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The return of a spoiled villainess

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4.8 (18 số lượng người đọc)

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She was beautiful but spoiled little Countess. With perfect spiraled blond hair, pouty lips and big blue eyes. The flutter of her lashes could get her anything. But something happened, and she disappeared for six years. Now she is back, but she is not a pretty princess anymore. She is a cold warrior a mercenary. Her heart is a stone now. What to do? The crust over it started to crack. Why is it beating like this when she looks at him?!
He is dark and menacing. He is a Head of Black Castle. He isn't called a Royal Butcher or a Black Judge for nothing. He saw a lot of blood and drown even more. And he can see other people emotions. But looking at her he can't see anything. Wait a minute! What with this scarlet cloud around her when she looks his way?! And why the hell he starting to glow pink too?!

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SpeedProg

Once you get over the first 2-3 chapters the story begins to take off, and it is dragging you into a breath taking world. One of the best story's on here from those I read so far.

5yr
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eliza01rune

Its a great story i just want author to have hope in this one i am sure just like you last one this one will also be praised keep the hope high and continue it .... please please please

5yr
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UniqueTee

Such a good story . Good job author. Love how the characters were introduced on by one..on how everything connected.. No lengthy scene. Awesome ! Keep up the great work ! Hope to know more on what will happen to dear Cali ! For now.. i ship C&D !

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5yr
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Radek
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The world is living. Characters got their own story that they survived. Once broken and in need of fix like a broken swords in forge, the main protagonist and her squadmates are being reforged. The novel is showing that the world isn't painted in light colours and also not in dark ones. They are mixed in various shades of grey. I really recomend this novel. Good Job author. - Radek

5yr
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AmeraliaPrincess

So far, this is really good. You kind of get a lot of information in the beginning but this is essential background and useful once you move onto the later chapter. I absolutely love the world and the way the characters are structured. They have layers to them. I hope the author will continue writing and not drop it. You will surely have more reviews and views! Fighting Author!

5yr
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Oddity

If you are considering, if you should read this book - the answer is YES. You have here a brand new world and magical creatures. But story isn't centered around them. In the center there's a emotional struggle of our heroine. Of someone who was a villainess and realized, that what she was doing was bad. But things didn't go as planned and she became a stone beast - something that doesn't feel any emotions. But she still met new friends, similarly wounded people (not all of them were human). Here you have a very "human" MC, who is trying to deal with the past and is starting to experience new emotions- like love.

5yr
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miniac23

wow .. Author sama welcome back as you start updating the story.. .... ... i was Waiting for your return. well how many chapters are going to be in this novel?

5yr
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Linpeiqi_22

I think this story is flowing very well. I really like the development of the FL, and I am eager to see how her relationship progresses with the ML. I also like how you focus on the supporting characters because some authors just have them there as support to the leads, but it seems that here the supporting characters are given more agency and opportunity to develop on their own. I want to read more, so I really hope that the author will update soon. This story has so much potential, and it’s already become one of my favorites, so I’m giving it an overall of ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (even though there have not been any updates for 2 months😭)

5yr
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iWasDamned

this is real interesting don't drop it ) : .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................me likey

5yr
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0hanArtist

Pls continue this such a great story! Once the lead character is likeable it's really easy to read the whole narrative. Great writing and story progression, would recommend. The only catch is it's too short! Updates pls! Voted on this one

5yr
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sweetpea1972

Great development of the characters personality with the development of the story. Dear author, your work is impressive and I cannot wait to read more of your work.

5yr
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sweetpea1972

This us a gem in the making. I am in love with the fl and her badazzery.....characters all so their growth and development in these chapters so I feel comfortable with the changes happening. Dear author, thank you for a excellent read. I need this.

5yr
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SeraRose_otaku4era

Awesome!!! This novel is amazing, keep up the good work author. As expected of the intro about the novel, but I hope u will do an updating spree. I love this novel so much that I can't wait for the next chapter.

5yr
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melikachan

This is a great story line. I really love it.❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤💙❤

5yr
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Peoooony

Truly a gem! I recommend this to readers out there to read this. I love how the in your novel Author! lol how Devon and Cali somewhat ***** in their feelings but everyone besides them knows lol soooo cute!😍😍😍😍😍

5yr
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A_Serendipitous_1

The plot line is what hooked me. The story is fantastic and I’m excited to see where it goes. The characters are interesting and I’m a sucker for a good romance. However, the author may want to spend a little more time reviewing chapters or ask someone else to edit. Grammar aside (I recommend using Grammarly) I have noticed a lot of misused words such as “straight” rather than strength. With a little more editing this will be a riveting read.

5yr
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Shironoame

While the beginning is a little heavy with information, once it's all been established, the writing is clear with only a few mistakes here and there. The story is absolutely stunning and takes place in an intriguing world. There is a lot of potential for growth, and I'm excited for more. Seriously though. I will feed all my spirit stones as long as I'm fed updates in return! Ah, I'm starving!

5yr
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PetrichorAmor

So far, this is a very beautiful and touching story. It is not all what I imagined from the title, however. It contains a lot of the intricacies of human emotion and paints a somber kind of melancholy beauty on the world. I'm excited to see the comedic interactions and the growth the characters' relationships as the story progresses. Please continue writing, it's too good to be lost!

5yr
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