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this AU is very good not gonna lie the updates are slow but it's worth the wait
I absolutely love this fanfic and can’t wait for you to make more of it.
I hope that this fanfic gets finished cause it is a masterpiece and I would love to read the rest of it
It’s meh at best. The ship isn’t intergrated correctly and the writing quality is also meh at best. If you want to read go a ahead no one is stoping you.
great story but hasn't been updated I over 3 years hope it gets updated soon though before some some in the comments/reviews shouts 'viva la revolution' in full caps
Honestly one of my favorite rwby fanfics. Only problem I have with this story is that author hasn’t updated in three years and the mc reveals he’s from the past a little too much. The character feel like actual characters and don’t just exist to boost the mc’s ego. The action is alright and the diologe isn’t boring either. Although kinda feels like he overpowers his teammates but they actively grow with him so not too much of an issue. There’s good romance and no harem. He has multiple love interests but only sticks to one girl.
i love it but please come back and finish its so good i love rwby fanfics but people dont finish please do come back soon long live the king
I've read two of your fic before(spider man, and dragon ball) and I saw this one as well, so I might as well try since I'm interested in rwby right now.
Fun and unique story (ignore bottom text) Househusband occasionally iconoclastic
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I have written a thousand useless reviews Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood Time test our patience, cliff kun test our soul Let another update surface, hopefully, the author returns Hear my call, Unlimited Otaku Work
Love the story Pls come back Pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz plz plz???? XOXOXOXOXO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls Friend God Lord Saint Friend
Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!!
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I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (:-) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More more ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............. plz ...................................
YES!!!!!! YESSSSSS!!!!!! FUCKKKKNNNNN HEEEELLLLLLL YESSSSSS!!!!!!!! FINALLY SOMEONE DID A RWBY FANFIC ABOUT JOHNNY BOY. THIS MAN GOT SO MUCH POTENTIAL YET HE WAS WRITTEN AS A INSIGNIFICANT CLASS CLOWN. HELL IF HE USE HIS ABILITY RIGHT, HE COULD BE THE NEXT DEADPOOL SINCE HE GOT AN ABUNDANCE AMOUNT OF AURA PLUS ITS QUALITY IS VERY PURE COMPARE TO EVERYONE ELSE
Perfect fanfic. It is the infinite Tuskyomi of 69 ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,. . ,. . .
I have greatly enjoyed this! I really hope it keeps going and hope the author hasn't dropped it. It seems like it has been a bit sense the last update.
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I really love this story and wondering when the next update will happen this story makes me really happy and have reread this 7 times also where the h e double hockey sticks do I get the cover art it freacken epic
I went into the novel with low expectations because it's a fan-fic. But to my surprise the story is really great and catchy. I hope that more chapters will come out soon. The author is doing a great job.
It was a pretty great story at first but the whole sharing the system thing with others really ruins the story for me
this AU is very good not gonna lie the updates are slow but it's worth the wait
I absolutely love this fanfic and can’t wait for you to make more of it.
I hope that this fanfic gets finished cause it is a masterpiece and I would love to read the rest of it
It’s meh at best. The ship isn’t intergrated correctly and the writing quality is also meh at best. If you want to read go a ahead no one is stoping you.
great story but hasn't been updated I over 3 years hope it gets updated soon though before some some in the comments/reviews shouts 'viva la revolution' in full caps
Honestly one of my favorite rwby fanfics. Only problem I have with this story is that author hasn’t updated in three years and the mc reveals he’s from the past a little too much. The character feel like actual characters and don’t just exist to boost the mc’s ego. The action is alright and the diologe isn’t boring either. Although kinda feels like he overpowers his teammates but they actively grow with him so not too much of an issue. There’s good romance and no harem. He has multiple love interests but only sticks to one girl.
i love it but please come back and finish its so good i love rwby fanfics but people dont finish please do come back soon long live the king
I've read two of your fic before(spider man, and dragon ball) and I saw this one as well, so I might as well try since I'm interested in rwby right now.
Fun and unique story (ignore bottom text) Househusband occasionally iconoclastic
come back please ...................................................... [[][][][][][][][][][]]][][][][][][]]][][][][][]][][][][][][[][[][[][]
I have written a thousand useless reviews Webnovel is my body, exp is my blood Time test our patience, cliff kun test our soul Let another update surface, hopefully, the author returns Hear my call, Unlimited Otaku Work
Love the story Pls come back Pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz plz plz???? XOXOXOXOXO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls Friend God Lord Saint Friend
Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!! Please finish this!!!!!!
Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome Can you please update this it is awesome
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I like................................................................................................................................................
I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (:-) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More more ......... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............. plz ...................................
YES!!!!!! YESSSSSS!!!!!! FUCKKKKNNNNN HEEEELLLLLLL YESSSSSS!!!!!!!! FINALLY SOMEONE DID A RWBY FANFIC ABOUT JOHNNY BOY. THIS MAN GOT SO MUCH POTENTIAL YET HE WAS WRITTEN AS A INSIGNIFICANT CLASS CLOWN. HELL IF HE USE HIS ABILITY RIGHT, HE COULD BE THE NEXT DEADPOOL SINCE HE GOT AN ABUNDANCE AMOUNT OF AURA PLUS ITS QUALITY IS VERY PURE COMPARE TO EVERYONE ELSE
Perfect fanfic. It is the infinite Tuskyomi of 69 ,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,.,.,. . ,. . .
I have greatly enjoyed this! I really hope it keeps going and hope the author hasn't dropped it. It seems like it has been a bit sense the last update.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I really love this story and wondering when the next update will happen this story makes me really happy and have reread this 7 times also where the h e double hockey sticks do I get the cover art it freacken epic
I went into the novel with low expectations because it's a fan-fic. But to my surprise the story is really great and catchy. I hope that more chapters will come out soon. The author is doing a great job.
It was a pretty great story at first but the whole sharing the system thing with others really ruins the story for me