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I really like the novel theirs just a lot of issues with the fact the author keeps messing with calling the mc male and female by forgetting or putting he or she in front of it so its confusing me a bit whether the mc is male or female . Their is also a lot of grammar and sentence structure mistakes but its readable I really think his power is cool and I wanna see where this story goes though
Eu gosto, e eu queria dar uma ideia para o autor: faça ele participar da guerra de Marineford e quando o Barba Branca estiver a beira da morte o protagonista vai lá e rouba a sombra dele. Para assim ele ficar totalmente overpower.
So far great start interesting take on fruit and character development but one thing i have to ask sometime you refer to the character as a man and woman which is it
Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
Great start I hope 🤞 to see more chapters because I don’t see allot of one piece novel this one has potential please keep writing ✍️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
a great story for one piece i hope you return pls pls pls it's a great story and should continue to become greater pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls also can he take yami yami no mi it's and kage kage no mi could be great together
I really like the novel theirs just a lot of issues with the fact the author keeps messing with calling the mc male and female by forgetting or putting he or she in front of it so its confusing me a bit whether the mc is male or female . Their is also a lot of grammar and sentence structure mistakes but its readable I really think his power is cool and I wanna see where this story goes though
Eu gosto, e eu queria dar uma ideia para o autor: faça ele participar da guerra de Marineford e quando o Barba Branca estiver a beira da morte o protagonista vai lá e rouba a sombra dele. Para assim ele ficar totalmente overpower.
So far great start interesting take on fruit and character development but one thing i have to ask sometime you refer to the character as a man and woman which is it
Harém? 😍😍 Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. Very good the novel recommends to everyone to follow, you will not regret it. 😎😎
Great start I hope 🤞 to see more chapters because I don’t see allot of one piece novel this one has potential please keep writing ✍️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
a great story for one piece i hope you return pls pls pls it's a great story and should continue to become greater pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls also can he take yami yami no mi it's and kage kage no mi could be great together