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Hey you have come up with an awesome plot.......i really lilke the theme you chose its quite amazing.....a dragon princess with a human boy.... loving your work keep going :)
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こんばんは!I love this romantic love story! There must be something going to happen between Roki and Loly! I want to know what will happen next! It's a nice novel 4 me!
I think this novel can be a good novel for young people, especially people who's first language is not English! The words and grammars in the novel is very Easy! It is helpful for them to learn English!
This novel is the first original English novel I read. The author is a Chinese, and his firse language is not English, I think he has done a good job!
Please don't let the bad Big Dark Shark hurt the little dragon princess! Please! I hope the Big dark shark will let Loly go! or someone help Loly!
This is the first novel I read, I like it. Although every chapter of this novel is very short, It doesn't matter!I will follow this author! Dragon princess with a ordinary fishing boy!nice!
Roki, a fishing boy in the little fishing village. Loly, the dragon princess in the eastern sea! guess what will happen? haha,I am not going to tell you!
It's must be a Chinese author! Because it is about the story of Eastern sea. Loly is a nice name! The dragon princess is hurt badly,hope she is ok!
People in the fishing village thought that the Dragon Princess--Loly was a fish, so they shot her, and Loly got hurt badly! Roki release Loly to the sea. I think they will be friends in the future!
A dragon princess with a fishing boy!haha, this story is gonna popular soon! I think Loly and Roki will have a romantic story, and maybe they will have a happy ending.
This is a nice story. It is about a fishing boy and the dragon princess! I think they aee not able to get together, because the boy's village is making a living by sea creatures, while dragon princess Loly is the princess of sea creatures...ahh, what will happen next?
Tiết lộ Spoiler
This is a story about the fishing boy and the dragon princess,I want to know what will happen next.Loly is in danger. What will the dark shark do to her?I am waiting for the new chapter!
I really like the novel.I hope it will get popular soon!Because it is a good story of the boy and the dragon princess Loly.I really like the novel.I hope it will get popular soon!Because it is a good story of the boy and the dragon princess Loly.
I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!
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The dragon princess --Loly is the little daughter of the Dragon king of eastern sea.Roki is a boy live in a fishing village. And Roki let Loly go. Roki is thinking about what he saw often. " A girl who has deer - like horns, a tail with fish scales, and eagle - like claws."
This the 1st novel I have read . every chapter is not so long .but every chapter is nice.dragon princess with the boy I like the thought .I love it
Hey you have come up with an awesome plot.......i really lilke the theme you chose its quite amazing.....a dragon princess with a human boy.... loving your work keep going :)
😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝😝
Tiết lộ Spoiler こんばんは!I love this romantic love story! There must be something going to happen between Roki and Loly! I want to know what will happen next! It's a nice novel 4 me!
I think this novel can be a good novel for young people, especially people who's first language is not English! The words and grammars in the novel is very Easy! It is helpful for them to learn English!
This novel is the first original English novel I read. The author is a Chinese, and his firse language is not English, I think he has done a good job!
Please don't let the bad Big Dark Shark hurt the little dragon princess! Please! I hope the Big dark shark will let Loly go! or someone help Loly!
This is the first novel I read, I like it. Although every chapter of this novel is very short, It doesn't matter!I will follow this author! Dragon princess with a ordinary fishing boy!nice!
Roki, a fishing boy in the little fishing village. Loly, the dragon princess in the eastern sea! guess what will happen? haha,I am not going to tell you!
It's must be a Chinese author! Because it is about the story of Eastern sea. Loly is a nice name! The dragon princess is hurt badly,hope she is ok!
People in the fishing village thought that the Dragon Princess--Loly was a fish, so they shot her, and Loly got hurt badly! Roki release Loly to the sea. I think they will be friends in the future!
A dragon princess with a fishing boy!haha, this story is gonna popular soon! I think Loly and Roki will have a romantic story, and maybe they will have a happy ending.
This is a nice story. It is about a fishing boy and the dragon princess! I think they aee not able to get together, because the boy's village is making a living by sea creatures, while dragon princess Loly is the princess of sea creatures...ahh, what will happen next?
Tiết lộ Spoiler This is a story about the fishing boy and the dragon princess,I want to know what will happen next.Loly is in danger. What will the dark shark do to her?I am waiting for the new chapter!
I really like the novel.I hope it will get popular soon!Because it is a good story of the boy and the dragon princess Loly.I really like the novel.I hope it will get popular soon!Because it is a good story of the boy and the dragon princess Loly.
I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!
I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!I hope this novel will get popular someday!
The dragon princess --Loly is the little daughter of the Dragon king of eastern sea.Roki is a boy live in a fishing village. And Roki let Loly go. Roki is thinking about what he saw often. " A girl who has deer - like horns, a tail with fish scales, and eagle - like claws."
This the 1st novel I have read . every chapter is not so long .but every chapter is nice.dragon princess with the boy I like the thought .I love it