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grammar needs some serious upgrades. the story's going along with plot so that's a negative for me. other then that it seems okay if you can ignore the issues with the sentence structure
plz make more chapters plz. I really like this novel plz dont drop this novel plz ffg g ffg gf hff f ffg j.g f j.g f gdx ffg he dyfdtrrgffyfffgf
just... i have my reasons but i am lazy to say so ye and i hate this 140 character's shit. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
it's good at first but shit it always stick to the original story and i can't see the lazy character at all his personality changed way too often and i'm only at chapter uhhhhhhhh......... 16! yeah i'm at chapter 16 and the writing is getting ****ed up like seriously crazy ****ed up!!!!!!
dear auther-kun great book so far very intertaining story. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I wonder what's going to happen.🙃🙂😊
The story is good and well balanced iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitiiiitititititititititititiititititiyiyitiititititititititiiyyiiyiy
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
-grammar errors -changing the characters gender be using her or she instead of he or his -unnecesary words on some sentence -some of the chapters needs some rewriting -i hope the chapter releases at least 2 or 3 a week (i just hope maybe author will stop again) -i dont have problem so far on story development
Good work !!!!!!!!!!!!! And i need more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ps: my english su.......................... [:-) Haahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
From chapter. 1-7 almost nothing changes between the story nothing the mc only talks the whole time and it’s rare it’s very close to the same story that this novel is suppose to be a fanfic . I mean I’m just angry that nothing changes it’s about 97% the exact same story suppose to be a fanfic of .I just feel I wasted my time reading this . No I’m not mad no I’m disappointed.
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Sense the world is already established its easier to wright the story so if the writer could get the story away from rimuru for a bit it would be good
This fanfiction got lot of potential because there is domestic management when rimuru build a town soon a country. And there is diciple too you can just make an academy of magic or something. Because if it like that could open many possible plot
It is ok but not that great at this moment But who knows maybe it will become a great one but could also become trash this will depend one how the story will continue
I really like this take on it. The lack of actual romance in the original always bugged me. I also love the MC, his laziness is just awesome.
I like this story and I love the premise and I feel like the way he's doing is good but maybe cuz it's already established overall I say I enjoyed the read
anything about slime story is my favourite, and i hope you as the author keep the story up to date and don't abandon it since i quite enjoy you fan fiction
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Milim nava and shuna definitely need to be in the harem. .......................................................................................................
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The story uses fate powers which don’t really work with this universe in addition it isn’t really that entertaining and the guy makes no difference to the story in fact it seems to be going in the direction of the mc becoming a subordinate of the slime tbh the slime has far more potential than the mc. Without the predator skill the mc will be weaker unless author adds some convenience power to give him a power up I’d like to see new things introduced not just rewriting the original but with a weaker mc
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The story is very good, but it lacks to explain because the MC is lazy. The sad thing is they want to make a modern man become woman after being reborn as slime. The MC is a mere assistant in this story, which makes the story a bit boring, but the good thing is that the author does not have to worry about plot, so far he has not changed anything. There will be neither romance nor harem because the MC is a lazy, and the most impressive thing is that he did not use the wolves as a pillow (he's too lazy to think).
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Finally someone make fanfic for my favorite slime 😁😁😁 please keep it up...it's new fanfic world so far i know there rarely use this 👍👍 Update more chapter please, it was really urgently needed!! 😋😋
I'm looking forward to how this story turns out. It's really interesting so I hope you don't drop it. My only concern would be chapter release... could we somehow increase it? It's okay if you can't, just actually releasing chapters is great :)
It has potential hopefully it doesn’t go down like all the other novels I read. I recommend it for everyone and don’t drop please-tggtbthyhujnjnhghgju
This is a really good fan-fic! The Author seamlessly integrated the mc into the story, letting the important plot happen, while having the slight twist of a new character. Overall amazing!
grammar needs some serious upgrades. the story's going along with plot so that's a negative for me. other then that it seems okay if you can ignore the issues with the sentence structure
plz make more chapters plz. I really like this novel plz dont drop this novel plz ffg g ffg gf hff f ffg j.g f j.g f gdx ffg he dyfdtrrgffyfffgf
just... i have my reasons but i am lazy to say so ye and i hate this 140 character's shit. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
it's good at first but shit it always stick to the original story and i can't see the lazy character at all his personality changed way too often and i'm only at chapter uhhhhhhhh......... 16! yeah i'm at chapter 16 and the writing is getting ****ed up like seriously crazy ****ed up!!!!!!
dear auther-kun great book so far very intertaining story. I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I wonder what's going to happen.🙃🙂😊
The story is good and well balanced iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiitiiiitititititititititititiititititiyiyitiititititititititiiyyiiyiy
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
-grammar errors -changing the characters gender be using her or she instead of he or his -unnecesary words on some sentence -some of the chapters needs some rewriting -i hope the chapter releases at least 2 or 3 a week (i just hope maybe author will stop again) -i dont have problem so far on story development
Good work !!!!!!!!!!!!! And i need more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ps: my english su.......................... [:-) Haahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
From chapter. 1-7 almost nothing changes between the story nothing the mc only talks the whole time and it’s rare it’s very close to the same story that this novel is suppose to be a fanfic . I mean I’m just angry that nothing changes it’s about 97% the exact same story suppose to be a fanfic of .I just feel I wasted my time reading this . No I’m not mad no I’m disappointed.
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Sense the world is already established its easier to wright the story so if the writer could get the story away from rimuru for a bit it would be good
This fanfiction got lot of potential because there is domestic management when rimuru build a town soon a country. And there is diciple too you can just make an academy of magic or something. Because if it like that could open many possible plot
It is ok but not that great at this moment But who knows maybe it will become a great one but could also become trash this will depend one how the story will continue
I really like this take on it. The lack of actual romance in the original always bugged me. I also love the MC, his laziness is just awesome.
I like this story and I love the premise and I feel like the way he's doing is good but maybe cuz it's already established overall I say I enjoyed the read
anything about slime story is my favourite, and i hope you as the author keep the story up to date and don't abandon it since i quite enjoy you fan fiction
Tiết lộ Spoiler Milim nava and shuna definitely need to be in the harem. .......................................................................................................
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém Harém
The story uses fate powers which don’t really work with this universe in addition it isn’t really that entertaining and the guy makes no difference to the story in fact it seems to be going in the direction of the mc becoming a subordinate of the slime tbh the slime has far more potential than the mc. Without the predator skill the mc will be weaker unless author adds some convenience power to give him a power up I’d like to see new things introduced not just rewriting the original but with a weaker mc
Tiết lộ Spoiler The story is very good, but it lacks to explain because the MC is lazy. The sad thing is they want to make a modern man become woman after being reborn as slime. The MC is a mere assistant in this story, which makes the story a bit boring, but the good thing is that the author does not have to worry about plot, so far he has not changed anything. There will be neither romance nor harem because the MC is a lazy, and the most impressive thing is that he did not use the wolves as a pillow (he's too lazy to think).
Tiết lộ Spoiler Finally someone make fanfic for my favorite slime 😁😁😁 please keep it up...it's new fanfic world so far i know there rarely use this 👍👍 Update more chapter please, it was really urgently needed!! 😋😋
I'm looking forward to how this story turns out. It's really interesting so I hope you don't drop it. My only concern would be chapter release... could we somehow increase it? It's okay if you can't, just actually releasing chapters is great :)
It has potential hopefully it doesn’t go down like all the other novels I read. I recommend it for everyone and don’t drop please-tggtbthyhujnjnhghgju
This is a really good fan-fic! The Author seamlessly integrated the mc into the story, letting the important plot happen, while having the slight twist of a new character. Overall amazing!