. Nicely written for fast reading. Young Adult Comedy. Young Adult Comedy. Young Adult Comedy.
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You are a born story teller The co-ordination is wonderful one thing you how suspended you readers you also educate the your readers in way that they are always alert
This a good readable book please keep on.The is story interesting The writer is open minded he is a teller he has a good follow up of segments and the joinery
Since there are already a lot of chapter, i will read it halfthrough and review it, all I could say this is such a cute and fluffy romance, the plot is interesting and all, there was a bit problem in writing, maybe you could go more indetail instead of moving in a fast pace, but overall it was no problem. Good job author! Keep it up.
I like the idea, it gives the necessary amount of fan-fic vibes, it's cute and fun to read, hOwEveR, I do have some problems with it. The writing quality could be so much better. It seems like every sentence has a grammatical error and punctuation is either used or not used. I suggest you use Grammarly or any other sort of grammar check system. The story development is mediocre to me, I feel like it could be much more vibrant. Speaking of which, I feel like the characters could feel a bit more realistic. It just seems like something is lacking. The world background is okay, but with more descriptive detail of how everything looks like and how things are done, I believe this story would greatly improve. The last thing is the stability of updates. As an author, I know how difficult it can be when it comes to writing something because, you know, life... but try and come up with a schedule. Even if it's once a month or so. It's better for your fans to know when you plan on updating instead of you updating whenever you feel like. Hopefully I didn't offend you in any way, I just want to give the right feedback in order for your story to thrive. Either way, you nice keep going! (please tell me you got that reference or I will be sad)
Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.
Same I love or should I say I purple taehyung and Lisa💜💜💜♥️♥️♥️💜♥️💜♥️💜. I also love k dramas when I read the synopsis I got hooked. It is nice💜♥️💜💜♥️💜♥️💜♥️♥️💜💜💜♥️💜♥️♥️♥️💜♥️💜♥️
Honest Review This one is hard for me to review as the genre is not one I normally read. I'll be a little generous with the stars. Overall though, you have a good story and if you can flesh out the grammar issues, many of the other issues will disappear as well if you ask me. The Good: Interesting plot, the characters have good chemistry and the FL doesn't annoy me which is a big plus. The Bad: The grammar... oh the grammar... I recommend Grammarly or getting an editor. I've probably misinterpreted some of the things that have been written, but I can't say for sure. Check your facts/units sometimes. You once gave a woman 100 inch hips, that's HUGE! Did you maybe mean 100 cm? 100 cm is much more reasonable. The Neutral: Short chapters... very short chapters, this breaks immersion in my opinion, but that is just my opinion. The structure is painful to read for me. One short sentence and a line break followed by another short sentence and a line break without grouping common sentences into paragraphs makes it look like just a lot of lines of text.
The story is alright - I saw a lot of people say this but you really need to work on the grammar and the spelling of things. Maybe the characters get more complex later on but they seem a little too perfect for me, y'know. I'm very interested to see how this new world works and why the MC was transported there, not to mention the magic.
My God thisnis really amssing but i have a question,why that bortex are opening and changin peoplenfrom.places? And what is going.on betwen the pet andmaster? Tell.me qhy have to be so dam exaiting all the thing they made together
The FL sure is relatable. I understand. I also want to run to South Korea for a Bigbang concert someday *_* Too bad she got stuck in the Chinese empire era haha. I would love to see how she progresses from there. The writing is amazing and its easy to read. Keep up the good work :)
So everyone has already talked about the grammar and writing style. Might want to read over your chapters a bit more but the writing style makes it easy for any time of reader to follow along. The story is pretty simplistic but interesting, as far as it goes compared to others it's decent and worthy enough to give a try. As for world background, it's actually done well at least in a cultural aspect. Which is great, I always tell people this is the hardest thing to do. Painting a landscape and telling a story at the same time is crucial and not many people can do it, including myself. Keep going and definitely recommend reviewing your chapters a bit more before posting.
I just found this story and through the synopsis, it seems interesting. The kind of genre I like is romance, transmigration and it really sounds good. I will definitely gonna give it a try because all the novels I am reading are ongoing. So I need to find some more. And I guess I found one.
At the beginning, I thought that the story would be just another typical cliche transmigration story (coughs the plane crash and her background). But I really didn't expect the humor? It made for a nice touch in comparison to the rest of the story. Good luck!
I just started reading this book and I will have to say it a really great book and I will recommend this to other people to read as well it some new to read
I wouldn't dwell on the writing part, they have said quite enough of that already and its understandable that its your first. It is my first either with my novel. If everyone can pass this part, the plot is actually good and witty. As well as the character backgrounds. So far your doing good author! Keep it up ! 🙌 (Review Trade)
The story is nice and interesting. And I won't go to the grammar as many has pointed it out. The story has processed obviously better in grammar since those reviews were left so if you are nitpicking type and would say you won't even touch this novel because the ratings and the people saying the grammar is bad. Then you are missing a lot as this author has had lots of development in that area. First when I started to read the character development could have had many developments and it didn't sometimes seem like the characters were alive but when I got further into the novel the author made the characters to come alive more and had lots of progress in that and making the story and it's flow more alive. So the story has developed quite a lot and it has potential still to become better and the author also has potential. So let me say good work with the novel and keep writing as you have developed quite a lot and the story really feels nice.
FL& her fox seriously drive me bonkers but I guess in a good way kinda! Funny when our fox shows clear signs of raging jealousy an still can me utterly clueless on his feelings for his 'master'. But such can be said bout our FL too ahaha
I saw that you have received a lot of feedback to improve. I will not discuss that. I think you got potential here. I am also a new writer and I understand what the challenges here. I think you're getting there, it's great. Keep on moving forward! I think the characters are great. The world was also shaped nicely. Thanks for introducing this novel to me!
As a beginner, I don't fault you. I have to say well done. You really did great. Writing is not as easy as it looks. All the errors you made will come to pass as you continue writing. The only way to improve better is to continue writing. Although, most of the chapters are short, don't change it yet. Continue like that for now, you are perfectly fine. I will be following your work. 👍.
Hi there!! I’ve read a few chapters of your story so far and am pleased with it. Nice cover art as well to attract your readers. I also agree with all the reviews on grammar. Perhaps you can try grammarly? It helps edit and spots grammar mistakes which some were simple I spotted in the story. You are beginning writer so I do wish you the best of luck upon building vocab and such. I have nothing else to say other than that your story is interesting and I will continue reading. Updates seem stable and characters could use more work on the emotions but with time, I think I can see the characters slowly grow as well!! Take all reviews with great criticism and good luck on this story author~
The story is interesting... I didn't have any problems with your grammar as I could read through it just fine. I liked your synopsis, it was funny😂 Your grammar did improve a lot throughout ( I have my fair share of grammar mistakes too😂). I like how you add your reactions in between the story. I could sympathise with the Fl when the plane crashed. Overall, this story made me laugh a lot. Keep up the good work❤
The author's idea of a silly, spoiled girl getting transmigrated into ancient times is different from all those doctors/assassins/military personnel getting a chance at transportation and it shows in the story. When the MC makes decisions without thinking through or goes with her knee - jerk reaction, it depicts clearly that she isn't that well-versed in societal terms and has led a very sheltered life. I like this concept and it's more satisfying than reading about all those manipulative girls putting on an act. Though there are a few grammatical errors, but nothing that takes away the enjoyment of reading the story 🙂 Keep up the good work, author!
Tiết lộ Spoiler The cover of the book catches the attention of a reader. Making the book special since it’s book cover represents the main idea of the story. While the cover does this it’s also tells a little bit of the story through the picture. Mainly using non - verbal communication to talk their audience. You have perfect spelling grammar. All of your sentences are well developed and has good structure. The story you are writing is a original. I am always to excited to read the next chapters to find out what happens next. Your book is awesome and please continue writing.
All right, I'm not really someone who scrutinize one's english, as long as it's understandable and smooth to read, it's good to go. It's a good story with interesting plot, but yeah, the characters lacks emotion and consistensy. However, if you'll just go with the flow of the story, it was really a good read!
Fan Girl faces the afterlife with new problems. Nicely written for fast reading. Young Adult Comedy. Young Adult Comedy. Young Adult Comedy.
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