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this kind of sucks. i mean the idea is cool but the execution was a little off. there were way too many exclmation marks and it just feels like a power fantasy. dont get ke wrong i love those but only when done good. every other paragraph someone yelling about how amazing he is and how cool he is. dont like the mc either just cause.
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************* Good Worka! ************** ****************************************** *************And I need more! *********** ******************************************
Good fanfic mate.expecting more chapters..............................................all the best 😍!!!!!!!!! N hope you don't drop novel!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a good fanfic 😊 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Started promising but i am losing my patience with this novel. Till chapter 20ish a really enjoyable read but then we get introduced to half chapter about not even the mc just always "the group this..the group that...". And the other half about some shady "buy stock" links from the author. Will give this novel another 10 or so pages/chapter and if that doesnt get better i will drop it.(currently chapter 36 where a group of 3-16 Year olds create a werwolf cure and magic artifacts 🙄 *eyeroll*) The grammar itself is great and i cant nag about that but we are currently at a point where the MC and his child / friend group doesnt even need to go to school because they "can already do magic of higher classes". At author ->this isnt a personal attack, it is what i think works great or wrong in this novel at the moment.
Interesting Story So far I Hope it Will continue✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧(◡ ω ◡)(◠‿・)—☆(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。(~￣³￣)~＼(^o^)／
Its good I like it I hope to see more of it in the future! I like how Ron is smart instead of being stupid like in the OG story... Its always nice to see.
this kind of sucks. i mean the idea is cool but the execution was a little off. there were way too many exclmation marks and it just feels like a power fantasy. dont get ke wrong i love those but only when done good. every other paragraph someone yelling about how amazing he is and how cool he is. dont like the mc either just cause.
💘💖💗💗💗🌺🌸🌸🌸🌸🌺🌺🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌷🌷🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🌷🌷🌷🌷🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌺🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🌷🌷🌷🌷🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌺🌺🌺🌺🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺🌸🌸🌺🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌺🌺🌺🌺🌸🌸🌸🌺🌺🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌷🌺🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
************* Good Worka! ************** ****************************************** *************And I need more! *********** ******************************************
Good fanfic mate.expecting more chapters..............................................all the best 😍!!!!!!!!! N hope you don't drop novel!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's a good fanfic 😊 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Started promising but i am losing my patience with this novel. Till chapter 20ish a really enjoyable read but then we get introduced to half chapter about not even the mc just always "the group this..the group that...". And the other half about some shady "buy stock" links from the author. Will give this novel another 10 or so pages/chapter and if that doesnt get better i will drop it.(currently chapter 36 where a group of 3-16 Year olds create a werwolf cure and magic artifacts 🙄 *eyeroll*) The grammar itself is great and i cant nag about that but we are currently at a point where the MC and his child / friend group doesnt even need to go to school because they "can already do magic of higher classes". At author ->this isnt a personal attack, it is what i think works great or wrong in this novel at the moment.
Interesting Story So far I Hope it Will continue✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧✧◝(⁰▿⁰)◜✧(ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧(◡ ω ◡)(◠‿・)—☆(◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。(~￣³￣)~＼(^o^)／
Its good I like it I hope to see more of it in the future! I like how Ron is smart instead of being stupid like in the OG story... Its always nice to see.