Reviews of Monster Integration by AnWan - Webnovel

I really like monster.Integration and something.I see that I don't really like is that I've just started on the first few 100 chapters of monster integration and there's never any guns in there.Even though guns are a perfect weapon that probably would be better weapons and bows before using bows in stay, I do like.This

A Disappointing Waste of Potential To the author: you had the opportunity to craft a fantastic story, but sadly, you squandered it. Spoiler Alert: This book titled Monster Integration promises an exciting premise where humans gain power by bonding with monsters. However, midway through, we discover that this integration is practically pointless—people on the Central Continent don’t even practice it. The protagonist (MC) had the potential to be truly unique. He can create his own inheritance and is supposedly powerful. Yet in every fight, the author inexplicably portrays him as weak and ineffective. Instead of utilizing his vast knowledge and skills, his sole aim seems to be absorbing the Grimm's essence—like a vampire thirsting for blood. Even after mastering advanced combat techniques and undergoing intense training, he repeatedly falls short in battle. Worse, the narrative constantly bemoans his lack of proper fighting techniques, despite all his training and achievements. The MC's supposed strengths feel superficial. He excels at torturing himself, cooking, and bathing—oh, and he trains endlessly, though the story rarely shows any meaningful payoff from it. Accompanying the MC are three incredibly powerful companions: two monsters and a hidden being. Despite their immense strength, they are relegated to the shadows, unable to assist him even during critical life-and-death battles. Their potential, much like the story itself, feels utterly wasted. The book also falters in its depiction of relationships. One moment, the MC is focused on getting stronger; the next, he’s distracted by someone’s appearance or shallow romantic thoughts. This inconsistency detracts from the narrative and makes character development feel hollow. Even the core concept of monster integration is poorly handled. In the beginning, the MC was dismissed from joining higher ranked organisations for being able to only integrate with one weak monster, as higher ranks typically allowed more integrations. His first monster that was originally weak supposedly took that opportunity permanently. However, later in the novel, when he "births" a new monster, this once-important limitation is conveniently forgotten, leaving a glaring inconsistency in the plot. Despite his first monster companion having fire-based abilities and achieving high levels of fire comprehension, the MC never uses fire meaningfully. They’re integrated, yet the MC can’t access or utilize her moves. In summary, this novel is a frustrating waste of time. The premise held promise, but poor execution, inconsistent character development, and a lack of coherent world-building make it a disappointing read. Save yourself the trouble and skip this one.

the story overall is readable, but it's very frustrating: 1 - starting with his first pet, and only one, in this story the first pet decide your talent your maximum level your speed of development, and here we find our MC chosing the weakest monster outthere as his starting one while having the choice of much much better ones, which limited him to a specialist and with the wickest talent. i read till 500 ch and to me if he chose anyother pet and used the ressources wasted on the current one he would have become OP, but no the mc should be a weakling. 2 - the moment he met his crush he started simping to her no dignity no nothing. so read at your risk

Even since MC learned healing It's just copy paste & repeat everytime MC helps someone using his own resources that person will get some kind hidden potential unlock than. MC get trapped or caputred than breakthrough and escape just repeat it every few chapters.

The story is quite good it's worth reading. But only if you are ready to experience a very badly written story. First grammar was bad then the author started writing wrong names of characters like around ch550 MC' s love interests was introduced named Rachel. She is the sister of MC's friend's girlfriend named Sarah . This writer wrote Sarah's name at many places where he should have written Rachel. After all those mindf*cks I am still reading this. I don't know why

I have read 3700+ chapters, honestly I don’t recommend you reading it it’s a waste of time you might ask why I reads 3700+ chapters and not giving up until now , will the start of the story is good and the events and progress is also good but when he ascends from his home world it’s kinda boring and repetitive events , slow progression in strength, lots of grammar mistakes , no new exiting events or anything. Just - need resources> enter ruins > fight and collect resources > add some hidden projects we don’t know anything about > progress a stage and repeat ( this cycle of action is started from early chapters till now ) then recent chapters he get kidnapped every 30+ chapters. No new event nothings. I gave up on hoping for something else

Just finished chapter 51 and left a comment, will leave it here as well as it fits the book so far, if he doesn’t fix it he’s a lazy writer. Onomatopoeia shouldn’t be in quotes by itself as it’s not considered speech, you can’t just put “cheering” if there is a cheering crowd because it implies someone spoke the word but if you put ‘The crowd was cheering’ by itself It would be correct so don’t put “laugh” as it means the hyenas are literally saying ‘laugh’ If trees are falling over I’m not going to keep repeating boom for every tree I might not mention it at all because nobody here is 2 years old and doesn’t know that big falling things go boom. Some might not know what a hyena sounds like so mention it once but that’s good enough most animals who aren’t ambush predators make sounds while attacking. Say something like; The cackling of the hyenas sent shivers down my spine as they surrounded and prepared to attack us, eyes glinting with amusement as they readied to play with their food. ( If you want to add the sounds then put the actual sound in the paragraph where you need it, you could start this first paragraph with HeeHeeHee! The cackling… A laugh is what it sounds similar to but it’s not, it is how they communicate) And maybe; One jumped at Bob from his blind side and he barely managed to dodge, sweat dripping down his back as the hyena attack passed by with a whoosh, Its claws lightly grazing his armour. (Even if it wasn’t a hyena but a made-up beast it will let the readers understand the creature's both terrifying and playful nature by themselves and it adds suspense and lets people understand the fear the character(s) feel towards them, if you want the beast to seem more powerful you could then change the end of the last paragraph to ‘It’s claws grazing his armour leaving four deep gashes’) Not “laugh” “laugh” “laugh” What is this? A comedy? I’m not laughing. (XD) When making fight scenes especially you need to give readers a sense of imagery that’ll lead to suspense/excitement/dread (or any feeling at all really), and any kind of repetition or just saying things like “laugh, clang, bang” repeatedly ( unless it’s a word spoken by the characters, like making a finger gun while launching your fireballs and saying “Bang” that’s fine) makes things boring. The same goes for any pets he might get, a dog doesn’t say ‘bark’ but it does bark. So say ‘The dog barked out of hunger’ (The dog is an example he doesn’t have a pet dog) A cannon goes boom but saying; The cannons lining the bastion roared like thunder as they repeatedly fired upon the ghost ships attacking the port, flaming balls of steel leaving trails of smoke in their wake. Sounds better than; The cannons on the bastion went boom, firing flaming balls as they hit the ghost ships attacking the port. It might not seem like much but these little differences will help keep your readers hooked as it adds a little spice and flavour that even they might not notice. (But mistakes are easily seen and criticized so as a writer you must be sure to learn from them) Also if English is not your first language or if your readers complain about the translation there are many free programs that can fix everything up, get one and find some friend(s) in your local writers' circle or someone else who is fluent with reading/writing in English to give it a look. Remember that writing is the same as fishing, to catch lots of fish (Readers) you need a good bait and an even better hook to keep them here, or they’ll spit out the hook and leave. I’ll finish the novel over time as I enjoy the concept but I’m taking a break from it as I’m a bit annoyed.