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I have read this book in its entirety and I loved every moment of it. The MC is amazing, the side characters are amazing, and the world building Is amazing. There are so many bad*ss moments in this novel and it was exciting reading every single one of them. I think the ending could have been done better, as it was a little bit rushed (think of Legend of Supreme Soldiers’ ending), but overall, I really enjoyed this novel.
Didn't really like it. First of all, too many infodumps. Second, MC is boring. He's like MC from ISSTH if you took out all comedy. So far the novel feels like Author read few popular cultivation webnovels and decided to combine them. It's absolutely unoriginal. Sandbag arc feels like copy-paste of Titanium devil body(or w/e it was called) mecha/virtual world feels like ripoff from "it's not easy to be a man..." Cultivation system feels like he wanted to be inspired by gene cultivation novels but decided to abandon it halfway through. There are multiple copy-pastes to fill up chapter volume with repeated info. Would not recommend Reading 2/10.
The book is something new and i am very much looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. Specially the way MC gets his power is much Better than getting all heaven defing treasure or after getting a treasure MC instantly power ups.
With honesty. I've read only up to chapter 6. And this review will be based on my impression regarding the story's progress, the MC's character, the world background, the relevance of the content to the plot and the translation. Story wise, it's shaky. The author does not have propriety regarding how to develop a story with a good flow. He keeps on jumping here and there that it made me forget the name of the MC after reading a few chapters because he kept dumping information that should only be introduced a bit sooner but not later while neglecting relevant and important information that should be useful in shaping the concept of the novel which is, "What is a Mech in this novel". If we want to talk about an apple, I think we should first describe how it came to be, what composes it, and how does it taste like before talking about apple candy or an apple pie. The MC's character: He appears to be a resilient, smart, and strong individual while being easily annoyed and a bit negligent at the same time. The world background: Well written but gives off the "I've read this before" vibe. Content wise, it's jam-packed but lacks an essential ingredient. "The Mech/Mechs and its specifications, uses, kinds, types, size, etc.". It's irritating to read a mech novel, wherein there is too much info dump, but the mechs are still vaguely introduced. The translation: is pretty good. Being able to deliver especially translating sci-fi type novel is commendable. I will continue reading it, maybe. I'm a fan of this kind of novels but, I choose what I read. So far, it's not up to the level of "I want to continue to reading it" yet. (I'll be updating this review if I ever got the chance to do so)
Pretty decent I really want to see more of this story. A solid start to a hopefully complete story. Good work author I hope you continue to bring us great books
I found this novel enjoyable with believable protagonists and antagonists. I feel that too many authors rely on lining up face slapping like dominos... while not empty of that trope, it wasn’t over the top and everything was pleasant to read.
I truly consider this a good thing to read it has interesting details in it that makes it so good and I Like it but there are a little bit a cons but overall it’s a good book I do recommend
It's good enough till now. Kaaj is LLC of so if do is do is do is go is so is do is so is do is do is do is do is do her usual daisy Japan Japan sadist galaxy jay half year of Ka is Ka Ka so
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I was not a big mech fan. But, after reading this book I-am a convert. The book is well written and the author has done a great job with the back story and plot. The MC is very likable. With author’s writing style, make you not want to stop because you want to fine what happens next. Very good read. Hope to see more.
I am looking forward to reading more of this novel. I enjoy the story very much.
I like this for its simplicity and complexities integrated in a same scene. Simplicity of the character is awesome, and the complexities of the world and culture are huge Great work !!!
Let's see, the story can be considered good if not for the fact that it is a terrible version of, Legend of the Supreme Soldier. That one have an AI with two personalities, this one has it too. That one has a young man with a special bloodline, this one has it too. That one has mechs and VR this one has it too. Basically it is the same, except that that one is way better in each and every side. Please for anyone who didn't read the other one, go read it, its already complete and it is a great novel, way better than this half assed version
The story starts at a good pace not to slow but not so fast that it is hard to follow. The MC is very likable. I think Black is very funny. I have high hope that this will be a great story. This book has a good start. I cant wait for more!
Really enjoyed this one as there hasn’t been many sci fi that a truly enjoy, more into the other genres but this one I really hope gets translated. Highly recommend
This novel is so interesting so far! I quite like mecha novels and school life/academy novels and it seems like it’s heading in both directions. Hoping it catches more attention and gets released!! :)
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In all honesty, its a great concept and I did like the main character. However, when it comes to execution, it really isn't that great. Like let's be honest here, there have been a bunch of dialogues with no sorta action to emphasize its word. The author was kinda expecting you to figure out how they act during those dialogues moments. Secondly, the character design wasn't really that marvelous. It has the basic--I'll give them that. However, that just it. There isn't anything interesting about their personality since the author hasn't flesh it out through any kind of action. Plus, I also notice some inconsistent with black egg because first off, they haven't met for so long that mc has enough influence on it. Maybe its personal opinion, idk. The third is the side character seems to be more of a plot device and I do think it also has something to do with the execution of the story. For story development, as of right now I don't know. For now, I'll give it a 4 star. Overall, everything just seems too simple in execution, characters, and even with word choice for the action.
Waste of time. Starts off quite decently, but it soon devolves into the mess that most CNs are. A parade of arrogant young masters trying to rape doe eyed young maidens, and the only one who stands in their way is the MC. Despite the fact that the maidens have greater backing than the young masters, let alone the MC. Also, the MC has way too many cheats. His "Mysterious Family Background" that gives him an OP bloodline AND an OP mecha. He coincidentally becomes the master of an AI(from another universe) that can hack into any network, AND gains a "Mysterious Master" (Also from another universe)
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MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
How is this so highly rated? It's a complete rip off of Legend of the Supreme Soldier, literally plot point by plot point. Actually, I don't know which one came out first, so I guess that once could be a complete rip off of this one. Both are throughly mediocre either way.
Awesome book i loved reading it and the story was a bit light but still liked it EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love mecha novels but this novel is bit weird. 1. the writer tries to introduce different character background and connect them further in the story but its done in an annoying way. 2. Alot of vague and unexplained information popup around chapter 4-5 that makes going through the story harder. 3. The things about mecha training and tournament started without any prior mention. 4. There is no mention that mc knows about mecha tournament and why he needs optical computer.
this is never gunna get updated again hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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I have read this book in its entirety and I loved every moment of it. The MC is amazing, the side characters are amazing, and the world building Is amazing. There are so many bad*ss moments in this novel and it was exciting reading every single one of them. I think the ending could have been done better, as it was a little bit rushed (think of Legend of Supreme Soldiers’ ending), but overall, I really enjoyed this novel.
Didn't really like it. First of all, too many infodumps. Second, MC is boring. He's like MC from ISSTH if you took out all comedy. So far the novel feels like Author read few popular cultivation webnovels and decided to combine them. It's absolutely unoriginal. Sandbag arc feels like copy-paste of Titanium devil body(or w/e it was called) mecha/virtual world feels like ripoff from "it's not easy to be a man..." Cultivation system feels like he wanted to be inspired by gene cultivation novels but decided to abandon it halfway through. There are multiple copy-pastes to fill up chapter volume with repeated info. Would not recommend Reading 2/10.
The book is something new and i am very much looking forward to seeing how the story progresses. Specially the way MC gets his power is much Better than getting all heaven defing treasure or after getting a treasure MC instantly power ups.
With honesty. I've read only up to chapter 6. And this review will be based on my impression regarding the story's progress, the MC's character, the world background, the relevance of the content to the plot and the translation. Story wise, it's shaky. The author does not have propriety regarding how to develop a story with a good flow. He keeps on jumping here and there that it made me forget the name of the MC after reading a few chapters because he kept dumping information that should only be introduced a bit sooner but not later while neglecting relevant and important information that should be useful in shaping the concept of the novel which is, "What is a Mech in this novel". If we want to talk about an apple, I think we should first describe how it came to be, what composes it, and how does it taste like before talking about apple candy or an apple pie. The MC's character: He appears to be a resilient, smart, and strong individual while being easily annoyed and a bit negligent at the same time. The world background: Well written but gives off the "I've read this before" vibe. Content wise, it's jam-packed but lacks an essential ingredient. "The Mech/Mechs and its specifications, uses, kinds, types, size, etc.". It's irritating to read a mech novel, wherein there is too much info dump, but the mechs are still vaguely introduced. The translation: is pretty good. Being able to deliver especially translating sci-fi type novel is commendable. I will continue reading it, maybe. I'm a fan of this kind of novels but, I choose what I read. So far, it's not up to the level of "I want to continue to reading it" yet. (I'll be updating this review if I ever got the chance to do so)
Pretty decent I really want to see more of this story. A solid start to a hopefully complete story. Good work author I hope you continue to bring us great books
I found this novel enjoyable with believable protagonists and antagonists. I feel that too many authors rely on lining up face slapping like dominos... while not empty of that trope, it wasn’t over the top and everything was pleasant to read.
I truly consider this a good thing to read it has interesting details in it that makes it so good and I Like it but there are a little bit a cons but overall it’s a good book I do recommend
It's good enough till now. Kaaj is LLC of so if do is do is do is go is so is do is so is do is do is do is do is do her usual daisy Japan Japan sadist galaxy jay half year of Ka is Ka Ka so
Ysuhrhtjyjtdjddryydjtsjstnfhsrfhsjtfshrharharhrasrfhzhxfjsff mcgjdthfhfhrhsfhrshfsjffxxjf g ggi gugu. G gugcicitdyjtjtdjgdjdtntdhsrbrsbtsdtntntentsntssnsfsngnfssbfsngndgngngdngdnnngdntdntdhtwbtdavdadgeqfsafeasgwbtdbfdhtehtehtebtshfsbtebtwhtsbtwntehtentehtehtee
I was not a big mech fan. But, after reading this book I-am a convert. The book is well written and the author has done a great job with the back story and plot. The MC is very likable. With author’s writing style, make you not want to stop because you want to fine what happens next. Very good read. Hope to see more.
I am looking forward to reading more of this novel. I enjoy the story very much.
I like this for its simplicity and complexities integrated in a same scene. Simplicity of the character is awesome, and the complexities of the world and culture are huge Great work !!!
Let's see, the story can be considered good if not for the fact that it is a terrible version of, Legend of the Supreme Soldier. That one have an AI with two personalities, this one has it too. That one has a young man with a special bloodline, this one has it too. That one has mechs and VR this one has it too. Basically it is the same, except that that one is way better in each and every side. Please for anyone who didn't read the other one, go read it, its already complete and it is a great novel, way better than this half assed version
The story starts at a good pace not to slow but not so fast that it is hard to follow. The MC is very likable. I think Black is very funny. I have high hope that this will be a great story. This book has a good start. I cant wait for more!
Really enjoyed this one as there hasn’t been many sci fi that a truly enjoy, more into the other genres but this one I really hope gets translated. Highly recommend
This novel is so interesting so far! I quite like mecha novels and school life/academy novels and it seems like it’s heading in both directions. Hoping it catches more attention and gets released!! :)
...................................................................................................... ..... .Z. S s.D.D..E.Ddjes.Dm....D.D.Dd..D.C.E.D.D.R.F.C.E.D.Jcejend.Ejekf.Fiend.D..D.D.D........D.D.D.C.F.F..S.F.F.C.F.T.Y..S.Smr.F.X..S.R.F.S.R.T.Fme..Ckrmf.Rkfkdiemrkd
In all honesty, its a great concept and I did like the main character. However, when it comes to execution, it really isn't that great. Like let's be honest here, there have been a bunch of dialogues with no sorta action to emphasize its word. The author was kinda expecting you to figure out how they act during those dialogues moments. Secondly, the character design wasn't really that marvelous. It has the basic--I'll give them that. However, that just it. There isn't anything interesting about their personality since the author hasn't flesh it out through any kind of action. Plus, I also notice some inconsistent with black egg because first off, they haven't met for so long that mc has enough influence on it. Maybe its personal opinion, idk. The third is the side character seems to be more of a plot device and I do think it also has something to do with the execution of the story. For story development, as of right now I don't know. For now, I'll give it a 4 star. Overall, everything just seems too simple in execution, characters, and even with word choice for the action.
Waste of time. Starts off quite decently, but it soon devolves into the mess that most CNs are. A parade of arrogant young masters trying to rape doe eyed young maidens, and the only one who stands in their way is the MC. Despite the fact that the maidens have greater backing than the young masters, let alone the MC. Also, the MC has way too many cheats. His "Mysterious Family Background" that gives him an OP bloodline AND an OP mecha. He coincidentally becomes the master of an AI(from another universe) that can hack into any network, AND gains a "Mysterious Master" (Also from another universe)
Tiết lộ Spoiler MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!! MORE CHAPTERS!!!!
How is this so highly rated? It's a complete rip off of Legend of the Supreme Soldier, literally plot point by plot point. Actually, I don't know which one came out first, so I guess that once could be a complete rip off of this one. Both are throughly mediocre either way.
Awesome book i loved reading it and the story was a bit light but still liked it EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
I love mecha novels but this novel is bit weird. 1. the writer tries to introduce different character background and connect them further in the story but its done in an annoying way. 2. Alot of vague and unexplained information popup around chapter 4-5 that makes going through the story harder. 3. The things about mecha training and tournament started without any prior mention. 4. There is no mention that mc knows about mecha tournament and why he needs optical computer.
this is never gunna get updated again hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh