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not a fan of love but this one has made a different picture. The story has a good narrating about the mc's problems plus, it has a excellent story line. A slice of life written in a smooth style, easy for us to flow on without any trouble. good story, keep it up author
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I am giving this novel 5 star because I feel the author is doing a great job. I am looking forward to reading more of the chapters coming up 👍👍
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Never thought this story would affect so much to me.... Waiting for every next chapter 💜...heartbeats faster over every scenario.... Honestly man... Love it.... All the best buddy
I really like this so far and am enjoying reading this novel a lot. The story so far is really good. The only problem I see y ya that I want to read more... But I can't add I've cautions with the latest release. I really hope to see an increase in the updates, I'll forever be thanking you! Thank you for this lovely novel
its good to read, i love the phasing of each event, the character of the story is really exciting, i want to read more, i wish more chapter please
Plot needs more push to keep going. Character development is good. Need to introduce more twists and turns. Translation quality needs some workout.
Character development needs enhancement. Twists and turns seem to be popping up making it intriguing. Story is good. Looking forward to the story of protagonist
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The storyline is good, so far. I just find the female lead too shy... it’s getting to be too much. I hope Lisa gets to be at ease with Jun so the shyness isn’t too overacting. To the author, you write good...I like your story...it is fast paced...looking forward to read more...thanks!
I love how slow their relationship is progressing. Lisa is awkward and shy and Jun is overconfident and fun. They make it fun to read their interactions.
I was searching for a good novel and then found it yesterday.... didn't hope this will be a great story....love the way this story is going....i appreciate your work author and thanks for a good novel💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
Not gonna sugar coat but it is a slow start. Now for people like me who love slow starts it's a gem among the many straws of hay that you find on this site. It's different. There is still a sense of the upper crust but at the same time so down to earth it's nut a dread. Definitely recommend as a great read when you want to snuggle up with a blanket. Which I have been doing! Writing: almost 100% fantastic. Honestly it's 99.99% there do let's round it up to 5 stars. Why because it doesn't take away from the story. If someone make one mistake every 5 chapters they are already above the rest. This is a super human ability plus you get a feel of how everyone is thinking, acting and feeling that you dive right in. That my friends is quality writing. Stability: we all got lives. We upload when we can, so if your uploading at your own pace it's because you are making sure you are delivering quality! So good job for keeping up the story😀 Characters: There is a variety! You got a FL that is flaw but perfect in her own way. A ML who is hiding his flaws and pretends to be perfect. A dynamic were the ML definitely falls in love first and a FL that is absolutely precious. With an air of mystery for both characters you yell at each one to open up to one another so you have that Awww satisfaction. Plus a cat! I love cats (I lie I love all animals) so you get you Nya moments too. World: it's still building up but considering the FL's dilemma that's everything. So it's practically perfect to see the world through someone else's eyes who is living a life not all of us have experienced. Overall I thinks it's great. Like I said a good snuggle up read. I have definitely fallen asleep with my phone in my hands as I read but mind you I would be up until 1 in the morning. So not the novels fault that I've fallen asleep I blame the novel for being so damn cute, funny, mysterious and G*d damn wonderful cause I ain't ready to stop yet. 😀
It may be important to great thinkers to examine the world, to explain and despise it. But I think it is only important to love the world, not to despise it, not for us to hate each other, but to be able to regard the world and ourselves and all beings with love, admiration and respect.
The story was quite interesting... I like the story plot. The author was doing good job... Now I can add this into my read list. Good work all the best
The story as the name implies is truly sweet.Though the author does seem to hint that there is a darker past haunting both the Fl and Ml. Overall I find the story suprisingly cute.
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So far, I quite like the story and the interactions of the characters. As I was reading, I had this epiphany. "This reminds me of a movie. Hm? I wonder what it is? " while I thought hard to remember the title. I kept on reading until it all clicked in my brain and I laughed like a lunatic after realizing something. "Inception! That's it!" and I begun to imagine a scenario where you the 'author' yourself was anxious because you hadn't written any new chapters while your character, 'Lisa', was also anxious too because she hadn't written anything and worried that she'll get scolded by the editor in chief. But on a serious note, good work and keep on writing!
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Good read. I like the phasing of the story, not rushed keeping the characters alive. Also thanks for writing a female lead story. I've been recently hooked reading female lead stories.. :) Hope to read more..
This is a wonderful romance story with a strong female lead(as in no knight in shining armor rescuing a totally defenseless and sometimes useless person which is A.K.A. FL), with its pace neither too fast nor slow. It gives subtle hints about individual character's past which gives readers a fun time trying to guess what could have happened to have cause this. The storyline is line is quite relatable, the interaction between characters are well written. Overall it is a nice story which you would love to snuggle yourself to sleep with.
I'm surprised the author took a turn from harem to romance geared towards FL. Great title ^ no brown nosing ^ please continue to update, hopefully it will progress to a heart wrenching powerful love story which is a favorite of mine.
Loving the interactions between the characters. The FL is a writer... so romantic fellow writers, u will relate easily. but I am not as lucky as the FL to meet the ML in such a way :) I am looking forward to the romance ^^
I'm liking the story so far. The story seems personal. The F.L is strong, which appeals to me because I don't like reading about weak main characters. I'm hoping to see some personality on the F.L. So far, it's going good. Some minor editing here and there can be looked into in the future. Good luck, Author.
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I have been a fan of Lyner Parel and his work and Adopted Soldier. This story is refreshing and very promising. There is a lot to look forward to. Looking forward to the great story that I know this will be
I have read some of the author's other work and am thoroughly looking forward to this one. I can't wait to see how much he improves his writing skills throughout the story.
8 chaps in.. i came expecting a story reflecting modern issues such as eating disorders. thought i didn't see much of that probably because im only a few chaps in. anyways, the story is quite rich so far, im expecting something real wholesome :) ill collect this to read more later <3 The novel starts off with the old classic but good "left something behind" which brings our characters togthers. real good considering this is your first romance novel. i approve.
not a fan of love but this one has made a different picture. The story has a good narrating about the mc's problems plus, it has a excellent story line. A slice of life written in a smooth style, easy for us to flow on without any trouble. good story, keep it up author
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I am giving this novel 5 star because I feel the author is doing a great job. I am looking forward to reading more of the chapters coming up 👍👍
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Never thought this story would affect so much to me.... Waiting for every next chapter 💜...heartbeats faster over every scenario.... Honestly man... Love it.... All the best buddy
I really like this so far and am enjoying reading this novel a lot. The story so far is really good. The only problem I see y ya that I want to read more... But I can't add I've cautions with the latest release. I really hope to see an increase in the updates, I'll forever be thanking you! Thank you for this lovely novel
its good to read, i love the phasing of each event, the character of the story is really exciting, i want to read more, i wish more chapter please
Plot needs more push to keep going. Character development is good. Need to introduce more twists and turns. Translation quality needs some workout.
Character development needs enhancement. Twists and turns seem to be popping up making it intriguing. Story is good. Looking forward to the story of protagonist
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The storyline is good, so far. I just find the female lead too shy... it’s getting to be too much. I hope Lisa gets to be at ease with Jun so the shyness isn’t too overacting. To the author, you write good...I like your story...it is fast paced...looking forward to read more...thanks!
I love how slow their relationship is progressing. Lisa is awkward and shy and Jun is overconfident and fun. They make it fun to read their interactions.
I was searching for a good novel and then found it yesterday.... didn't hope this will be a great story....love the way this story is going....i appreciate your work author and thanks for a good novel💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓
Not gonna sugar coat but it is a slow start. Now for people like me who love slow starts it's a gem among the many straws of hay that you find on this site. It's different. There is still a sense of the upper crust but at the same time so down to earth it's nut a dread. Definitely recommend as a great read when you want to snuggle up with a blanket. Which I have been doing! Writing: almost 100% fantastic. Honestly it's 99.99% there do let's round it up to 5 stars. Why because it doesn't take away from the story. If someone make one mistake every 5 chapters they are already above the rest. This is a super human ability plus you get a feel of how everyone is thinking, acting and feeling that you dive right in. That my friends is quality writing. Stability: we all got lives. We upload when we can, so if your uploading at your own pace it's because you are making sure you are delivering quality! So good job for keeping up the story😀 Characters: There is a variety! You got a FL that is flaw but perfect in her own way. A ML who is hiding his flaws and pretends to be perfect. A dynamic were the ML definitely falls in love first and a FL that is absolutely precious. With an air of mystery for both characters you yell at each one to open up to one another so you have that Awww satisfaction. Plus a cat! I love cats (I lie I love all animals) so you get you Nya moments too. World: it's still building up but considering the FL's dilemma that's everything. So it's practically perfect to see the world through someone else's eyes who is living a life not all of us have experienced. Overall I thinks it's great. Like I said a good snuggle up read. I have definitely fallen asleep with my phone in my hands as I read but mind you I would be up until 1 in the morning. So not the novels fault that I've fallen asleep I blame the novel for being so damn cute, funny, mysterious and G*d damn wonderful cause I ain't ready to stop yet. 😀
It may be important to great thinkers to examine the world, to explain and despise it. But I think it is only important to love the world, not to despise it, not for us to hate each other, but to be able to regard the world and ourselves and all beings with love, admiration and respect.
The story was quite interesting... I like the story plot. The author was doing good job... Now I can add this into my read list. Good work all the best
The story as the name implies is truly sweet.Though the author does seem to hint that there is a darker past haunting both the Fl and Ml. Overall I find the story suprisingly cute.
Tiết lộ Spoiler So far, I quite like the story and the interactions of the characters. As I was reading, I had this epiphany. "This reminds me of a movie. Hm? I wonder what it is? " while I thought hard to remember the title. I kept on reading until it all clicked in my brain and I laughed like a lunatic after realizing something. "Inception! That's it!" and I begun to imagine a scenario where you the 'author' yourself was anxious because you hadn't written any new chapters while your character, 'Lisa', was also anxious too because she hadn't written anything and worried that she'll get scolded by the editor in chief. But on a serious note, good work and keep on writing!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Good read. I like the phasing of the story, not rushed keeping the characters alive. Also thanks for writing a female lead story. I've been recently hooked reading female lead stories.. :) Hope to read more..
This is a wonderful romance story with a strong female lead(as in no knight in shining armor rescuing a totally defenseless and sometimes useless person which is A.K.A. FL), with its pace neither too fast nor slow. It gives subtle hints about individual character's past which gives readers a fun time trying to guess what could have happened to have cause this. The storyline is line is quite relatable, the interaction between characters are well written. Overall it is a nice story which you would love to snuggle yourself to sleep with.
I'm surprised the author took a turn from harem to romance geared towards FL. Great title ^ no brown nosing ^ please continue to update, hopefully it will progress to a heart wrenching powerful love story which is a favorite of mine.
Loving the interactions between the characters. The FL is a writer... so romantic fellow writers, u will relate easily. but I am not as lucky as the FL to meet the ML in such a way :) I am looking forward to the romance ^^
I'm liking the story so far. The story seems personal. The F.L is strong, which appeals to me because I don't like reading about weak main characters. I'm hoping to see some personality on the F.L. So far, it's going good. Some minor editing here and there can be looked into in the future. Good luck, Author.
Tiết lộ Spoiler I have been a fan of Lyner Parel and his work and Adopted Soldier. This story is refreshing and very promising. There is a lot to look forward to. Looking forward to the great story that I know this will be
I have read some of the author's other work and am thoroughly looking forward to this one. I can't wait to see how much he improves his writing skills throughout the story.
8 chaps in.. i came expecting a story reflecting modern issues such as eating disorders. thought i didn't see much of that probably because im only a few chaps in. anyways, the story is quite rich so far, im expecting something real wholesome :) ill collect this to read more later <3 The novel starts off with the old classic but good "left something behind" which brings our characters togthers. real good considering this is your first romance novel. i approve.