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Honestly enjoyed it quite a lot. Haven’t read the original story this fanfic is based on in a long time and even then I quickly grew annoyed and stopped reading it at some point. However I found myself pretty entertained by the base building elements pretty quickly in this story. The romance also is developing nicely despite their struggles to adapt to their new surroundings. There’s not too many chapters and updates are slow coming but the quality of those chapters are pretty top notch. Only small typos at most. Good character development later on and the girls all seem to have unique personalities rather than carboard cut outs of damsels in distress. So far there are three girls who are interested in him, none of those girls are baggage as they are determined not to be ‘useless’ to him. Overall a solid 8/10 if not higher, with it only being hindered by the lack of persistent updates and low quantity of chapters. Was honestly sad to get to the end. Hope to see more in the future. + world building + romance (harem) + base building + character development - low amount of chapters - slow updates
this fanfiction is very good ...................................................................................................................................................................................
I liked the pace of the main character and the different story line. Keep up the good work on your novel. If there was anything negative to say it would be not enough updates on the chapters.
I really like your editing. you very much made this your own and branched out. while thw places are the same I love the lean in 5o the tech and his creativity. much more exciting than the original static character. the same goes foe the girls, they actually act differently and have goals, I love it.
Thief. This ain't your novel you scum plagiarist. You thought nobody would know that you stole this right. Well surprise mother fcker big daddy knows this ain't your novel. Lol, did you really think that saying you took inspiration from My MCV in doomsday would throw me off. Well guess what I know where you got this btch boy. You stole this from zongheng ha ha ha. I already filed a complaint and this will soon be removed. I'm also gona check all ur other novels to see if they are not stolen too. Boom Pussio, there's a new Sheriff in town.
I read more then 30 chapters of this novel and to be honest...the original author was not so bright..this version writer is thick as a log. the author mentioned he didn't like the mc and the way he treated girls in the original version. to be honest this version's mc does the same.. nothing changed there atleast until the 24 chapter where I dropped this. the storyline is more boring then the oh version. this novel should be called "the doomsday vehicle of the abstinence and mentally challenged hero"
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this book is better than the original, it's very pleasant to read and the mc is smart enough too by realistic. keep up the good work, I enjoy the story
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Nice novel but update rate is not what I expect it should be . . Nice novel but update rate is not what I expect it should be . . Nice novel but update rate is not what I expect it should be . .
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Great so far.... But updates takes too long. Great so far.... But updates takes too long. Great so far.... But updates takes too long. Great so far.... But updates takes too long.
It's an alright story however I have some problems with it that I can't stand tbh First, I get its a harem novel but will it kill someone to acc make them useful instead of just sitting around while the mc does everything ? It's like he will just go around making a little collection... Also, what is with everyone's fcking hero bs. If you were trying to survive in that world why would you enter the nest of hundreds of mutant beasts for a girl you met once. WHILE YOU HAVE YOUR OWN SISTER TO LOOK FOR. I don't mind him helping people LATER ON when he acc has his priorities straight and has the skills to back It up. Say he is good with weapons, hand to hand etc Literally the first thing he says to the girl is that they can only stay for a day as to not get overrun and that he still has to get his sister so he cannot be stuck/die there. Next couple of chaps ? Heads straight into the fcking nest... Really want to read a proper story of what someone would do, make it realistic ffs (I get he has a superpower but you know what I mean) Finally, it's just my preference but why tf is the girl calling him brother etc ? Is it their culture ? cause from where I am calling a girl who you have an interest for sister and her calling you brother is weird af. Like, imagine your gf calling you brother...
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A must read if you liked the novel and want that the girls fall for the main character and the main character to not remain passive. So please read.
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Honestly enjoyed it quite a lot. Haven’t read the original story this fanfic is based on in a long time and even then I quickly grew annoyed and stopped reading it at some point. However I found myself pretty entertained by the base building elements pretty quickly in this story. The romance also is developing nicely despite their struggles to adapt to their new surroundings. There’s not too many chapters and updates are slow coming but the quality of those chapters are pretty top notch. Only small typos at most. Good character development later on and the girls all seem to have unique personalities rather than carboard cut outs of damsels in distress. So far there are three girls who are interested in him, none of those girls are baggage as they are determined not to be ‘useless’ to him. Overall a solid 8/10 if not higher, with it only being hindered by the lack of persistent updates and low quantity of chapters. Was honestly sad to get to the end. Hope to see more in the future. + world building + romance (harem) + base building + character development - low amount of chapters - slow updates
this fanfiction is very good ...................................................................................................................................................................................
I liked the pace of the main character and the different story line. Keep up the good work on your novel. If there was anything negative to say it would be not enough updates on the chapters.
I really like your editing. you very much made this your own and branched out. while thw places are the same I love the lean in 5o the tech and his creativity. much more exciting than the original static character. the same goes foe the girls, they actually act differently and have goals, I love it.
Thief. This ain't your novel you scum plagiarist. You thought nobody would know that you stole this right. Well surprise mother fcker big daddy knows this ain't your novel. Lol, did you really think that saying you took inspiration from My MCV in doomsday would throw me off. Well guess what I know where you got this btch boy. You stole this from zongheng ha ha ha. I already filed a complaint and this will soon be removed. I'm also gona check all ur other novels to see if they are not stolen too. Boom Pussio, there's a new Sheriff in town.
I read more then 30 chapters of this novel and to be honest...the original author was not so bright..this version writer is thick as a log. the author mentioned he didn't like the mc and the way he treated girls in the original version. to be honest this version's mc does the same.. nothing changed there atleast until the 24 chapter where I dropped this. the storyline is more boring then the oh version. this novel should be called "the doomsday vehicle of the abstinence and mentally challenged hero"
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this book is better than the original, it's very pleasant to read and the mc is smart enough too by realistic. keep up the good work, I enjoy the story
is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem? is this a huge harem?
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Nice novel but update rate is not what I expect it should be . . Nice novel but update rate is not what I expect it should be . . Nice novel but update rate is not what I expect it should be . .
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Everything is top notch... Except the updating rate.. 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😙😙😙☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺😝😝☺☺☺☺
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Great so far.... But updates takes too long. Great so far.... But updates takes too long. Great so far.... But updates takes too long. Great so far.... But updates takes too long.
It's an alright story however I have some problems with it that I can't stand tbh First, I get its a harem novel but will it kill someone to acc make them useful instead of just sitting around while the mc does everything ? It's like he will just go around making a little collection... Also, what is with everyone's fcking hero bs. If you were trying to survive in that world why would you enter the nest of hundreds of mutant beasts for a girl you met once. WHILE YOU HAVE YOUR OWN SISTER TO LOOK FOR. I don't mind him helping people LATER ON when he acc has his priorities straight and has the skills to back It up. Say he is good with weapons, hand to hand etc Literally the first thing he says to the girl is that they can only stay for a day as to not get overrun and that he still has to get his sister so he cannot be stuck/die there. Next couple of chaps ? Heads straight into the fcking nest... Really want to read a proper story of what someone would do, make it realistic ffs (I get he has a superpower but you know what I mean) Finally, it's just my preference but why tf is the girl calling him brother etc ? Is it their culture ? cause from where I am calling a girl who you have an interest for sister and her calling you brother is weird af. Like, imagine your gf calling you brother...
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A must read if you liked the novel and want that the girls fall for the main character and the main character to not remain passive. So please read.
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