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All I can say is that this story is so detailed and interesting. I can never get bored of this story at all. I'm always waiting for new chapters every single day.
the story in my perspective is fairly good, i've found it fairly refreshing to read especially when it has a mix of sci-fi and fantasy even though the majority is the sci-fi. I am glad that the protagonist is'nt completely overpowered but for some reason i cant help being frustrated on the choices the the mc makes, what makes it worst is how easy she gets used with only small benefits to herself. btw this is my first review, i have created an account just so i can write how interesting the story is, i recommend reading this. still a great story overall also take my review with a grain of salt because i am not well experienced with this!
Saya telah membaca sampai bab 60 dan novel ini penuh dengan rintangan untuk Mc. Dan saya tidak pernah melihat tanda tanda Mc memiliki masa depan cerah.(dari sudut pandangku) Dan hidup sebagai Mc di novel ini jauh lebih buruk dari kematian itu sendiri. Dan yang terpenting, tidak ada motif untuk mendukung Mc tetap hidup menderita dan tanpa tujuan. Apalagi alasan Mc mempertaruhkan nyawanya untuk menggunakan sihir teleportation adalah dia tidak ingin menderita dijadikan budak oleh hero pisikopat. Intinya adalah pilihan yang dibuat Mc adalah mati atau kemungkinan kecil untuk hidup disuatu tempat. Tapi saat Mc ditangkap dan Mc sendiri sadar bahwa dia kemungkinan akan dijadikan budak oleh bangsawan, sangat aneh melihat Mc tetap memilih untuk hidup. Apalagi saat Mc sadar bahwa dia akan menjadi bahan eksperimen dan akan menderita lebih buruk dari kematian itu sendiri. Dan poin terahir adalah Mc hidup didunia moderen dimasa depan, itu sangat kreatif dan jarang ada novel menggunakan latar belakang seperti itu. Tapi apa yang di tulis dalam novel ini adalah sisi gelap dari era tersebut. Jadi tidak ada banyak kejutan menarik dalam novel ini, karena di novel dengan era manapun, novel dengan tema sisi gelap dunia akan terlihat mengerikan . Setidaknya novel dengan tema hero akan memiliki dua sisi cahaya dan kegelapan. Tapi novel ini adalah gambaran lengkap sisi kegelapan tanpa cahaya sedikitpun.(dari sudut pandangku)
This story has an interesting concept of instead of going back in time the mc goes forward in time where science is everything. Even though the mc does not actually time travel but instead travels to a different universe or world it makes it interesting seeing the concept of how the mc uses spells. Overall a good read for when you are bored. Give it a shot and read all the way through I think you will enjoy it.
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Okay i just stumble on this humble and patience Novel. Even i didn't still reading it. Promise you man my vote will be yours, because of your patience even your novel is not popular. I adore you for writing this until now. I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you
If child abuse gets you hard, pretend it is a 5star review! If child abuse doesn't get you excited, then steer far away from it. One could argue that it is just the start, later it will be different... But if good content was a tasty cake, would you swim through a pool of excrement to get a poo covered slice? The first six and a part chapter is the pool that is ahead of you if you want to find out if there is a cake.
love the story so far cant wait to see where it goes no need to read this part "I am the Bone of my Sword Steel is my Body and Fire is my Blood. I have created over a Thousand Blades, Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood Pain to create many Weapons Yet those Hands will never hold Anything. So, as I Pray-- Unlimited Blade Works"
I believe this is indeed the best thing that I have ever wrote. Clearly, there is nothing to refute this as history will show up to this moment in time. Ahem. I couldn't choose between Fantasy and Sci-Fi so I flipped a coin and here we are. This story will have dark themes and light themes. I promise it won't all be as sinister as the start...
Good. The main character is well done, really well done. All of the characters are absolutely great. The story develops quite nicely as well. Overall I really enjoyed the story so far.
All I can say is that this story is so detailed and interesting. I can never get bored of this story at all. I'm always waiting for new chapters every single day.
the story in my perspective is fairly good, i've found it fairly refreshing to read especially when it has a mix of sci-fi and fantasy even though the majority is the sci-fi. I am glad that the protagonist is'nt completely overpowered but for some reason i cant help being frustrated on the choices the the mc makes, what makes it worst is how easy she gets used with only small benefits to herself. btw this is my first review, i have created an account just so i can write how interesting the story is, i recommend reading this. still a great story overall also take my review with a grain of salt because i am not well experienced with this!
Saya telah membaca sampai bab 60 dan novel ini penuh dengan rintangan untuk Mc. Dan saya tidak pernah melihat tanda tanda Mc memiliki masa depan cerah.(dari sudut pandangku) Dan hidup sebagai Mc di novel ini jauh lebih buruk dari kematian itu sendiri. Dan yang terpenting, tidak ada motif untuk mendukung Mc tetap hidup menderita dan tanpa tujuan. Apalagi alasan Mc mempertaruhkan nyawanya untuk menggunakan sihir teleportation adalah dia tidak ingin menderita dijadikan budak oleh hero pisikopat. Intinya adalah pilihan yang dibuat Mc adalah mati atau kemungkinan kecil untuk hidup disuatu tempat. Tapi saat Mc ditangkap dan Mc sendiri sadar bahwa dia kemungkinan akan dijadikan budak oleh bangsawan, sangat aneh melihat Mc tetap memilih untuk hidup. Apalagi saat Mc sadar bahwa dia akan menjadi bahan eksperimen dan akan menderita lebih buruk dari kematian itu sendiri. Dan poin terahir adalah Mc hidup didunia moderen dimasa depan, itu sangat kreatif dan jarang ada novel menggunakan latar belakang seperti itu. Tapi apa yang di tulis dalam novel ini adalah sisi gelap dari era tersebut. Jadi tidak ada banyak kejutan menarik dalam novel ini, karena di novel dengan era manapun, novel dengan tema sisi gelap dunia akan terlihat mengerikan . Setidaknya novel dengan tema hero akan memiliki dua sisi cahaya dan kegelapan. Tapi novel ini adalah gambaran lengkap sisi kegelapan tanpa cahaya sedikitpun.(dari sudut pandangku)
This story has an interesting concept of instead of going back in time the mc goes forward in time where science is everything. Even though the mc does not actually time travel but instead travels to a different universe or world it makes it interesting seeing the concept of how the mc uses spells. Overall a good read for when you are bored. Give it a shot and read all the way through I think you will enjoy it.
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Okay i just stumble on this humble and patience Novel. Even i didn't still reading it. Promise you man my vote will be yours, because of your patience even your novel is not popular. I adore you for writing this until now. I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you I adore you
If child abuse gets you hard, pretend it is a 5star review! If child abuse doesn't get you excited, then steer far away from it. One could argue that it is just the start, later it will be different... But if good content was a tasty cake, would you swim through a pool of excrement to get a poo covered slice? The first six and a part chapter is the pool that is ahead of you if you want to find out if there is a cake.
love the story so far cant wait to see where it goes no need to read this part "I am the Bone of my Sword Steel is my Body and Fire is my Blood. I have created over a Thousand Blades, Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood Pain to create many Weapons Yet those Hands will never hold Anything. So, as I Pray-- Unlimited Blade Works"
I believe this is indeed the best thing that I have ever wrote. Clearly, there is nothing to refute this as history will show up to this moment in time. Ahem. I couldn't choose between Fantasy and Sci-Fi so I flipped a coin and here we are. This story will have dark themes and light themes. I promise it won't all be as sinister as the start...
Good. The main character is well done, really well done. All of the characters are absolutely great. The story develops quite nicely as well. Overall I really enjoyed the story so far.