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Good story composition, great ideas, well designed characters. A few issues with punctuations, paraphrasing your sentences, repetition isn't good. Do add some quotations to identify the person speaking in the sentences rather than joining both characters say... Generally, it's perfect.. can't wait for the next chapter ☺️
I love how the female lead is so blunt and not scared of the dreaded aunt that has been tormenting the family in the name of thief mother's friend..
THis is such a GOLD!!😝😝 I was just scheming around here and there. and first chapter got me STUCK!! Guys this not typical..Idk what to do now cuz it doesnot seem like updating regulary😓😓😓...........Please author im Waiting😭😭
Author please what did I do to you to get this kind of suspense.. Please upload the chapters cause I can't wait to experience the romantic passion between Vivian and Samson.. And how Samson got divorce And also how Vivian put that old friend of Samson in her rightful place.. We she can't make fim again Please Author continue the good work we love you much and appreciate you Waiting for more thanks again
This novel got me a***w.. the two clashing characters.. Vivian and Samson they will make a good match cause I think Samson needs an eloquent woman to bring out the real him.. And Vivian on the other hand needs someone like Samson to always make her stand on her toes .. To bring out the real her in her... I must confess lthat am loving this novel.. Another character is Ralph I really want to know more about him and how far he's gone with his career.. Virginia is another character that I really want to know what actually went wrong between she and Samson.. Thanks author you got me on all your stories and the suspense is very high that I keep imagining what's gonna happen in the next chapter.. Thanks for being here author..much love
Well done author, the story is interesting and captivating but I do not want to believe that this is the end of the story. It will not be nice at all, or is there a continuation somewhere else or a different title? Please do reply.
I absolutely love the story. Its just that the author didn't update in a long long time. This is the best book that I've read in webnovel so far and I feel that the story is unique and interesting. Pls update pls update pls update plus update pls update pls update pls update please update please update
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I'm enjoying this story so much that I'm yearning for more updates. Pls when will this update happen? Like the characters, can't wait for the story to continue.
You all sleepy hoes who are sleeping on this story better wake up give some love.😂😂😂coz love yourself and love this story.Eye- .blah blah blah.ok so this story is really good i don't know why it didn't get much recognition so i will work hard to spread this lovely slowly so author please spread your wings to flyyyyyy
Ahhhh i'm in love.oh my my my oh myy my.ok so this story is really good.you describe all the emotions pretty well and plot is really good not like all those 😂😂white lotus,betray by best friend or half sister or companion and blah blah blah.this story deserves all the fame.FAME.😍
Very delightful read. Vivian is no slouch, and neither is Samuel. Their story is an interesting one and starts out with an argument. From lost shoes, to unusual business proposal, this has all the tropes of what can be found in Harlequin, but on a more interesting level. This has a few twists thrown in that I like over what is typically formulaic and would normally put me to sleep, which this one didn't. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
I like it so far.... Let me read more so i can really say what its all.about☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ i had much time today to read and relax... hoping I could be more interested to read this novel since the picture of the girl looks pretty............. 💞😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊💕💕💕
Great way of fleshing out the background story while keeping the plot moving. Can't wait to see what happens next. Gripping and intriguing. The storyline flows smoothly from one event to the next
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So far so good! Im really enjoying it. Loving the Gold Coast/Brisbane backdrop, and the spunky female with the button pushing male 😂😂😂. Excited for more 😍
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Nice story author, sounds interesting 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍😍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Here I'm again... If you know me or have read any of my stories then you'd discover how much I love writing and how much I try to please my audience, so please give me your votes and search for JoannaAngel05 in the search bar and see my other stories. Please please please vote and vote.. I'm a lover of Short stories and no much antagonist stories so please give my stories a try and kindly leave a review... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Update more chapters update more chapters please please 🙏🙏
Good story composition, great ideas, well designed characters. A few issues with punctuations, paraphrasing your sentences, repetition isn't good. Do add some quotations to identify the person speaking in the sentences rather than joining both characters say... Generally, it's perfect.. can't wait for the next chapter ☺️
I love how the female lead is so blunt and not scared of the dreaded aunt that has been tormenting the family in the name of thief mother's friend..
THis is such a GOLD!!😝😝 I was just scheming around here and there. and first chapter got me STUCK!! Guys this not typical..Idk what to do now cuz it doesnot seem like updating regulary😓😓😓...........Please author im Waiting😭😭
Author please what did I do to you to get this kind of suspense.. Please upload the chapters cause I can't wait to experience the romantic passion between Vivian and Samson.. And how Samson got divorce And also how Vivian put that old friend of Samson in her rightful place.. We she can't make fim again Please Author continue the good work we love you much and appreciate you Waiting for more thanks again
This novel got me a***w.. the two clashing characters.. Vivian and Samson they will make a good match cause I think Samson needs an eloquent woman to bring out the real him.. And Vivian on the other hand needs someone like Samson to always make her stand on her toes .. To bring out the real her in her... I must confess lthat am loving this novel.. Another character is Ralph I really want to know more about him and how far he's gone with his career.. Virginia is another character that I really want to know what actually went wrong between she and Samson.. Thanks author you got me on all your stories and the suspense is very high that I keep imagining what's gonna happen in the next chapter.. Thanks for being here author..much love
Well done author, the story is interesting and captivating but I do not want to believe that this is the end of the story. It will not be nice at all, or is there a continuation somewhere else or a different title? Please do reply.
I absolutely love the story. Its just that the author didn't update in a long long time. This is the best book that I've read in webnovel so far and I feel that the story is unique and interesting. Pls update pls update pls update plus update pls update pls update pls update please update please update
Tiết lộ Spoiler I'm enjoying this story so much that I'm yearning for more updates. Pls when will this update happen? Like the characters, can't wait for the story to continue.
You all sleepy hoes who are sleeping on this story better wake up give some love.😂😂😂coz love yourself and love this story.Eye- .blah blah blah.ok so this story is really good i don't know why it didn't get much recognition so i will work hard to spread this lovely slowly so author please spread your wings to flyyyyyy
Ahhhh i'm in love.oh my my my oh myy my.ok so this story is really good.you describe all the emotions pretty well and plot is really good not like all those 😂😂white lotus,betray by best friend or half sister or companion and blah blah blah.this story deserves all the fame.FAME.😍
Very delightful read. Vivian is no slouch, and neither is Samuel. Their story is an interesting one and starts out with an argument. From lost shoes, to unusual business proposal, this has all the tropes of what can be found in Harlequin, but on a more interesting level. This has a few twists thrown in that I like over what is typically formulaic and would normally put me to sleep, which this one didn't. I'm looking forward to the next installment.
I like it so far.... Let me read more so i can really say what its all.about☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺ i had much time today to read and relax... hoping I could be more interested to read this novel since the picture of the girl looks pretty............. 💞😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊💕💕💕💕💕💕😊😊😊😊💕💕💕
Great way of fleshing out the background story while keeping the plot moving. Can't wait to see what happens next. Gripping and intriguing. The storyline flows smoothly from one event to the next
I can't stop reading even if I want to... Please give us more chapters... More chapters... More chapters... More chapters... More chapters... More chapters... More chapters...
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Update more chapters please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
I like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 I like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
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So far so good! Im really enjoying it. Loving the Gold Coast/Brisbane backdrop, and the spunky female with the button pushing male 😂😂😂. Excited for more 😍
Update more chapters please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
Nice story author, sounds interesting 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍😍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Here I'm again... If you know me or have read any of my stories then you'd discover how much I love writing and how much I try to please my audience, so please give me your votes and search for JoannaAngel05 in the search bar and see my other stories. Please please please vote and vote.. I'm a lover of Short stories and no much antagonist stories so please give my stories a try and kindly leave a review... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Update more chapters update more chapters please please 🙏🙏